II - MaNan FF : Life With Nandini [Link to Chapter 40 - PG 148] 29 AUG

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anjali das

@anji666

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Posted: 10 years ago

#891

awesome update...lvd the whole prt...6 days without each othr...it was really a vry bd phse for thm...

the way manik was taking care of her though he was miles away...it rlly touched my hrt...sooo finlly he cldn't stay away from her...and cme at hr plce...sooo loving...and whn she saw him her face was lightn up...lvd it...

waiting 4 ur nxt prt...cntinue sooonnn

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#892

These words just stroke a chord with me, how simply you explained that love is everything, if it causes person to be happy in love, it also brings pain and grief cause your in love.

"Caustic and Sarcastic case it was; as how a destination that is considered a heaven on earth; for her, without him; had turned into the netherworld; Tophet what they say; the sublime snowy Gulmarg valley giving the appearance of Niflheim and the surrounding superlunary niveous massif gave the impression of Abaddon and Abezithibou standing with an army of other fallen angels. Sigh! Naked truth it is; Love does wonders - Changes gorgeous into hideous and vice versa. "

I dont know why but I feel there is so much hidden pain in your writing, maybe someday...

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Pragya

@pragyas1192

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Posted: 10 years ago

#893

Such an heart warming chp with ol kinda love emotion... 👏
Super awesomeee 😊

Worth waiting for ur update...looking frwrd to ur nxt update...

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anu

@anupandey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#894

I'm speechless right nw
The best update till now
So much love so much care
I Srsly can't define this chapter in wrld
U Srsly killed it
Made me emotional
Right nw no wrds to utter
Just two wrds
Thnk u
For writing this part
Nd making it so beautiful special nd memorable

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#895

It is always a pleasure to read about Manan from your words... everything was very well written

the phone conversation, then Nandini room with all the accessories... aww how loving husband she has... really felt very sorry when the phone tower was not there already they were in pain of not seeing each other for a week and not this...

finally Manik landed there it was so touching... and their romance as usual hooottt...

very nice lovely update...

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#896

Finally! They are together with eachother, waise afterall knowing our impulsive Malhotra I was wondering that how did he control himself 12 days long from not going to her. But my babies did it and for this suffered a lot too.
Very well written dear, you are amazing, god bless you continue soon and take care.

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Alishakhna1998

@Alishakhna1998

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Posted: 10 years ago

#897

awesome update
u nailed it

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mounicareddyc

@mounicareddyc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#898

Im jst speechless...such an awsme uodate,i hav no words to describe hw awsme it is...

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nikki.smiley95

@nikki.smiley95

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Posted: 10 years ago

#899

That was amazinggg yrrr 👍🏼
Too good it was 😊
I literally had tears in my eyes yrrr..firstly of sadness then of happiness 😃
They always prove that they are one...we cant even say that they are two bodies, bcoz they can feel physical as well as mental pain of each other so well...hats off to manan 😊
And hats off to you, for being such an amazing author...too gud dear 😉
Thanx so much for pm
Tc