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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI

Nice update dear. Or i hope to sid ki misunderstanding jaldi dor kare gi. Love u dear.

don't worry ho jaygi.. don't worry I'm trying to show there Tom nd Jerry kind of relation :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice song...
loved it...
update regularly...
plzzz...

can I give u any suggestion...????
regarding song...
if u don't mind...

u should take " tu hai ke nahi " instead of this song...
its nice though...

bt just thought of this song...
nd it will perfectly fit on the situation...

sryyy... if u feel bad...
m just giving my suggestion...

I love ur ff... nd u knw that... right... :-) :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti_soniii

nice song...
loved it...
update regularly...
plzzz...

can I give u any suggestion...????
regarding song...
if u don't mind...

u should take " tu hai ke nahi " instead of this song...
its nice though...

bt just thought of this song...
nd it will perfectly fit on the situation...

sryyy... if u feel bad...
m just giving my suggestion...

I love ur ff... nd u knw that... right... :-) :-)

I update regularly dear atleast 2 updates I regularly update.. yes u can suggest any song any tym I'm very bad in selecting songs..i was just watching this song few days back so I remembered only this,song so I selected this one haha.. tu hai k nhi from which movie ?? u can inbox mee any tym :D no I don't feel bad.. I'm happy u guys suggesting mee sumthing related to story ..yes I knw u luv this story :D,I too luv this story hehe..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sup update BR]Loved it
Update the next part soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nara26

Sup update BR]Loved it
Update the next part soon 😊 😊 😊

thanku :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART- 99

It was 8 in the morning.. manan were still in each other embrace sleeping peacefully.. On the other hand alvira searching them before.. Anyone caught them together red handed.. She was abt to go on terrace to search them... But Ishika. Called her in kitchen for help..on the other hand chachi nd namrta went to terrace nd saw manan sleeping.. Together.. They didn't get angry but had a smile on there faces!!
Chachi- what to do with these two..?? they ar so crazy for each other!!
Namrata- should I wake them up.
??
Chachi- no let sleep lyk this,together.. They will feel embarass if we wake them!! Namrata- ok as u say!
They left from there...
On other syd..Alvira was helping ishika in kitchen.. But her mind was struck on manan how to help them out..she was looking stressed out..she tried to escape from kitchen.. But ishika caught her.. Nd gave her more kitchen work..she slap her head..after few minutes badimummy went,to terrace..nd saw manan sleeping together..
Badimummy pov'
"haye mere bache nazar na lage kisiki.. She took there" ballaiye " hey babaji indono ko aise he hamesha sath rakhna
Pov end
She too left from there..
As she left from there pooja jai come there they,were fighting with each other for some unknown reason nd they saw manan sleeping together...
Pooja- arey yeh dono yaha kya,kr rhe hai..
Jai- dikh ni rha so rhe hai!!
Pooja- wo to mujhe dikh rha hai.. Pr aise kyun so rhe hai koi kya sochega..
Jai- baki to kisika pta nhi tum jaroor kuch galt sochogi..
Pooja- dekho tum jyada,mat bola karo..
Jai - mai kuch bolta he kaha hu.. Jb dekho tum hi bolti ho!!
Pooja- shut up bakwas bnd karo apni.. What do u mean by that..?? Mai kya itni buri hu??
Jai- meri itni himmat tumko bura bolu?? Na na tum to chudailo ki malika sherawat ho.. Nd ran from there..
Pooja- what!!!! Tum ko to mai dekh lugi...nd abt these two this is not good I think I should talk to dad abt these two...
Then she too left from there!!
Finally alvira got opportunity she escaped from kitchen nd ran upstairs..she hold her head as she saw manan sleeping together..
Alvira- thankgod indono ko kisine ni dekha... Mujhe pareshan krke dekho kaise so re hai.. abhi btati hu dono ko..
She saw water tank on terrace she filled mug with water nd throw it on themm..
Nandani- scream in sleep mummy bachao mummy bachao..
Manik- to wake up nd saw nandani screaming closed eyes..he look at Alvira who was laughing lyk hell..he shake his head in disbelief..then shake nandani shoulder to wake her up..
Manik- Nandani relax kuch ni hua..
on the other hand alvira still laughing..
nandani- open her eyes frst look at manik then at Alvira last at herself she was full drenched.. She understood what just happened..
nandani-angry) ruk ja alvira ki bachi abhi btati hu tujhe she,tried to get up from floor..but slip due to water scattered on floor end up falling in Manik lap..they had an eyelock..
Alvira- start laughing loud.. But stop as she saw manan lost in each,other..fr shuru ho gye,dono..she thought..
She called them..
Ohh hello im going down..tum dono ka ho jay to neeche aajana..
Manan- no response..
Alvira- walk away from there in disbelief...
On the other hand. Manik nandani lost in each other forgetting where,they ar..
Manik- caressed nandani face with tip of his fingers.. With hand he was holding her waist..with other he was caressing her face.. He saw some strands of hair struck on her wet face he blowed,air from his mouth to remove them..but they were as stubborn as his Nandani not ready to move a inch away from her face..at last he used her fingers to remove them.. Nandani start laughing on his childish act..
Manik- why are u laughing?? im looking lyk cartoon to u??
Nandani- no.. She pulled his both cheeks ur sho sweet.. She kissed his cheeks..
Manik- playfully) he pointed his finger on lips.. Yaha bhi..
Nandani-nooo!! U already get enough.yesterday nd I didn't stop u.
Manik- noo.. I just want one nd wo to kl tha na what abt today!! He pull her close to himself tried to kiss her...
They heared chachi was calling Nandani name loudly...
Nandani- petrified She push him .. Nd get up from his lap..) nd ran downstairs
Manik-nandani!! Listen he made annoyed face nd after few sec he too come down stairs..in hall saw everybody ready to leave somewhere out..chachi giving instructions to Nandani nd she is nodding her head in yes lyk a good gal..nandani look at manik...
Chachi- smiled at manik.. patted his cheeks take care of nandani she said in low voice.. then they all left from there..sidharth gave him stern look he thought what happened to him now before leaving alvira whisper sumthing in nandani ears..
Alvira- enjoy ur free tym with manik jiju..Nandani shocked listening to her words.she turn red.alvira winked at them..then she too left from there..
Manik- gave her confused look to alvira..
To,which she just smiles in return nd walk out from house.. Manik then look at nandani..
Who was just standing there looking at door with red face..
She,went to her room manik followed her.
Manik- Nandani sb kaha gye?? Nd why u didn't go with them??
Nandani-shopping..nd I don't lyk shopping.. so I didn't go with them.. Nd they leave u with mee..so that I don't stay here alone..
Manik- smirks) wow what a start of day u nd mee alone..he stretched his arms..
Nandani- look at him in disbelief.. Don't even think abt it!! She start walking backward.
Manik- smirks) im just taking care of u,nicely properly. he start walking toward her..
Nandani- shutup !! I can understand ur each nd every word..she was fast she ran inside washroom nd lock it!!
Manik- Nandani!!!! Annoyed
Nandani- u go to ur room nd get ready nd let mee take shower peacefully...
Manik- ok.. He left in his room..
Nandani- smiles,pagal.. She remove her clothes nd stand under shower..
On other syd manik was brushing his teeth..suddenly he recalled something nd walk back in nandani room...nd knock at her washroom door..
Nandani- opened her washroom door nd peeped,her head out from washroom. .nd look at,manik!!
Nandani- what??
Manik-walk inside washroom...
Nandani look at him in shock..she was still behind door manik was only able to see her face..
Nandani- manik this is washroom nt ur playground Plz go... Cant u see.. Im taking,shower..
Manik- mischievously) no I can't see,so im here..
Nandani- rolls her eyes plz Manik go..
Manik- why,?? Nd why r u hiding from mee??
Nandani- bcz mujhe..mujhe sharam ari hai she look straight now go..
Manik- actually no..(nandani gave him shocked look what kyun??) I remembered something.. U remember palampur trip..
(Nandani gave him confuse look) u said once we get married we can take shower together..
Nandani- eyes got widen no Manik..
Manik- yes Nandani common now I can take shower with u..he took a step ahead..
Nandani- no Manik plz koi aa jayga..!!
Manik with one hand hold door with other hand grab nandani arm..
Manik-calmly) we ar home alone koi ni ayga come.. He shut the door nd drag nandani under shower..
Nandani- closed her eyes tight.. Not open her eyes..as manik turn on.shower nd his fingers randomly start to move on her body.. They were all wet..
Manik- softly) open ur eyes Nandani!!!
Nandani- shakes her head in no..
Manik- smiles) I'll force u then..
Nandani- stood there lyk a statue with closed eyes..
Manik pinned her to wall..water was sliding on there body.. he lock her both hands in his Suck her neck in his mouth..then softly byte on her neck...
Nandani instantly open her eyes nd look at him..manik to look at her with winning smile on his face..
Nandani- u never listen to mee...
Manik- smiles) nd suck her corner of lip..
Nandani- hold his face in her hands
Manik hands were on her waist...
They were abt to kiss but then someone knock on door!!!

Precap- keep guessing :D

Author note- guys ur free to give mee any suggestions any tym just pm mee.. :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahaha awesome update
Waiting for Sid s reaction
Im sure we will have a super fun update
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART- 100

Nandani look at door.. she was horrified..
Manik- was annoyed he rested his head on nandani shoulder in frustration..
Nandani- hato manik let mee check..
Manik- lifted his head up..) NOO (he said lil loudly)
Nandani- keep her hand on his mouth..second hand index on her lips sshh..sbko btana hai kya?? Ur taking shower with mee!! She push,him in,syd.. hato dekhne do..
Manik-,pulled her back..
Again someone knock on door..
Nandani- manik!!!! She gave him irritated look!!nd forcibly move out from his grip.. Wear bathrob..
She leaned her ears on washroom door..
Nandani- kaun hai??
Voice- massi its mee atharv..!!
Nandani hold her head..nd told manik to not to move out from washroom till she signaled him.. Manik unwantedly node his head in yes..
Nandani open door nd walk out from washroom !!
Saw atharv standing near door.. He was looking sleepy..
Nandani- what ar u doing here?? I thought u also went with everyone on shopping!!
Atharv- what?? Everyone went on shopping without mee..this is not fair!! I also want to go on shopping!! I want to buy gift for jenny..
Nandani- confused) who is jenny??
Atharv- my friend I want to buy gft for her!! I promised her,i will brought a gft for her from shimla!!
Nandani-don't worry we have 2 days more u can go with mee on shopping.. then we will purchase gft for her from there..
Atharv- bcm happy) pakka massi
Nandani- yes.. Now go nd brush ur teeth..nd get ready Ok
Atharv - hug her I lov u Massi ur the best.. Nandani hug her back.. Atharv kiss her on cheeks nd left from there..
Manik - saw him kissing on Nandani cheek.. ) wow he can kiss her but I can't kiss her..this is not fair..
He come out from washroom.. Nandani lock the door nd turn around.. Manik was standing behind her.. She get scared for a sec..
Nandani- manik u scared mee..( Next moment manik keep his hand on her mouth..) Nandani ask him from eyes what happened to him..
Manik- he can kiss u.. But when I want to kiss u.. U start blabbering nhi manik not now.. Nhi manik koi aa jayga..!! This is not fair!!!
Nandani remove his hands from her mouth.. Nd start laughing...
Manik- annoyed) now what happen to u?? nandani- laughing) Manik malhotra ur jealous from 8 yr old boy.. I can't believe it...
Manik' - im not jealous!! From him
Nandani- yes u ar!! She start walking toward wardrobe..but manik pull her back twirl her around rested her back on wardrobe nd his entire weight on her.
Nandani- was out of breath as manik bring his lips close to her..)
Manik- if anybody try to kiss u... i will definitely get jealous..he whisper near her lips..
Nandani- but he is a kid..manik..
Manik-but he can kiss u anytym but u scold mee if try to do it..he made puppy face..
Nandani- roll her eyes..nd kiss him on cheek,now happy she asked him..
Manik- no I want here too indicating his finger on other syd of cheek..
Nandani kiss him on other syd of cheek
Nandani- now??
Manik- here!! (indicating his,finger on forehead)
Nandani- laugh )ok !! (Nd kissed him on his forehead..) now (she again asked him)
Manik- pointed his finger on eyes) here
Nandani- one by one kissed,his,both eyes.) now.??
Manik- here) pointed his,finger on,lips here,too
Nandani- smirks) ur bcmng so naughty day by day nd gave him quick peck on lips.. Happy?? Now
Manik- now its my turn..he start kissing her on neck..
Nandani- manik.. she push him.not now later .Now plz go..
Manik- pakka!!
Nandani- annoyed) I said na!! Now plz go to ur room..
Manik- ok he kissed her on cheek nd left from there..
Nandani- smiles in disbelief..nd open her wardrobe nd start searching for her clothes.. Manik came back running..nd pulled out red colour anarkali suit for her.
Nandani- manik!!.uuu
Manik- wear this..it suits u..nd red is my fav colur..he winked at her.. Nd kissed her nose tip nd ran from there..
Nandani- smiles at his craziness.. Nd look at her dress which manik choose for her.. Nd went to washroom..
After 20 minutes nandani came out from her room wearing same dress which manik choose for her.. Atharv was sitting on dinning table was eating apple..
Atharv- wow,massi hot,lg rhe ho..Manik bhaiya to aap ko dekh k clean bold ho jayge..
Nandani- blush) shutup nd eat ur apple..
Atharv- ok!!
Meanwhile manik to came out from his room..nd look at nandani. she was struggling with her duppata..which is struck in her bangles.. Same bangles which he bought for her.. His lips curved into smile.. He hold her hand nd help her..to free her duppata..he look at atharv who was looking into cellphone..he took it as opportunity nd kiss her hand..
Nandani- blush) nd pull out her hand..from his..
Nd look at atharv who was looking into her cellphone..
Nandani- what ar u doing??
Atharv- trying to call!!
Nandani- call whom??
Atharv- jenny!!

Precap- Nandani bcm suspicious :P

Author note- cmnt guys hw is it??




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishyy

Lol I'm sure Sid hoga 😆

nhi wo ni hai :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimanika7

Hahaha awesome update
Waiting for Sid s reaction
Im sure we will have a super fun update

:P sid nhi hai but yup funny jaroor hoga :D

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