THREAD 2 FF_MANAN_MADLY_IN_LOVE. PART 119 - PAGE 146 - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome fabulous wonderful update

He just loved it when she is so close to him and lol he called her petu as she eats alot so instead of taking her home he stopped at The hotel

Omg the look on waiters face after taking order from her when she said take order from manik as well so hilarious

Bingo he saw them together and if she won't tell he will find out

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing
Ur update r always lovely
Next part as soon as u can coz I LOVE UR FANFICTION 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous updates
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
To bhai ne bahen ko bf k sath dekh liya acha huwa use roshni k bare main pata nahi hai warna sid ko is bar to hospital jane se koi nahi bacha sakta tha.
Nice update dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love it...
u stood by on my expectations...
its beautiful , bold , sexy , cute and sensuous...
bt not valgar at all...
hats off... superb...

I just love the way u write...
bt plz...
don't drag that brother sister love... between this cute adorable couple...
just end this brother sister part...
I want MANAN... only MANAN...
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART - 98

They came back farmhouse.. Luckily no one was in hall. So they direct went to there rooms..Nandani changed into night dress.. She was abt to sleep.. But alvira jump on her..
Alvira- how was ur date??? She ask with grin..
Nandani-it,was ok.. we went to hotel for dinner, ab,plz utregi neeche!
Alvira- haww bs dinner or kuch ni.. maine aunty ko itna ptaya bs isliye?? ki tu bs dinner,kr kr agyi!! Petu.
Nandani- gave,her a look what do u,mean by that??
Alvira- it means,im calling u petu!!
Nandani- ruk btati hu tujhe!! She took pillow nd start hitting.her..alvira did the same.. they start fighting with pillows.. Then end up falling on bed laughing lyk maniac..
They,were still laughing when nandani cell beeped..she cheeked her ph,it was manik msg calling her on terrace..she excused herself nd ran upstairs.. Manik was sitting on swing playing guitar with closed eyes..he stop as he,hear,some one foot steps coming close to him..he knw who it is..he hold her hand nd pull her in his lap.
Nd then opened his eyes. To look at her...
Nandani- was,looking at him with amused face.. ) how u knw im right behind u??
Manik- I can smell u..he brush his lower lip on her lips...
Nandani- keep her hand on his lips..) im tired plz not now..she rested her head on his shoulder..
Manik -kissed her forehead..) ok
Anything else??
Nandani- hmm ur song..
Manik- ok my love..I called u here for that only.(he pull her tight in his embrace..Nandani hugged his stomach tight.. Manik pick up his guitar start playing..Nandani was still in his lap..
Manik-singing)
Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
(nandani lifted,her head nd look at him. Nd manik look at her)
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Saya bhi tera mein
Hone na doon juda.
Maine theh kar liya
(he keep his guitar aside nd hug her tight)
Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe..
(Manik look in her eyes)
Bas haq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe tere jism pe
(manik brush her fingers on her arms nandani blush she stand up from his lap nd walk ahead) (manik kept looking at her)
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
(nandani turn around nd rested her back on wall looking down floor with slight smile on her face)
Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
(manik start walking toward her nd stand infront of without touching her lock her between his arms continue singing)
Yaadon mein tujhko rakhoon
Baatein bhi teri karoon
Itna deewana hoon tera
Ho..o...
(he teased her with his breath nandani turn her face other syd blushing nd smiling)(manik hold her chin nd turn her face towwrd himself)
Raaton mein jaaga karoon
Din bhar bhatakta rahu
Main toh yahan se bus wahan
Aaa.a..
(Nandani eyes bcm moist)(Manik start walking backward)
Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe..
Bas haq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe tere jism pe
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
(nandani ran to him nd hug him with full force)
Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Aa..aa..
(Manik hugged her tight lock her in his strong arms)
Baahon mein tujhko rakhoon
Dhadkan mein teri sunoon
Aa itna nazdik aa zara
Ho
(Nandani look at him then rested her head on his chest)
..jisme duaaein rahein
Hur dum wafaaein rahein
Du tujhko aisa ik jahan
(they start walking still in each other embrace manik hands around her back nd shoulder nandani Hands around his back nd stomach her head on his chest manik head over her head)(they sat on floor taking support of wall nandani between his legs still in each other embrace same way nandani head on his chest manik chin on her head)
Tere ishq pe..
Tere waqt pe..
(Nandani close her eyes)
Bas haq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe tere jism pe
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Bas haq hai ik mera
Main toh bas teri chahat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri qurbat mein
Chahoon rehna sada
Saya bhi tera mein
Hone na doon juda..
(Manik check her she was sleeping)
Maine..theh kar liya..
( he took a sigh.. Pull her close to himself.. Kissed her over head.. nd slept)
They both slept in each other embraces..


Precap- next morning...:P

Author note- cmnt gyz hw is it???

Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shruti_soniii

I love it...
u stood by on my expectations...
its beautiful , bold , sexy , cute and sensuous...
bt not valgar at all...
hats off... superb...

I just love the way u write...
bt plz...
don't drag that brother sister love... between this cute adorable couple...
just end this brother sister part...
I want MANAN... only MANAN...

thanku thanku so much :D ok :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI

To bhai ne bahen ko bf k sath dekh liya acha huwa use roshni k bare main pata nahi hai warna sid ko is bar to hospital jane se koi nahi bacha sakta tha.

Nice update dear.

yups :P but sid ko to ab misunderstanding ho gyi na :P
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Fabulous updates
Loved it
Update the next part soon

thanku updated :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta...

Amazing

Ur update r always lovely
Next part as soon as u can coz I LOVE UR FANFICTION😊

thanku so much dear :)

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