The Devil in Boots - Manan ff NOTE page 26 - Page 14

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soothu thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
plz update,,,,,,,,,,r u forget us
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey!!!am bavk with another part. but am really diapointed wih the response. if you guys are not liking the story then please do tell me i'll discontinue this ss.
part 6:

manik didnt knew how to react. his mom knew nandini and so did nandini. the trio was sitting around the dining table waiting for david to come. "so how are you?" asked nandini casually sipping the juice and looking around the room. 'everything is the same' she murmered to herself but manik heard it. he was too confused to ask anythng. "am fine. how are you? its been quite a while we havent seen you" asked leena in a slightly relaxed voice. she knew nandini havent said anything to manik. "uncle nahi aayi abhi tak" nandini asked absent mindedly looking at manik who was in deep confusion. "i have called him, he sid he'll be here in a hour. manik sow heer room and house go on" leena asked manik and eyed nandini to clear some of hs confusions. she slightly nooded and asked manik to lead the way.

"so this is my room" manik opened the room and moved aside to let nandini in. his room was not one of those lavish rooms but it was very classy and neatly kept. "wow!! its too neat for a boy's room" said nandini in a teasing tone. "i love my things to be kept neatly" said manik leaving nandini rooted to her place. 'i love my things to be kept neatly and you know that dont u nandu' 'stop there, dnt run!!! you'll have to pay for this nandini' memories started t flash infron of her making her teary eyed. manik flicked his fingers infront of her eyes breaking her from her chain of thoughts. seeing her teary manik panicked. An unknown pain filled his heart and his hands invoulantarily rose to her cheeks to wipe the tears that fell from her eyes. as his fingers touched her pale skin both of their hearts started beating fast and an unspoken bond was created.

it was like the lost pieces of a puzzle was finally found. it was perfect.both of them was lost in each others eyes as their lips were just inches apart. their lips met and it was the most natural thing thet had ever happened to them. their lips moving in sync with each other, their breath mingled, heart beating as one. maniks hold on nandini tightened as the kiss grew passionate and deep. manik parted her lps slowly and enterd her mouth tasting her sweet taste, sucking and playing with her tongue and fighting for dominance. it never felt as a first kiss, it ws like they had done this for a million times but yet was seep, passionate and full of love. both were so lost in the emotions awakened in them that they forgot the need to breathe. nandini was the one to break the kiss sensing manik's need to breathe. both stood there with their eyes closed and a smile on their lips.

both didnt say anything and let the silence speak what they felt. they felt complete. they were still holding each other close. manik's hands around nandini's waist and nandini hands around maniiks neck. their sweet trance was broken by leena's sound who called them informing david was home. both left each other and wthout looking at eachother and went downstairs to discuss what nandini was here for. manik was again stunned by his dad's behaviour. david hugged nandini and said "i missed you so much" while she replied the same with a me too. everyone again sat in the hall, david and leena on one couch and manik and nandini on the other on which was opposite their's. "so..." befor david could complete nandni said "am taking manik with me" leaving everyone shocked.



so thats all for today. Baby this update is decicated to u my birthday girl...and i request u to please like and comment my story. if u guys r not liking it do say that, i wnt continue with the story. i wanted to know how many will miss the story thats y i didnt pdate it for such a long time. i guess no one misses it. if its like that then i'll wrap up the story or discontinue it as soon as possible. hope you guys will like the part and hoe to get a good response.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update dear..👏
wow manik mom dad knows nandu...
interesting...
and nandini having flashbacks...
and then kiss aww..😳
lastly nandini saying she is taking manik along with her...😲
getting interesting...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
sooo Badly wanna knw abt their past
cont sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Toh manik ki family nandini ko janti hai
Aur manik ke ghr se nandini ki memories hai
I think manik nandini ka past hai...wo jo room mein use yaad aayea wo manik hi hoga
Lovd ur story
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update poor manik got confused so manik had lost his memory and something ok.
the kiss was bliss.
and yeah we all love your all three stories alot and we surely miss them i was waiting for the update so long i thought to pm u to update your all three stories i am madly in love with ur ff's plz dont discontinue it u dont know how much we loved it.
p.s: next tym plz give a long update plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update dear,
please do try to update bit early as can't wait for the revelation of this mistrey.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome but a chotu update... n dat too u updated aftr so long still a chotu update
anyways next time a big one please..
n no u dont need to stop dis ff
take care
shruthi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
loved it
nandu and Manik's parents know each other!
That's interesting
their kiss was amazin' the last line that nandu said was shockin'
plz don't discontinue
it's different concept and I love it
plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey hey hey
Pls do continue this FF
Its superb u know...

And welcome back...
Update was small, but awesome...
MaNan kiss... And Manik's parents know Nandini?? And she also is taking Manik with her?? Why??

Curious... M damn curious

Cont Soon and Pls continue dear
Edited by Roshni8 - 9 years ago

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