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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Just loved loved loved to the core...

the way you explained the seven vows was just amazing combined the the evil thoughts of manik...👏simply great..
the song selected was this situation was also apt dipicting the situation faced dhruv and nandini...😊
very nice work..👏😊
waiting eagerly now to see what evil manik has stored for nandini...😲



well i have a suprise for my readers n ya lets see wht manik stored for nandini or nandini stored something for manik see wht is going to be happen in story well thnks fr u r precious cmnt
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: simply16

I liked your post.. Thanks for explaining each and every ritual, I never knew the real meaning until today thank u very much for this beautiful update.. Plz do update soon



well thnk u dear but before this update i myself dnt knw abt the meaning of rituals and all this update took so much of my time n i did great research on indian wedding i m glad u all lyk it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jesse93

Amazing update dear ,
Starting from all those marriage rituals to all the hatred of Manik for Nandini , you penned the whole thing brilliantly .
After reading all those povs of
Manik I am really scared for Nandu.
I mean koi kisiko itna hate kaise kar sakta hai !
Continue soon dear .




this is the base of my story jha jitni nafrat hoti wha utna hi ghra pyr hota h ye meri story line h i m glad u all lyk it thnk u fr your cmnt
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Smileygirl23

Pata nahi kyu ye padte aankhon mein aansu aayi! Bechari nandu! She has entered hell. U hav explained every ritual so well. Cont soon



well aage kya hoga wo to me bta nh skti but u dnt need to worry abt her afterall she is devils bride so dnt worry n enjoy my story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Manik anger n hatredness towards nandini...aftr every vow his POV seems very scary he is promising tht he is going to mke her life hell(but one part i liked most whn he said he will never anyone else to hurt her)... loved nandu's POV she accepting manik as her husband n now is only man in her life...so sweet

Amazinggg update...perfect
Nicely penned dwn...too good
Thnk uh for pm
Update soon



well my story is all abt maniks character how a devil turn into a human being so obvio manik ka character to dark hoga hi well thnks fr liking it or ya i will update the next prt asap
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutiepari97

Manik soon realised his mistek because whom he thought little girl who change his life after whike with sad much pure love❤️



yes she will but not so soon in my story manik is too stubborn devil he wont give up so easily so just wait n watch n stay tune wid me
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice concept nice story i like it ...
this is my 1st comment on ur ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice concept nice story i like it ...
this is my 1st comment on ur ff[/QUOTE

i m glad dear you lyk it n thnk you for your comment i hope you like rest of my story too
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Posted: 10 years ago
"Nandini "manik screamed her name his heart skiped a beat aftr seeing her in this condition he rush towrds her

The
rain was so heavy that it drenched her clothes and they
felt heavier with each step she
took. But she didn't stop. Blinded
by tears and by the rain,
Ah, courage! She needed
that alright. For someone who is
afraid of the dark and to be left
alone and drenching through an
Rainy night especially after a
deplorable experience, it is no
easy feat. She needed all the
courage which she already lost
The thunder kept rolling
overhead and once when
lightning flashed across the dark
sky, she hadn't been expecting it With tears streaming
down and gasping for strength
and breath, she rose to her feet

, she knelt to
the ground and cried the raindrop soothing her pain
Manik came towrds her manik opened
it and emerged out of it with his umbrella.

Nandini wht the hell are you doing here cnt you see its raining very heavily you will fall sick come inside "manik said n held her hand
"Go away manik "nandini said n freed herself frm his grip
No i wont you have to come wid me "manik said
"Why you hate me you much manik you cnt see me in peace"nandini said n manik was speechless

Ok guys i knw i knw your are going to kill me for this but if ke writers ka tradition h promo update krna so i m following this tradition n also there is an emergency in my house so i cnt update today but i promise i will compansate wid one long update pkka tb tk ke liye enjoy this promo n kept thinking abt the prts n do comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plz update the next part soon we are eagerly waiting for the update and also pm me

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