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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Amazing update
Waiting for the next part
Plz update the next part soon

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parthadmirer

@parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Just loved loved loved to the core...

the way you explained the seven vows was just amazing combined the the evil thoughts of manik...👏 simply great..

the song selected was this situation was also apt dipicting the situation faced dhruv and nandini...😊

very nice work..👏😊

waiting eagerly now to see what evil manik has stored for nandini...😲

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Ayisha Noureen

@Smileygirl23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Pata nahi kyu ye padte aankhon mein aansu aayi! Bechari nandu! She has entered hell. U hav explained every ritual so well. Cont soon

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subbatanisha

@subbatanisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

[SIZE=5]wow ...wow...n jus ...wow...u r truelly amazing

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unnatishukla241

@unnatishukla241

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Awesone

Plzz update next part soon

This chapter is really awesome

Really i will love to read next dark part

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sehra111

@sehra111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

wooow ...itz jst awsm...update soon angel

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priya

@priya_sejwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Manik anger n hatredness towards nandini...aftr every vow his POV seems very scary he is promising tht he is going to mke her life hell(but one part i liked most whn he said he will never anyone else to hurt her)... loved nandu's POV she accepting manik as her husband n now is only man in her life...so sweet

Amazinggg update...perfect

Nicely penned dwn...too good

Thnk uh for pm

Update soon

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anika mehjaben nahin

@mehjaben_nahin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

hai allah how evil can anyone be ye larki to gayi kam se hihihi dhruni actually loved each other but m now damn scared after reading manik's pov well let's see wht happens nxt
awesome update
cont soon