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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Hey Jazzi
Nice update
And the flashback part when Akira and Sapna recognise each other.. That was lovely

But I am really getting impatient to know about Fab 5

Pls show their entry soon
And cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Look... So all of you are getting quite anxious to get to fab 5, and to know what had passed beyween MaNan, and i still feeling kind of guilty about not posting in over a week, tho look, 24 hrs hone se pehle, ye lo agla update!

Back to the present:

M: Wait a second... Tu hume inform kyu nahi kar sakti thi?!

He asked giving a pointed look to Sapna, who had tears threatening to come out being so close to the truth now.

A: I am trying to tell you exactly that, to jahapana, agar aap ki ijaazat ho, then may I plzz continue?!

M: Haa... Yeah... good point.

A: Tho... where was I...? Oh, yeah!

Flashback:

S: Actually meri jaan, it's a long-a$$ story... Sunne gi?

A: Don't worry jannemann, for you, I have all the time in the world!

S: Tho sun. You know na that dad ka business is booming and he's mega-successful and all, right?

Akira nodded a confused yes

S: Tho being successful although has its perks, has its downsides as well...

A: Tu... Why are you beating around the bush... Jo hai, vo seedhe, seedhe tell me na?!

S: We've been getting threat calls.

Sapna blurted out with tears brimming her eyes.

"What?!?" Akira was shocked... The Saxena family consisted of the three nicest people she knew... Not only that, but messing with her mausa ji was almost as bad as messing with the Malhotra twins! Everyone knew that Harshad Saxena could swallow anything but someone threatening his precious angel, and his wife... So who would have the guts to do such a thing?

S: Tu yehi soch rahi hai that who would have the guts to do so, and why we're so freaked out right?

Akira looked at Sapna, shocked that she could read her mind so easily.

S: It's someone who knew dad from before... I don't know who, but this person is threatening to reveal something horrible dad did in his past.

A lone tear escaped from Sapna's eye, and Akira understood why they were all so afraid. Harshad may be a great guy now, but they all knew about his past because Harshad himself had told his daughter, and he'd told Nandini to tell her kids as well... He had changed for the better and didn't want the kids to falsely believe him to be a hero. But little did he know that because of his honesty, the kids looked up to him even more.

Sapna continued with her story. "Somehow, that person found out that mein yaha, US aa rahi hu, and they also knew that our families are closely connected. We were told that agar tum logo ko humne contact kiya, then your family would be targeted too... We just couldn't let that happen. We decided that main US aajaungi, but we wouldn't inform your family as then we would be compelled to tell you the truth... You know na, mom can't hide anything from Nandini maasi."

Akira was happy to find her best friend again, sad that they had to go through so much, mad at that person who had dared tried to hurt her family, and straight up frustrated that she couldn't do anything about it... YET.

Flashback ends

A: So that was what we were trying to hide from all of you... Before you ask, I didn't tell you becoz this one here (she gave a pointed look at Sapna), told me not to tell anyone... Not even YOU... She made me promise, and vada kiya hai, nibhana parega!

She sang that last part.

M: So... Can't say that I'm not mad at you... But jo tumne kiya... It was a bit justified as well... Tho... You owe me a rocking party after we destroy whoever it is that is doing this.

He said looking at Akira. Akira just gave him her signature devilish smile, and said, "Mannnuuu... How did you know that there was something going on up here?!" Pointing at her mind.

Manan smiled and said bilkul vaise jaise you know that I'm going to do something stupid before I even do it!

Sapna looked at this cute sa twin bonding and smiled. She knew that whoever this was, is doomed as ManIra is together... And if they want, they can set the world on fire right now!

A: So, here's the plan!

Akira narrated the entire plan to her brother who gave her a wicked smile once she was done.

M: Tere dimaag mein aise ideas kahan se aate hai?!

A: Bro, you know na, jaha baaki ki duniya ki soch khatam hoti hai, that's where mere ideas shuru hote hai! But, I was thinking, that this is the best way to put the other plan in action too...

S: Matlab...? What other plan?!

M: Ummm... Actually, we ummm...

Manan gathered all his courage as he knew that if Sapna got involved too, their plan that was a hit anyways, would now be a super-hit

M: We found HIS picture in mom's room...

S: What?! When?! Wait a second... That's y uss din the both of you kicked me out itne gusse mein!

M: Yeah... But now that you mention it, tell me one thing, yeh to samajh mein aata hai that why you hid this and all, but yeh spot wala drama... What the hell was that?!

S: Actually, yeh bhi tumhari pyaarriii behn ka hi smart-aleck idea tha!

M: Huh?

He was totally confused.

S: Actually, isse laga that if somehow we could get me in the house, it would be much easier to talk to each other regarding the plan without getting you suspicious...

A: PLUS, it was sooo much fun seeing you in bechari mode!

Akira blurted!

SaNan (Sapna and Manan) looked at each other, then at Akira, smiled and started throwing pillows at her, pretty soon, it became a full-fledged pillow fight, all worries forgotten, and them just being the best friends that they were.

Upon hearing the screaming and commotion, NavShad and Nandini went to Akira's room to see what the fuss was about. What they saw brought a smile to their faces. Their kids were acting as if they were all 8 again, and had never been separated. A pillow hit Harshad, who smiled and joined the pillow fight, soon enough, NavNi joined them too. If you saw them, no one would say that any of them ever had hatred for one another, or they had been separated, or even that they all had their own demons haunting them. They were a small, content family, with no worries in that moment.

When the days are cold
And the cards all fold
And the saints we see
Are all made of gold

When your dreams all fail
And the ones we hail
Are the worst of all
And the blood's run stale

I wanna hide the truth
I wanna shelter you
But with the beast inside
There's nowhere we can hide

No matter what we breed
We still are made of greed
This is my kingdom come
This is my kingdom come

When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It's where my demons hide
It's where my demons hide
Don't get too close
It's dark inside
It's where my demons hide
It's where my demons hide

At the curtain's call
It's the last of all
When the lights fade out
All the sinners crawl

So they dug your grave
And the masquerade
Will come calling out
At the mess you made

Don't wanna let you down
But I am hell bound
Though this is all for you
Don't wanna hide the truth

No matter what we breed
We still are made of greed
This is my kingdom come
This is my kingdom come

When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It's where my demons hide
It's where my demons hide
Don't get too close
It's dark inside
It's where my demons hide
It's where my demons hide

They say it's what you make
I say it's up to fate
It's woven in my soul
I need to let you go

Your eyes, they shine so bright
I wanna save that light
I can't escape this now
Unless you show me how

When you feel my heat
Look into my eyes
It's where my demons hide
It's where my demons hide
Don't get too close
It's dark inside
It's where my demons hide
It's where my demons hide

Akira woke up to this song playing on her phone. She looked around to see that while she was sleeping in the arm swing in the porch, on her bed were Sapna, Navya, and her mom. Harshad on one couch in the room, with her brother on the Bayview porch.

She quickly brushed her teeth, and freshened up, careful to not make any noise that may wake her beautiful, sleeping family up, and quietly tip-toed down to the kitchen where after making herself some black tea, she started with breakfast.

Robin Kaka came into the kitchen to a very pleasant sight of Akira singing, dancing, and cooking in the kitchen, and stepped away, ordering the rest of the servants not to go in the kitchen as Akira was cooking, and she had strictly told everyone that whenever she is cooking, no one is to come into the kitchen

Meanwhile, somewhere halfway across the world:

"Shit!!!!! I can't make a simple omelet for myself!" Said a man

"Kya hua... Aadhi raat ko omelet kyu bann rahi hai... Tera dimaag to theek hai na?!" Another man standing next to him said, in an attempt to make the situation more light-hearted.


So... Who are these two people, kya hai Akira ka plan, how are they going to get to the person threatening them, and most importantly, how is ManIra going to get to Fab 5?! Apni guesses comment karna, likes bhejna, aur vaise bhi comments de dena. Also comment if you want a PM, and I will try to get to you. Remember that constructive critisim is always appreciated, and agar koi bhi suggestions ho, to vo bhi bata dena! Love you all, and agle upi mein milte hai!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Damn interesting!! Wow!
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Hey
Awesome update
So that's the truth SaIra hid from Manan. Nice...

And the pillow fight part was nice as well

And at the end, were they ManBir??

Cont soon
And have a suggestion, if possible update the title when you upload the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Guys.. I know... a late update again!!! But, I've been a bit busy with school and exams that finally finished today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So although chotu sa hai, bilkul bhi proofread nahi kiya, it's still something!! Hope you can understand... And I'm sorry about being late with the updates... Agli baar bara vaala update dugi, promise😊... Abhi ke liye maaf kardena, and bs jheloing ke liye thnks! Ye lo update:

After a breakfast made by Akira, SAnIra (Sapna, mANan, and akIRA) went up to Manan's room, and discussed their plans to get to Manik and Fab 4 as well as to get to whoever it was that was threatening the Saxena's, and finalized all of their plans... Now they had to take the biggest step in the entire plan...

Two months later

Nandini and ManIra had convinced NavShad and Sapna to stay at their place for a little longer. Sapna was elated with this because this meant that they could discuss and finalize the plan and spend some quality time with each other. Harshad reluctantly agreed to this as he had a major offer for a deal that could take his business to the next level... He was originally going to reject it, because it was in the US, but then upon Nandini's, and more importantly Akira's insistence, he stayed, and because of her daughter and husband, Navya stayed as well.


SAnIra spent a lot of time together going through and changing parts of the plan accordingly, and waiting for the right moment. One day, they were going through the plan in Manan's room for what seemed like the thousandth time, when suddenly, all of their phones beeped, signaling that they'd gotten an e-mail respectively.


As soon as they opened the e-mail, they all got excited and nervous at the same time. They looked at each other, and smiled, and knew that it was a confirmation for each one of them. They took a deep breath, and Manan suggested that it was high time to go to their parents.

After coming out of Manan's room, the three of them got together and gave each other some strength and some pep talk.


S: Guys, who's the best? We're the best!!! Who's the best? We're the best!!!!

M: Just remember to breath, and everything will work itself out... Haina?!

A: Guys, backs straight, hair "on fleek", chin up, shake off that nervous energy in your hands, smile, breath, and stride!


They walked down the stairs in a group, and even if you had just seen them for the first time ever, you could clearly tell that they were really nervous.


Seeing their kids worried and nervous like this, Nandini and NavShad got tensed after all, all three of them had their secrets that they didn't want the kids to know just yet!



N: Ummm... Kya hua...? Why do the three of you look so tensed?

Nandini asked, the tension going on in her mind clearly coming out in her voice.


The trio looked at each other, and by silent agreement, let Sapna take charge as she was the oldest, with more experience with the parents, even if it was just a difference of about a year.


S: Vo... Actually... Hum... We...


Sapna looked at her two best friends, who gave her an assuring look, and signaled her to breath. She took a deep breath, and with newfound confidence, she turned back to her mom, dad, and maasi.


S: We got accepted into the most prestigious music college in India... SPACE Academy...


Somewhere halfway across the world:


"Tum logo ko lagta hai, that we should go back and actually see how things are running there?" Asked a women holding a man's hand.

"It's high time we face the ghosts of our past... Otherwise, we will never be able to move on." Answered a man.

"Are you sure that you want to do this?" Asked another woman to another man.

The man gave a wicked smile and said, "Never have I been so sure in my life."

Ok guyzzz... Yeh bhi hogaya... And as if I haven't said sorry enough in the beginning, sorry again, I'll try to update as frequently as I can, with a longer update next time, Nandini Promise! As usual, likes, comments, constructive criticism, aur suggestions are appreciated! If you want a PM, you know where to comment, and agle update mein milte hai!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Lovely update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Thanks for the pm Jazzi
Nice update

So SAnIra in SPACE?? Okay, so plan is set it seems
And at the end, is that Fab 5?? Wanna know how they've changed over the years...

Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
nice update
continue soon
pm me if u can
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Hey
Jst read ol d parts in 1 go & I must say ur stry is interesting.
Sanaya ashvik r 1 of those ppl I adore.
Story line is interesting
Manan & Akira twin r so damn cool. They have inherited alot from Manik & nandini 2 ek Dum combo package.
NavShad r together dats great.
Plz pm me nxt tym I am sending u buddy request.
Update soon
God bless u 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
What up guyzzz... It's been almost a week, and I'm back... I guess this is the update scheduale now... I just kind of end up posting every 5-7 days! Chalo... Here's the update, and I hope you enjoy!

"SPACE... SPACE Academy?????!!!!!" Exclaimed Nandini

As expected by SAnIra, NavShadNi were furious. Although the kids didn't know that the three of them were graduates of SPACE, they knew that their parents knew who the school was run by... People NavShadNi couldn't let SAnIra get remotely close to.

"Tum log SPACE kyu jaana chathe ho??? Normal college's aur universities mein admissions nahi mile kya?" Asked Navya

"Navya, that's not even the point here... The three of them applied to SPACE without even informing us... Now that they're adults, hum to inke kuch lagte hi nahi!" Said Harshad

"Mausaji... It's nothing like that... Really! Thing is that we tried applying in a college that we could all attend!" Piped in Manan

"Seriously... Like seriously... tum logo ko lagta hai that we'll buy this story of yours?! Because if you've forgotten, then let me remind you that the three of you study in the same college only!!!! And Manan and Akira Malhotra, you've been accepted into the most prestigious dance and music school of London, where you can also go to Oxford University... Then why SPACE?!" Asked Nandini

"Mom... Vo... We applied to SPACE because our scholarship acceptance period expired last month, and we were so busy in other things like school, that we forgot to send the e-mail saying that we would be more than happy to come to Oxford... That's why we decided to apply to SPACE... Not only will it be a full-time learning program, SPACE is also the second-best Arts University in the world... Agar best na sahi, then second-best option ko tho consider karna chahiye... Right?!" Explained Akira.

NavShadNi were flustered after listening to her explanation... But then Harshad said "Why don't you guys just stay here and study for another year? Then next year. Scholarship ke liye phir apply kar lena... We'll bring Sapna back as well, enroll her in a nice university, and have the three of you enrolled in the School of Music and Dance, and ManIra can live with us as well?!"

SAnIra were confused as to how to decline Harshads offer, when Sapna had an idea

"But daaaddd, yehi cheez hum SPACE ke baad bhi to kar sakte hai... Right?! We enroll for one year, and then do what you told us to... Aur hum bhi thora sa apni sweet si mama ka mahhaaan desh Ind-nahi, nahi Hindustaaannn bhi dekh payege right mom... Saaare jahan se acha Hindustan hamara!!!!!!"

Sapna said stretching the words and looking at her mother. Manan smirked, Akira raised her eyebrows a bit and gave a mock-pointed look to Sapna, while Nandini and Harshad gave each other a desperate look... They knew that after this little "uksava" by Sapna, Navya was a goner! The scales were tipped, and now the youngsters had majority!

"Hey matarani... Ab hum kya kahe... Tum logo ne tho humare Hindustan ko samajhne keliye ye kadam utaya hai!!!!! Rok bhi thon ahi sakte na?!?! Acha fine! I'm with the three of you!" Exclaimed Navya

"NAVYA!!!!!" Screamed Nandini and Harshad in unison.

"Tum dono, humare saath chalo! Kids, stay here!"

Saying this, Navya grabbed Harshad and Nandini by their respective arms, and took them to the study.

"Dhekho, the three of them don't know anything about how we're connected with SPACE, aur agar hum aise mana karenge, then they'll be suspicious... Isse better yeh hai that we let them go to SPACE, and ek saal mein vapis humare paas bullale!" Said Navya

"Navya, you have a point, but what if THEY end up there... Phir kya hoga, Socha hai?!" Reasoned Harshad.

"Nahi... That won't happen..." Said Nandini

"Tum itni sure kaise ho sakti ho... It's THEIR College, why won't they be there?" Asked Harshad

"Kyunki, waha hum theeno ki yaadien hai... Things that THEY would much rather forget... Kyun Nandu?"

"Right, Navya... Mein UNKO jaanti hun... In an attempt to forget us, they'll try really hard to avoid even talking about that place as much as possible. But seriously... Kya un theeno ko India send karna... That too for one whole year sahi rehega?!"

"Nandini, my only worry is that SPACE mein, they'll come face-to-face with THEM, but India ki baat se, I agree... The kids should know that unke roots kaha se hai... We've kept them away from our homeland for long enough." Said Harshad

"But ek baat hai... Hum theeno waha bilkul bhi nahi jaa sakte... You two know that na?"

"I suppose you're right Navya... Unko jaakar baatate hai..." Said Nandini

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"What do you think... Kya baate chal rahi ho gi?!" Asked Sapna

"Ha, ha... ASK NA?! When I said, that jaake eavesdrop karte hai, then tho dono ne saaf maana kar diya! Ab theeno ka tension ki vajha se haal behaal ho raha hai, aur every two minutes pooch rahi hai!!!"

"Yaar Laddoo!!!! Shant ho jao! On one side, tension se mara jaa raha hoon, and on the other, tum dono ne sir kha rakha hai!"

They heard the door opening, and turned around, waiting for their parents answer patiently

"The three of you really want to go there and learn dance and music?"Harshad asked

SAnIra nodded

"Tum log ek saal mein return karoge?" Asked Navya

SAnIra nodded again

"Hume every single day phone karoge, aur apna khiyal rakhoge?" Asked Nandini

SAnIra nodded completely excited

"OK then, pack your bags... YOU ARE GOING TO SPACE ACADEMY!!!!!

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On the other side of the world:

"Guys... Pack your bags... WE ARE GOING TO SPACE!


Guyzzz... That was it! You know the drill!!!! Likes, comments zaroor dena, comment if you want a PM, and constructive criticism and suggestions are always appreciated! Speaking of suggestions, yeh fanfic abhi bhi unnamed hai, so if you have a suggestion as to what I should name it, vo bhi comment kar dena... Ya phir msg kar dena!!!!!!! Otherwise, have an awesome day, aur agle upi mein milte hai!

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