Because Love is all this: MaNan OS - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my god I love this love this love this 😃 This is exactly how I wants things to play out! Loved how you kept Nandu as a channeler between Alya and Fab 5 this again sounds more appealing than Nandu herself going and sorting Alya problems! Then the 1st MaNan part and those messages especially Kabir's 😳😳


P.S Your're awesome and I love you ,you know that right?! xoxo🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
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I legit had tears in my eyes Geet. It was so beautiful.

I really felt bad for Alya in the episode. She's surrounded by people but she feels so alone. She needs someone to talk to and Nandini will be the perfect friend.

I really like how you completely ignored one person 😆

The way MaNan were enjoying their happiness and sharing moments together.

Please write more often Geet it's simply beautiful.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Humzy

Beautiful os

Loved it


Thanks a lot!😃😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: NushIsh

I legit had tears in my eyes Geet. It was so beautiful.


I really felt bad for Alya in the episode. She's surrounded by people but she feels so alone. She needs someone to talk to and Nandini will be the perfect friend.

I really like how you completely ignored one person 😆

The way MaNan were enjoying their happiness and sharing moments together.

Please write more often Geet it's simply beautiful.


Nushu🤗
I am so happy u liked it...felt really bad for Alya too, which is why this OS happened..

I'll definitely try to write more!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: filter.coffee

kya bolu?kya sunna chanti hai tu bol?

like i said in the pm its like you read my mind and wrote this!i have been thinking about aliya.i imagined this that nandu would find her with all the chocolates and she'll realize she's having some sorta problem and she'd somehow make aliya talk.share her problems.and fab5 witnessing it.

well it isn't the same what you wrote but that's even better.i think nandu and aliya should talk.seriously needs someone sensible to talk with.and not anyone from fab5 or aryaman.i always wanted aliya and nandu to talk.and this should happen.

and manan.oh man!i could totally see all the things you wrote happening!manik not wanting to go.acting like a cute child.nandu getting a bit annoyed!worried about chacha chachi waking up.NECK KISS!how did you get to know i love it?and kameena manik knows how to tease nandu :p ek cheek kiss turned on ho gaya!you got this part right too 😆

and aww manik,cabir,aliya's message ❤️

GEET 🤗 love you!

PS.THIS SHOULD HAPPEN IN THE SHOW.EXACTLY THE WAY ITS WRITTEN HERE IN THIS FIC.


hehehehe baby REZ! this one was for u, u know that, right?😳🤗

I love u! And yes, I know, manik toh feather se bhi touch karegi nandu toh uska ho jaata hai😆😆
About neck kiss: tera pata nahi tha, but I definitely love it😉

I wanted to add the messages because of Cabir mostly..😆 u know how MUCH I love him..But I needed, wanted to write something for Alya this time so...

Hugs!
Love u too!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: chair1992

I hope the writers get inspired by this, it really would fit in the storyline

And thank you for posting this


😃😃 I'm so flattered u think so!
Thanks a lot for reading!!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaroge

Amazing thought

N beautifullybeautifully
Written loved it


Thank u so so much😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@pooja: Thanks a lot hun!

@Reya: Aw, thanks a ton babe! I'm SO glad u still took out the time to comment, even though IF through phone isn't very nice to all of us mostly..haha
Coming to the OS, I am glad it made u comment!! Felt really bad for Alya, thought she needed some TLC from SOME writer at least isliye...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetha4avzm

Oh my god I love this love this love this 😃 This is exactly how I wants things to play out! Loved how you kept Nandu as a channeler between Alya and Fab 5 this again sounds more appealing than Nandu herself going and sorting Alya problems! Then the 1st MaNan part and those messages especially Kabir's 😳😳


P.S Your're awesome and I love you ,you know that right?! xoxo🤗



Baby girl!!🤗

I am so so happy u commented!! Haina? It would make more sense than nandini interfering in Fab5 ka business considering Alya at this point would be even more territorial. poor child though..

I love you too!!
xoxo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinkle10

THIS!!!! GAHHH...GENIE ALREADY MENTIONED IT BUT I'M GOING TO RAGE AGAIN THIS NEEDS TO BE ALL SHOWN TO ME SOON!!!

So I see what you did here cutie...like spoiling us with all the emotional talks and heart-wrenching scenes we've been boasting about that need to be showed to us!!! Such a smart cookie...you know it'll be irresistible for us to start gushing when you; our poetry queen; will let lose with your words and fulfill our wishes! 😉 I'm quoting Manik here okay..."Totally" - you've totally slayed us all with the words and the plot you have sewn!!

Aaah...a sulking Malhotra is personally one of my favourites! So innocently stubborn he tries to act and she gives in because well she usually craves the exact same closeness and warmth. 😳

Coming to Aliya...see you and I had this talk that this show is far better than most telly shows we've watched...yet some flaws will always remain. And one of the is inconsistency with the plot. How the consistency graph never stays that linearly proportional line I want it to say and they are never able to timely tackle or complete the story plot they begin. My heart cries for this girl because she was shown to forget her sorrows and support Mukti during her hard time...she quietly accepted Dhruv's return because for her...Fab 5's completeness mattered the most. She knew they would've broke otherwise and she didn't want her family falling apart. Yet there was no one to ask her of her heartbreak or the battle she continues to fight with herself till today. That feeling of absolute low self-esteem, feeling so lost even the amidst of the people she's known all her life...the feeling of not being worthy of any guy...and the list is endless. And yet her emotions weren't respectfully portrayed through the shows. They rather focus on senseless plan-making of Harshad's than focus on her lost inner-spirit! And they always tackle these situations on their last stage when the matter slips out of control. Exactly what happened with Cabir too when he attempts to suicide! *sighhh*...I will actually snap if something similar is shown with her because she doesn't deserve all this! They need to save her before it's too late and honestly Nandini seems like their only option at this stage. I would've preferred Mukti but not anymore because they so meaninglessly sabotaged her sends of growth too that she went after Abhi's death. They didn't carry it on and now I'm back to square 1 with how I feel about her. Ughh...the inconsistency again!

The conversation you weaved between Aliya and Nandini was so real...so genuine. Nothing over the top...there were hints of hesitancy...a little pang of awkwardness from Aliya's side because of her past guilt but Nandini's known for calming the anxious air...it's the very first thing Manik realised about her, that she's that calm he craves in his life. She understands silence so well and her words...her words are her strength and she knows how to use them at the most correct time and in the most apt form to uplift someone's spirit! And I loved how you did that here 👏

My favourite bit was probably how Manik smiles to himself upon her phone call to help Aliya. Because when she promised to shine for him...she promised to shine for his closed ones...his family too! It was all just so so so beautiful! ❤️

I love you for this kaysss!!! Like you spoiling me with your OS's every day is going to make me crave for them daily!!


Awww...i can't believe u just did that!!
u gave me feels over my own OS...like, 'kaise kar leti ho tum? baar baar, har baar..?hmm! bolo'
😆


I totally agree with u and i really truly hope they don't make a mockery out of alya's genuine pain.

Ab daily OS toh nahi milegi...but I'll try writing more often😳😳
🤗

I love u, kay..SO MUCH!!

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