Because Love is all this: MaNan OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys!
I thank you all for the love for my first OS!!
Here I am with another one. I have been wanting some loving for Alya and today's epi hit a nerve, so here it is :) I'd love to know your thoughts :)

Feeling his strong arms around her, she whispered

Manik, what do you think you're doing?'

Arre, Nandini, what do you think? I am hugging my person!'

She could hear the laughter in his voice, as his breath tickled her cheek, and the stray locks of hair on her temple.

You need to leave now, or chacha-chachi will wake!'

Why do you always seem so hell-bent on escaping from me, huh?' he exclaimed, sounding so disgruntled that Nandini turned round and pulled his cheeks.

Aww! Don't worry, Mister Boyfriend, I still love you. But I do need to take care that chacha-chachi don't wake up na! Try to understand Manik, please, go na?'

Manik smiled, knowing she didn't really want him to leave but he understood why she felt a bit afraid.

Nandini lived with her chacha chachi and younger brother, and before Manik, her simple life was just that. Simple.But ever since they met, there had been sparks and he was a goner, pretty much since their early interactions. As he left, he gave her a small kiss on the neck, feeling her pulse quicken,

And smirking, waited

What?' she asked him, with a half smile on her face.

Err. Nothing. I just thought you might like to return the favour?'

Nonsense. Leave, Manik. We'll meet tomorrow, okay? I'll see you in college for practice. Now, bye, goodnight'

What do you mean, goodnight'? I deserve a kiss at least!' declaring which, he sat on the floor, cross-legged, waiting for her reaction.

Manik, why do you trouble me so?' she asked him, annoyed.

She was sleepy, and he wanted a kiss. He NEEDED to sleep. And she knew he wouldn't till he had what he wanted.

You are seriously a baccha, you know that?' she said to him, irritated.

And the next thing she knew, he was up with arms around her. She could feel his breath on her hair as he moved them to one side, and kissed that spot he loved on her neck.

Manik' she breathed gently, and it took him all he had to stop himself from whatever he might have done.

Turning, she hugged him tight and told him she loved him.

A gentle cheek kiss later, Manik Malhotra was in his car, trying to calm down enough to insert the car keys into the ignition.

This is what she did to her: Nandini Murthy, the girl he loved more than life.

It seemed like she was not going to get any sleep tonight as her phone rang for the umpteenth time

Manik, please let me sleep. I have to be up in 2 hours...' she complained.

Hello? Nandini?'

Alya?What happened? Are you okay?'

Alya smiled at the fact that this girl, who barely knew her, immediately realized she was not okay.

Yes, I am fine' she lied.

And waited. Hoped.

Alya. I know we are not the best of friends. Or even good friends. But I am happy you called me. Please tell me what is wrong. I can hear it in your voice'

How could she? How could she tell her what was wrong? That she felt unloved, unwanted, and plain depressed? How could she tell her how big a problem she was in?

Nahi Nandini, I am all okay. It's just that I felt like talking to someone and I had a hunch that you might still be up. I am sorry if I disturbed you, I'll keep the phone now' she said, hoping against hope that Nandini, who even understood the monster that never existed, would understand.

Alya, talk to me. Please. Manik just left. I am up anyway. Is everything okay? Did Harshad do anything?'

Alya had been feeling guilty about the goons she set on Nandini the past year; she couldn't believe it had only been a year since that incident; since she and Manik had broken up; since she had gotten close to, and been hurt by Dhruv.

Life was funny: the two guys she had loved had been both interested in Nandini and she had initially hated Nandini, and now, now, she was the only one who showed some kind of sympathy for her.

Nandini waited with bated breath; she didn't know why Alya had called her, but she knew the latter must have had a reason: not only was Alya Manik's ex but she was also Dhruv's (ex wasn't the correct word, since they weren't together, but Dhruv had hurt her, as a lover, as a friend).

Nandini being someone who never could keep her thoughts to herself said

Alya. Listen to me: You are a beautiful, strong woman who deserves respect; who deserves love and those who do not believe that deserve to be punched in the face, you get that?'

Alya smiled, as Nandini had known she would, remembering the punch she had thrown at Manik and that moment when Manik had punched Dhruv.

She knew it would be alright because she had someone now; the girlfriend of his ex; the ex-crush of the boy she was still in love with, Nandini Murthy was the only friend Alya needed at the moment.

After a light-hearted conversation, the two girls hung up; and a worried Nandini called the emergency cell phone number Manik had given her a few months ago.

Hello?' his sleepy voice croaked.

Manik. Listen to me. Alya needs us all'

As Manik listened to her, he understood what had been going wrong. That paleness that Alya had attributed to the weather was one of the earliest signs of her depression. He felt like a fool and wanted to say so but Nandini asked him to just be there for Alya.

And as he quickly kept the phone down and called for an emergency meeting, he blessed his stars all over again: she was his friend and lover, forever. His shooting stars had given him this; had called her to him, so that she could protect his heart so it didn't hurt anymore.

As he got up from the bed and made plans to cheer Alya up, he saw his reflection in the mirror, and the sparkling eyes simply proved what he knew to be true:

This love that he felt for Nandini will only grow in intensity throughout his life.

As Nandini got ready for riyaaz, her phone pinged: 3 unread messages.

Alya

Thank you.

Cabir

You are my forever-awesome girl, you know that, right? Xo

Manik

I love you. Humesha

She smiled, happy with her life, and the stars, and the universe.

Thank you Aiyappa, maa, appa! I love you too'


Okaythanksbye

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This all of it is what I want in this show ASAP . MATLAB ASAP.
Nandini and Manik reveling in their intimacy, relationship, adjusting and balancing . That back hug, I see what you did , Miss Smarty Pants.


And you stole my heart when you made Alya ring up Nandini. Time for the show to go back to it's moral compass, sounding board . These two girls have a lot of conflict, unease but fundamentally they could connect. Because Nandini understands pain, this darkness now, she looks for hope,fight and respect, she was also berated by her love once , who she did punch but she sorted that on her own. Alya needs to hear that she is beautiful, she is someone to be cherished and love. She will never on her own will open with fab5- not their MO. Nandini can be a good bridge and this gives space for her to have that personal equation with Alya.

Nandu;s perception, contrast with Alya . Daftly done.

I like how the healing is all fab5, Alya's family.

Admire how Alya's conflict and her need to numb it ran parallel all through her convo, also her reflection about Nandini.

Sigh, and cherry on cake- those messages, Cabir's just tipped Manik's for me.

BIG HUGS AND WRITE MORE.

Did I mention , I want this on the show, yeah that and infinity.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: charminggenie

This all of it is what I want in this show ASAP . MATLAB ASAP.

Nandini and Manik reveling in their intimacy, relationship, adjusting and balancing . That back hug, I see what you did , Miss Smarty Pants.


And you stole my heart when you made Alya ring up Nandini. Time for the show to go back to it's moral compass, sounding board . These two girls have a lot of conflict, unease but fundamentally they could connect. Because Nandini understands pain, this darkness now, she looks for hope,fight and respect, she was also berated by her love once , who she did punch but she sorted that on her own. Alya needs to hear that she is beautiful, she is someone to be cherished and love. She will never on her own will open with fab5- not their MO. Nandini can be a good bridge and this gives space for her to have that personal equation with Alya.

Nandu;s perception, contrast with Alya . Daftly done.

I like how the healing is all fab5, Alya's family.

Admire how Alya's conflict and her need to numb it ran parallel all through her convo, also her reflection about Nandini.

Sigh, and cherry on cake- those messages, Cabir's just tipped Manik's for me.

BIG HUGS AND WRITE MORE.

Did I mention , I want this on the show, yeah that and infinity.


G🤗 u said it all!
@ bold: THIS! all of this!

and my next will be on Nandu and Cabir, bas. You clearly have seen how much I love them together? :D

This OS was mostly wish fulfilment for Alya, I REALLY want it so bad and these two girls can pull it off beautifully and sensitively

The back hug was for selfish reasons😆 finally something selfish😆

i love u!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am such an emotional mess today. I was crying the whole time reading it... Alya is making me heart pain for her..like so much and this OS just kind of fulfilled my desire...

I love you geet and you know that... I loved this OS <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mera baby! Vaishu! Jaana u need to sleep now <3 i love u too, and i am happy u read and felt some fulfillment, for the rest, there is tomorrow: i'm calling u first thing kal, bas <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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kya bolu?kya sunna chanti hai tu bol?

like i said in the pm its like you read my mind and wrote this!i have been thinking about aliya.i imagined this that nandu would find her with all the chocolates and she'll realize she's having some sorta problem and she'd somehow make aliya talk.share her problems.and fab5 witnessing it.

well it isn't the same what you wrote but that's even better.i think nandu and aliya should talk.seriously needs someone sensible to talk with.and not anyone from fab5 or aryaman.i always wanted aliya and nandu to talk.and this should happen.

and manan.oh man!i could totally see all the things you wrote happening!manik not wanting to go.acting like a cute child.nandu getting a bit annoyed!worried about chacha chachi waking up.NECK KISS!how did you get to know i love it?and kameena manik knows how to tease nandu :p ek cheek kiss turned on ho gaya!you got this part right too 😆

and aww manik,cabir,aliya's message ❤️

GEET 🤗 love you!

PS.THIS SHOULD HAPPEN IN THE SHOW.EXACTLY THE WAY ITS WRITTEN HERE IN THIS FIC.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I hope the writers get inspired by this, it really would fit in the storyline
And thank you for posting this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing thought
N beautifullybeautifully
Written loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THIS!!!! GAHHH...GENIE ALREADY MENTIONED IT BUT I'M GOING TO RAGE AGAIN THIS NEEDS TO BE ALL SHOWN TO ME SOON!!!
So I see what you did here cutie...like spoiling us with all the emotional talks and heart-wrenching scenes we've been boasting about that need to be showed to us!!! Such a smart cookie...you know it'll be irresistible for us to start gushing when you; our poetry queen; will let lose with your words and fulfill our wishes! 😉 I'm quoting Manik here okay..."Totally" - you've totally slayed us all with the words and the plot you have sewn!!

Aaah...a sulking Malhotra is personally one of my favourites! So innocently stubborn he tries to act and she gives in because well she usually craves the exact same closeness and warmth. 😳

Coming to Aliya...see you and I had this talk that this show is far better than most telly shows we've watched...yet some flaws will always remain. And one of the is inconsistency with the plot. How the consistency graph never stays that linearly proportional line I want it to say and they are never able to timely tackle or complete the story plot they begin. My heart cries for this girl because she was shown to forget her sorrows and support Mukti during her hard time...she quietly accepted Dhruv's return because for her...Fab 5's completeness mattered the most. She knew they would've broke otherwise and she didn't want her family falling apart. Yet there was no one to ask her of her heartbreak or the battle she continues to fight with herself till today. That feeling of absolute low self-esteem, feeling so lost even the amidst of the people she's known all her life...the feeling of not being worthy of any guy...and the list is endless. And yet her emotions weren't respectfully portrayed through the shows. They rather focus on senseless plan-making of Harshad's than focus on her lost inner-spirit! And they always tackle these situations on their last stage when the matter slips out of control. Exactly what happened with Cabir too when he attempts to suicide! *sighhh*...I will actually snap if something similar is shown with her because she doesn't deserve all this! They need to save her before it's too late and honestly Nandini seems like their only option at this stage. I would've preferred Mukti but not anymore because they so meaninglessly sabotaged her sends of growth too that she went after Abhi's death. They didn't carry it on and now I'm back to square 1 with how I feel about her. Ughh...the inconsistency again!

The conversation you weaved between Aliya and Nandini was so real...so genuine. Nothing over the top...there were hints of hesitancy...a little pang of awkwardness from Aliya's side because of her past guilt but Nandini's known for calming the anxious air...it's the very first thing Manik realised about her, that she's that calm he craves in his life. She understands silence so well and her words...her words are her strength and she knows how to use them at the most correct time and in the most apt form to uplift someone's spirit! And I loved how you did that here 👏

My favourite bit was probably how Manik smiles to himself upon her phone call to help Aliya. Because when she promised to shine for him...she promised to shine for his closed ones...his family too! It was all just so so so beautiful! ❤️

I love you for this kaysss!!! Like you spoiling me with your OS's every day is going to make me crave for them daily!!




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Geettt !!! This be so beautiful <3
Honestly i loved the simplicity of this piece where you so beautifully showcased love and friendship both..
Sorry abt the super short comment..on from the phone but read your beautiful OS and had to comment

- Reya <3

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