Destiny-Perfecf Plans (FF) Epilogue : Pg 46 ( COMPLETED) - Page 23

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CHAPTER 23: MANAN'


Manik: You're one of a kind Nandini. Independent, brave yet innocent. I've never ever come across a girl like you. Everything that you do is perfect, you make things around you look perfect. You make me smile Nandini. And, I love you so so much.

I don't know when and how this happened, but idk, I..I just love youu.

Nandini had teary eyes listening to all this. She just hugged manik sooo tightly. He responded the same way. He lifted her off the floor and twirled her around. She was his princess, it was a magical moment. '

Manik broke the hug.

Manik: And I am so sorry for yesterday and day before. I know i was behaving like a jerk.

Nandini: waise tum essa behave kyu kar rahe the

Manik:mat pucho please

Nandini: Manik please batao

Manik: I got angry when I saw you kissing him

Nandini: who? Aryamaan

Manik nodded his head looking away.

Nandini: Manik, I didn't kiss him wo we just..

Manik: Nandini its ohkay, jhooth bolne ke zaroorat nahi hai, its ohkay, all that matters to me is that right now you're with me

Nandini: No manik. I..I am not lying. You don't believe me right? I know how to make you believe me.

She slowly came close to him and tip toes on his feet to match his height. He also bent a little so that their levels match. She fused her lips with his. They poured in all the love that they had for each other. They broke the kiss when they became breathless.

Manik: sorry Nandini i should trust you

Nandini kept her hand on his mouth to stop him from speaking.

Nandini: Manik don't. Don't spoil this monent. You don't need to be sorry at all.

She again snuggled in his chest. He also took her in his embrace.

Nandini: Manik

Manik:hmm

Nandini: I think we should go down..sabko pata chalega that we're missing toh vo sab galat sochenge

Manik: no..please nahi janna mujhe kahin..lets stay here naa

Nandini:but

Suddenly her phone started ringing.

It was Aryamaan. She picked the call

Nandini: haan
Aryamaan: where are you sab tumhare barre mein puch rahe hai
Nandini:han vo i am coming
Aryamaan:acha suno, tum kiske sath ho? Manik
Nandini: Nooo. I am not with him
Aryamaan: ok jaldi aao

Manik: jhooth kyu bola

Nandini: Aryamaan amms ko bol dega Manik. I cant let him know about us

Manik: and bakki sabko?

Nandini: umm, I have a surprise for you all actually

Manik: kya?

Nandini: sabke sath hi bataungi

Ab challo neeche. She held his hand and they both walked down.

They had their hands entwined. On their way they suddenly bumped into Cabir and Nyonika.

Cabir widened his eyes seeing their hands.

They instantly left their hand.

Nandini looked here and there in embarrassment. Manik was also avoiding their gaze.

Nyonika was trying to control her laughter. She thought of pulling Manik's leg.

Nyonika: Kahan se aa rahe ho Manik?

Manik:ummm vo terrace se

Nandini stamped her foot on his signalling not to tell her that.

Manik: I mean, terrace pe chalte hai hum sab log after function

Nyonika: thats fine. But abhi tum the kahan?

Manik: vo mumma ek call aya tha, business, zyra ki deal se related to bas vohi attend kar raha tha

Nyonika: kaffi intrested the tum deal mein haan

Nandini blused and looked down.

Manik was speechless.
Cabir too was about to burst into laughter.

Manik gave Cabir a serious look.

Cabir: umm, aunty Manik toh waise hi haar cheez ke liye passionate hokke kaam karta hai..I am sure yeh walli deal bhi successful hogi.

(He winked at Nandini)

Nyonika: Umm, manik&Cabir you guys mind attending the guests?

Manik: Ofcourse not mum. Chalo chalte hai

Cabir, manik and nandini were about to leave.

Nyonika: Not you Nandini. I have someother work for you

Manik's POV:
Oh god. Nandini se kya kaam. Damnn. Kahan phasa diya maine sabko.

Nandini: ohkay,you guys go..I'll catch up with you both later.

Manik nods and they leave.

As soon as they left, Nyonika and Nandini started laughing.

******FLASHBACK****

In the morning, Nandini was getting ready when nyonika knocked on her door.

Nandini: aunty..aayiye naa.

Nyonika: looking really pretty nandini

Nandini: thankyou aunty

Nyonika: Actually mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi

Nandini: umm..yes?

Nyonika: Nandini, Manik is a kid at heart, He was confused, But trust me, he's perfect once he realises things.

Nandini: I think I know what you're talking about

(Nandini's face frowned since Manik had been avoiding her)

Nyonika: No Nandini, don't be sad anymore.

Nandini: He hates mee!!

Nyonika: whattt? Nooo. not at all. He loves you nandini

(He face immediately lit up listening to this)

Nandini: but..

Nyonika: you dont need to be shy its ohkay, i understand

Nandini: But aunty apko kaise pata that he does, usne kaha apse kuch?

Nyonika: umm, not exactly. But I know him in and out. Vo ajj hi tumse sab keh dega dekhnaa

Nandini became extremely happy and hugged her.

Nyonika: I have an idea

Nandini:what?

Nyonika: Shaddi mein 2 days left. You all should go somewhere out kal. Like a one day trip. Itne sab functions se I'm sure tum sab bahaut stressed up ho gaye hoge. Go somewhere, chill and relax for a while.

Nandini: But aunty, shaddi two days mein hai so humme sab allow kar denge?

Nyonika: Don't worry, I'll handle that.

******FLASHBACK OVER******

Nandini: Aunty app bhi na, becara kitna blush kar raha tha

Nyonika: but it was fun pulling his leg

Nandini: haha true

Nandini: oh and han, I made all the arrangements, we're all leaving for jaipur kal.

Nyonika: thats great, have fun.

With this nyonika left.

Nandini too joined everyone at the function.

Once the function got over, she dragged eveyone to her room .

Navya: kya hua nandini, humme esse kyuu laye ho yahan?

Nandini: ek surprise hai

Manik: actually two

All looked at him with questions.

He came near Nandini and held her hand and kissed her palms. This was enough for everyone to understand what he wants to say.

Cabir: wuho ho, so you guys are a couple?

Nandini and manik nodded.

Mukti came and hugged them: wow, that's like a greattt news.

Abhimanyu: Dekha Mukti, kaha tha naa (he winked)

Manik: matlab you guys knew all this would happen?

Navya: ofcourse, we could see you guys in love, bas tum dono ke realisation ki deer thi.

Nandini: accha accha ok. Now time for the actual surprise.

Manik: han yeh surprise ke liye toh even I am curious.

Nandini went towards her bag and brought 6 papers.
She handed one of it to each.

All yelled in unison "WHAT? WE'RE GOING TO JAIPUR ON A ROAD TRIP?"

Cabir:but shaddi ka kya

Mukti: mumma kabhi allow nahi karegi .

Manik: aur uss fool aryamaan ka kya

Navya:hum shopping kab karenge

Abhimanyu: planning kab karenge trip ki

All of them were throwing so many questions at her & that too so fast, she almost felt like they were playing rapid fire with her.

Nandini: Guysss! (She yelled to shut them up)

Pagal ho gaye ho kya? Itne questions. Phew. Anyways, yes jaipur. One day road trip. Kal jayenge, parson wapas, then shaddi ki shopping ke liye one day left. And han sab elders maan gaye hai we don't need to worry about that. Ummm and yaah, Aryamaan is leaving tomorrow for US he told me, some urgent meeting he has, he'll be back shaddi walle din.

Cabir: chotti you're awesome

They all went in for a group hug.

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Love,
Isha :*

Edited by Ishaaaaaa - 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 24: ROAD TRIP

Next day they had to leave at7am so they all woke up at 6 and got ready really quick.
All wore western clothes.

They all came down and found their car ready& laugage loaded.

Manik: ohkay guys, jaldi jaldi nikalte hai..I'll drive

Nandini held his hand and widened her eyes signaling a "NO!"

Cabir: Ahem.

(She left his hand and looked around)

Cabir: han manik tu karle drive ok ok chalo jaldi

Manik also understood Nandini wants to spend time with him so now he was thinking of ways to say no

Manik: han vo actually kal i couldn't sleep properly, and waise bhi abhi itni subeh hai, thodi neend bhi aa rahi hai..so to start with tu karle drive, after breakfast we'll switch

Cabir understood.

Cabir: as if abhi tu sowne walla hai (he said teasingly)

Navya: arre kyu tease kar rahe ho inn logon ko

Mukti: haha, lets not waste time. Jaldi chalo ab

Cabir took the driving seat with Navya on his side. In the middle row sat Mukbhi and at the last seat sat Manan.

Soon after the journey started, Navya fell asleep. Cabir couldn't help 'awww' her cuteness.

Mukti had snuggled in Abhimanyu's arms and they were enjoying the view outside.

Nandini had kept her head Manik's shoulder and he had held her waist tight.

Manik:Destiny is so perfect naa

Nandini: matlab?

Manik: 10 days pehle me & abhimanyu were cribing because mum was forcing us to come for this wedding..and look, ajj things are so different..I think it was all planned

Nandini: Yes, Destiny has perfect plans for all of us. We just need to wait for things to unfold

Manik: waiseee, tum uss langoor ko ab kya bologi?

Nandini: yehi that sorry I've fallen in love with another langoor
(She said cutely and gigled)

Manik: mai langoor haan?

Nandini nodded her head like a 2 year old baby.

Manik started tickling her and she was laughing like a baby.

While Cabir was driving, He could clearly hear Nandini laughing. He smiled.

Cabir's POV:
I am so happy for chotti. Uski life mein humesha se ek emptiness thi, she found her happiness, I am so so happy.

The journey continued the same oy, Navya kept sleeping the entire while while Manan and Mukbhi were busy romancing.

Cabir stopped the car at a dhabba for breakfast.

Cabir: chalo guys, time for breakfast.

Navya also woke up and they all got down.

Nandini: Mai washroom use karke atti hun, you guys order

They all ordered breakfast.

Manik: ohshit. I forgot my phone in car..mai leke atta hun

Mukti:ya cool

But we know our moster Manik really well, he hadn't forgotten his phone, he had gone to his 'girlfriend'!

Nandini was washing her face when she saw manik standing leaning to the wall.

Nandini: Manikkk. Tum yaha kya kar rahe hoo

Manik: kuch nahi, tumhe dekh raha hunn

Nandini: yeh girls washroom hai, koi aa gaya tohhh?!?!

Manik: oh haan. Chalo ek kaam karte hai, let me lock the door, toh tumhari yeh problem bhi solve ho jayegi

He locked the door.

Manik: happy?

Nandini opened the tap and spill some water on manik.

He also came forward and opened the other tap and started splashing water on her.

They both were playing like kids and gigling constantly.

The floor was all wet, Nandini was about to fall but he held Manik's hand and made him fall with her.

They had a deep intense eyelock.

Manik removed some strands on her face and placed them behind her ears.

manik: hasti raha karo Nandini, you look great like that

Nandini: ab tum ho na..mujhe smile karwane ke liye

He smiled and said "Humesha!"

They they both got up

Nandini: shit. Hum dono, we're wet.
Ab bahar sabko pata chal jayega that we're together..and andd aiyoo sab tease karenge

Manik: Han so madam, yeh sab apni yeh mini holi khelne se pehle sochna chaiye tha naa

Nandini: ab kya karee

Manik: kuch nahi kar sakte, janna hi padega. Chalo.

They opened the door and found Mukti standing outside.

Mukti looked at them and gave a confident smirk.

Mukti: I so knew it!

Nandini: Chalo na mukti please don't start now :$

Mukti: Han mai tumhe bulane hi aayi thi

They all went back and had food. The food time was accompanied by constant teasing and laughter.

Cabir was constantly noticing Navya. She seemed weak.

Cabir: Navya what's wrong?

He kept his hand on hers. she was warm, reallly warm.

Cabir: navya tum bahaut garam ho rahi ho..

Navya: Han vo thoda fever hai bas

Mukti: what? Navya tumne bataya kyu nahi.

Nandini: han navya why didn't you tell

Navya: issiliye hi nahi bataya, thoda sa toh fever hai bas, thiek ho jayega don't worry

They all finished breakfast and they resumed their journey.

This time Manik was driving with Abhimanyu sitting next to him. They knew Nandini would be his distraction so abhimanyu sat with him.

Navya and cabir sat on the last seat and Navya kept her head on his laps and slept.

Finally, at around 12Noon they reached jaipur and settled in their rooms.

Mukti and Abhimanyu shared a room.
Whereas the other two rooms were shared by Navya& nandini and Manik& Cabir.


***********


Guys, sorry I am bad at writing mushy gushy romance. Sorry ;p

Love,
Isha :*
Edited by Ishaaaaaa - 10 years ago
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u know what u r an amazing writer...keep writing...stay blessed...:)❤️

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