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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wooow woow wow awsome 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I m speechless totally speechless.ur update is amazing.can't tell you how much I loved it.I was eagerly waiting for this.I loved each and every word of ur's. I just can't wait long for next update.so it's a request please update ASAP. thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I just came across ur story n it's different n I liked it.
Continue soon.
Hope mannik will also love n realise his love for nandu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ANJITHA232

ayyo...poor nandu..
'njan ee manik ne kollum'(malayalam)
amazing part
thanx for the pm


njanum kollan help chyam.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazng part dr..
he need to realize dat he loves her.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update dear .
Continue with the next part as soon as possible .
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Awesome update...nandinis unconditional love is penned so beautifully and manik confused about his feelings but the reason he could hear her voice is becoz he loves her but yet to realize it .. I don't like him romancing naina or anyone except nandini..but nandinis pure love will change him ...A perfect title for a perfect story ..and am truly enchanted with your story..waiting eagerly to read the next chapter please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys!!!here goes another update.
Part 3:

The party was going on. He came down and stood on a corner and scanned through the guests. Everyone was busy with different thngs. Some were dancing to the soft music playing in the back ground when some where just talking. Manik saw harsh and nyonika greeting some guests with dhruv. Seeing them happy a small smile crept on his lips. He loved his parents and brother very much and he could do anything to see them happy. He was just scanning through the guest when he saw Naina dancing cozily with one of the guest. He shakes his head and observed everyone. He was so engrossed in observing the guests that he didn't notice dhruv standing next to him. "Bhai" dhruv called softly but manik was lost in thoughts so he didn't hear it. "Bhaii" dhruv called him a bit louder and patted his shoulder. Manik stood straight and liked at dhruv and smiled. "Kya hua? Tum yaha kya jar rahi ho? This party is for u and u r standing her? Go" manik said and slightly pushed dhruv. "Bhai I was there till now but aap toh kab se yahi khada noon. Kya hua? Its so unlike u." Dhruv asked concerned. Yes dhruv was write manik was not like this. Manik always had the center of attention and he liked it. And today he was just standing in a corner thinking. Thinking about what? Even Manik didn't know. "Nothing. Its ur big day not mine. Just enjoy" he said smiling and side hugging him. Dhruv has also seen Naina flirting with other guests, so dhruv confronted manik about it "bhai did u cal naina?" Dhruv asked straight forward. "Well technically she self invited herself cuz she is my gf" manik said hand quoting the last part. Dhruv giggled but then turned serious and asked "bhai don't u think this is wrong?" Dhruv knew this was a topic manik didn't wanted to talk about but dhruv wanted answers. "What is wrong? Say clearly" manik asked knowing were the conversation was going. He didn't wanted to talk about it but he had to give some answers to shut dhruv. "Y do u do this? " dhruv asked pointing towards naina. "Dhruv agar tumne dekha nahi toh mein batao am not doing anything. She is doing something with him" manik replied sarcastically. "Bhai don't start that. U know what I meant, all these gf's and stuff. U know what might be going through nandu" dhruv asked concerned for his best friend and bhai. Manik hated when dhruv called her nandu but never said anything.

"I married her just cuz mom and dad wanted me to. She is not my type." Manik said casualling shrugging his shoulder."Bhai kabhi toh serious ho jao. U know know na how much she loves you. And she never complained about anything phir bhi.." Dhruv was cut off by manik" I know she loves me but I don't lover her" he said firmly. Dhruv sighed in defeat and went back to greet the guests. Naina kept herdelf busy in flirting with the guests and sometimes manik. And just before the party got over manik called naina to a corner "we are over" manik said coldly "what?but y baby?" Naina asked confused. "Is it cuz of ur dumb wife? Come on baby she didn't care at all" naina said and leaned to kiss him only to be stopped by him. "First we r over cuz u bored me and second my wife is not dumb and u don't know hwe so stop commenting. Now go" he said between gritted teeth. Naina left there without saying anything. That was manik. He can scare nandini or scold her or shout at her but that was his right no one else's and those who try to say anything about her will have to face manik,s consequences so no one dared to speak or even utter her name.

The party was over and guests left. Everyone went to their respective rooms. It was 1am. Manik entered the room and saw nandini still sleeping. He closed the door and changed into tracks and lied down beside her. He checked her temperature. This time temperature has reduced very much. He kept her hands around her waist without touching the scratch and wounds and he dozed off. After sometimes nandini woke up and saw manik sleeping like a baby. She always adored his sleeping face. He looked like a baby. She caressed his hair and came out of his grip. As she removed his hands she realized that she is not wearing her top. She slowly hopped down the bed and saw her waist was bandaged with medicine. She understood manik did that. She without making any noise tiptoednto the terrace door and stood there looking out of the glass door. She stood there thinking about her life and how it changed after her parents death and her marriage to manik. She knows manik doesn't love her and he married her cuz mom and dad asked him to. Even after knowing this she never stopped him from making love to her. She allowed him cuz she loved him but he did it cuz he thought it was normal btw husband and wife. This thought made her sad. Her eyes brimmed with tears. She wiped her tears and touched her waist. But before she could do that she was pulled by a strong hands and she crashed into someone's chest. She knew the touch, it was manik. He couldn't sleep. To make love to nandini every night has become a habit for manik. He won't b able to sleep if he doesn't do it. She blinked away rest of her tears and turned towards him. His eyes had something else to say today but she couldn't read it. He bend down and kissed her lips softly yet deeply. First she was shocked manik rarely kissed on her lips or face when they make love. He kissed her when he was worried or confused and these two things had no much part in maniks life. But today neither he nor she didn't know the reason for the kiss. He gently brushed his fingers on her bruised waist and she finches. Manik parted her lips and entered her mouth and tasted her every inch. Nandini was pulling him more closer as if asking for more. He parted the kiss when he felt nandini needed to breathe. She was looking gorgeous in the milky moonlight. He just picked her up and placed her on the bed and placed himself on top of her. He gently removed her bra and kissed her breasts. He trailed kisses on her shoulders and cleavage. He slowly sucked her nipples when he massaged and pinched the other one. She clutched his shoulder digging her nails and moaning. He then stripped rest of their clothes and gently enters her. She clutched the bedsheets tightly as pleasure and pain shot up in her body. Pleasure of manik being inside her and pain due to the wounds on her waist which he squeezed unknowingly. Her tears trickled down her cheeks. He gently moved in and out of her manikg her moan his name. The slow torture continued until she came apart follows by him. He gently over it of her and smashed his lips on her shocking her again but she responded with equal passion. He broke the kiss and lied beside her and engulfed her in a hug and slept like that. The pain was getting unbearable but she kept quiet as she was afraid of him. She was awake for a long time thinking about manik. She looked af the time and it was 4am. She gave out a sight and whispered an I love you in his ears and slept off.


So that's it for today. Hope u guys will like it. Do comment ur views and suggestions.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
its awesome

Even u
Edited by Natashaaaaa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
That's painful... poor nandu... amazing update again...
and glad that the naina part got over, waiting for the twists and turns in the stry with obviously maniks changed feelings towards nandini...😊

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