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preethipari

@preethipari

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey frns this is my new ff make ur self ready to enjoy the beautiful experience of love

Two pure souls filled with love but teenage is a age which is filled with a lot of emotions a age were we all fr once flow with the emotions

Emotions filled of anger confusion love etc etc

Gonna post story frm tomorrow

Hope u like it

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preethipari

@preethipari

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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 1

INTRODUCTION

Nandini: hi I'm nandini I'm happy with my life i love my life a lot Dr is always smone to support Me wait a minute let me tell you the truth dairy I'm not happy with how I am I dont love my life i hate it Dr is no one to support me i hv to pretend dt im happy my mom rules my life my dad left me n mom alone n he just walked out of our life's n my mom wants me to excell in studies n stay away frm boys n also frnz stay alone she thinks that they spoil me but right know i need frnz bcz they r the only one who cn understand me i m not interested in science but my mom forced me to take science I'm interested in music bcz vn i was alone all left me i engaged my self into music but now no one cares wtevr I made my admission fr +1 in S.P.A.C.E. Ya it is famous fr music n science I choosed it Bcz i dont wanna stay away frm music so finally in MUMBAI gotta get sm alone time happy fr it... 2mrw a new day new life leaving fr Mumbai

Manik: cm let's meet manik he is nyonika malhotra son he is so alone in his life his mom just uses him fr a signature frm her husband as manik parents are divorced his thoughts dt he is unwanted killed him like he'll but this is smthng made him arrogant irritated with every small thing he just wanted to be loved by smone smone who could understand wt did he go through in his past ya in his small age no one cared him he saw all aloness in his life but now he didn't even want to gv ppl dt one chance so dt he could be loved. He was in his +1but 1 YEAR older dn nandini he is of 19...

So how was Dr introduction get ready to find who two disturbed souls get together n heal eachother n bcm purest souls

Plzz gv me rply

Feedback needed

Nxt part as soon as possible

Hope ur liking it...

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zaroge

@zaroge

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice n interesting

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For the next part

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FrizzAngie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice start do continue soon

Waiting ahead for the next part

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preethipari

@preethipari

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

PART 2

IN HYDERABAD

Nandini: mom we r getting late fr the train we hv to leave

Nandini mom name is ( neetu)

Neetu: ha I know i told u to search clg over hear but madam ko toh jana hai

Nandini didn't say anything n they left fr station

IN STATION

Neetu: I hope o don't need to tell u anything ladko sa dhur rahna n ur purpose of going there is to complete ur studies only studies n no need to make more frnz there as ul only stay Dr fr 2 years

Nandini thinking: ohhh God... Wt only 2 years it's 2 long years finally getting lone time

Nandini: mom trust me I won't do anything like dt

Neetu hugs nandini n says good bye

Nandini leaves fr Mumbai

THE NXT MRNG

IN MANIK HOUSE

Manik suddenly get a Cl in 6:00AM IT WAS NYONIKA

Nyonika: manik get ready we need to attend a party a business party in London after 3 days

Manik: whole down... Nyonika I'm not gonna cm

Nyonika: manik did u frgt we hv a gv n take relationship so...

Manik: so wt I dont gv a damn... Abt it

He cuts the call in anger n leaves fr clg

Meanwhile nandini reaches clg with her bags she was dressed up in a denim blue jeans with a white formal top n tied her hair in a loose bun she entered in it was a whole new experience fr her she was so happy she shifted her bags in her hostel room n went out fr some paper work she was wearing a high heels of white colour n walking on the floor in the corridor which made a Lil sound

Vn nandini was passing a class room she heard sounds of smone throwing benches here n there in anger

Nandini slowly went but smhow sounds frm her heels made the person know dt smone was there outside the classroom

N then he cm out

Nandini was shocked n shivering in fear he cm out n was seeing at her he was so damn close to her

Nandini was just lost in his eyes the eyes which was filled with her anger n smwere a feeling of helplessness

Nandini broke the eyelock by saying

Nandini :don't be hard on yourself

Manik anger faced just changed into a feeling dt smone is dr to help him

N he left frm Dr

So frnz dts fr now plzz do gv me feedback

Plzzz gv rply frnz feel free to rply

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preethipari

@preethipari

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Posted: 10 years ago

PART 3

Precap: manik left frm Dr after listening to nandini words

Nandini was lost in her own thoughts n walking towards the office room suddenly she bumps into a girl

Nandini: sry sry sry... I'm rly sry...

The girl was navya

Navya: haaa dhek ka nahi chal sakthe ho

Nandini: I'm sorry I was just lost

Navya: it's ok chill hi I'm navya

Nandini: Nandini (they shake hands)

Navya: fresher batch

Nandini: ya even u

Navya: yo which music do u play western ya classical

Nandini: I'm on science side

Navya: ohhh chalo dn see u around byeee

Nandini: see ya bye

It is so know in S.P.A.C.E. Dt fab 5 rules over Dr

Yes fab 5: mukti

Cabir

Aliya

Dhruv

N of course the lead member of music band none other than MANIK MALHOTRA

IN CANTEEN

fab 5 enters in canteen every one around Dr bcm silent Dr a while

Manik: everyone out right now

Everyone went out only fab 5 remained

Cabir: manik if u don't wanna go don't go

Manik: but I know she will (nyonika) do smthng dt il hv to go with dt nyonika

Aliya : dn y dont U Cl ur dad

Mukti: ya u r right Aliya may be he should Cl his dad

Manik was thinking abt the girl(nandini ) how did she understand me her eyes were so deep it's like I don't wanna take my eyes out of her I wanna see her right now plzzz just once only fr once

Nandini finished her paperwork suddenly she got heavy hiccups she rushed to the canteen didn't even notice dt fab 5 was inside

The door sound made manik realise dt smone came in he was hoping dt it'll be the same girl n it was his same girl He was shocked she was running in her heels towards the counter she was not even able to talk as she getting continuous hiccups

The waiter: yes mam wt do u want...

Nandini: vo...

Waiter : vo... Kya mam

MANIK realise n gv her a bottle of water which was on their table

Nandini drinks the water while she was drinking manik was just staring at her with a lite smile on his face

He was lost in her innocence

She drinks the water n realises it was the same guy

Nandini: thanks...

Nandini realises dt whole Dr frns r there

Nandini: I'm sorry to disturb u guyzz I'm rly sry excuse me...

N she walked out

Manik wanted to see her fr smtime Mr

do rply frnz

Rly frnz plz gv feed back

Nxt part as soon as possible

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lavina1612

@lavina1612

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update..

Liked it..

Continue soon :)

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princessangel23

@princessangel23

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome ! Beautifully penned! 👏

Eagerly waiting ! Pls continue asap!

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Kuushi

@Kuushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting story..read all the chapters looking forward to read more of the story..please continue soon :)

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preethipari

@preethipari

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

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PART 4

Recap :Nandini excuses her self n walks away frm the canteen

Manik didn't want her to go he just wanted to see her

Her heels light sounds he loved to hear them

Mukti: yaar iski ithni himmat how cannae walk into

Cabir: Luks like she's new to clg ab toh isko bathana padaga

Manik: nooo (in tension) n every one gvs WHY?????? luk

Ah... Ehm... I mean wo uski galti nahi hai smone remembered her very badly iseleya she got hiccups n i dont think it is her fault

Cabir: u fine na...

Manik: ha y

Cabir: Matlab u didn't explain so big fr anyone

Manik just hmmed n they went to their classes

Hostels in S.P.A.C.E. Were in the academy

IN NANDINI ROOM ( HOSTEL)

She stayed in a single room

Nandini was luking her self in a mirror n talking

Nandini: u know I felt Dr the guy whom I met is in pain a lot of pain he was in the samecondition like me ya vn my dad left us (nandini n Neetu) I was in a helpless situation one side anger n other side mom's torture she was thinking n tears flow frm her eyes

Nandini wipes her tears n says to herself

Nandini: relax nandini see Dr's no one around ur a free bird n wt ever hpnd is ur past don't cry fr wt ur not wrong relax nandini

THIS WHOLE CONVERSATION IS HEARD BY MANIK AS HE WAS STANDING IN FRONT OF THE DOOR

Manik: shez different oh... God she...

(he smiles n walk of frm Dr)

Manik went to the help desk which was in the same corridor of her room

Manik: hey I wanted to know sm information abt the room (he pointed towards nandini room)

Mam: sry bt we r not supposed to gv any type of information of our hostel girls

Manik in loud tone: do u know who owns this clg it's me damn.. It.. N i can do wtevr I want

Mam: I'm sorry sir just a minute Il gv u her name n details

She was checking the computer

Manik thinking: finally il get to know her name finally he was so excited