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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
loved it
good one
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow update after a very long
Time
Superb update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update after so long...
Cont soon...and thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi...m new reader to ur ff...
Amws concept...
Beautifully written...
Jst loved it...
Continue soon...nd Pm me pls...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww
Amazing story beautifully penned each and every word yr muaaahhh dear

Sooo beautifully portrayed yr

Plz accept my buddy request and plz pm me next part pretty pretty please

Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
NEXT PART


Recap:story of Mnik n nandini where nandini returns India after 6 months n realises that she only loved malik.. N now aliya, suhani, mukti n nandini planned a party in the resort

...


Manik found change in nandini behaviour he knew that their relationship is in a point where they both love eachother but maybe don't hav the trust that they can survive any problem or they don't want eachother to hurt by dragging them into the problem

He was confused he wanted nandini but nandini... She didn't wanted Manik to face any problem...


EVENING...


Nandini on the other hand was planning to propose Manik n once again they can be together


They all went into the pool side


Nandini was luking for Manik n when she found him she was trying to talk

But Manik was angry n avoiding her

N suddenly Manik tells to all the boys that

"guyzz listen hum sab mere room mein jayenge I hv this special vodka... Ladkiyo ko koye kuch nahi bathayega ohhkk chalo..."


Manik goes to the kitchen to bring glasses n he brings the vodka bottle...


Nandini also come to kitchen to take water to all the girls


Nandini: tum sab kaha ho matlab neecha kyu nahi aarahe


Manik was hiding the bootle n when nandini goes to the fridge he immediately pours the vodka into a jug so that it looks water


Manik: voo upar hum vodka...


Nandini: vodka...?????


Manik: kya vodka? Konsa vodka? Hum toh... Bas... Upar... Upar... Match dhekrahe the ajayenge thodi dher mein...


Nandini: ohhh jaldi ajav na tumse kuch bolna tha


Manik: ha... Hum ajayenge


Nandini also fillable water in the jug n takes glasses which exactly luked like his tray

Suddenly nandini put the tray beside his and comes close to Manik


Manik was scared as he didn't want nandini to see the vodka bottle which he was already catching behind in his hands


Manik: pass kyu aaraheho


Nandini: tum kuch chuparahe ho na


Manik: what mein kya tum pagal hogaye ho mein kyu kuch chpavunga jao sab vaha tumare intezaar kar rahe honge


Nandini: Manik ur acting weird... Chalo byee


Nandini accidently takes the vodka tray


Manik also don't realise it... N he goes up to his room with water tray


IN MANIKS ROOM


Manik: chalo bhai log ab mazaa lete hai is special vodka from America


Aya: yaar ab pela bhi de mujse ruka nahi jarahe hai


Cabir: ha yaar jaldi


Maanik: lekin ek baat bata raha hu ye vala ek dam strong vala vodka hai I'm 100 percent sure ki tum ye kabhi apne zindagi mein taste nahi kare hogi...

Dhruv: abhee tempt math kar

After having their first shot

Ayan: iska taste... Toh

Cabir: ha re iska taste...

Dhruv: offoo kyuki ye pani hai mineral water...

Manik: what ye kaise hosaktha hai

Cabir: sun bhai kahi choddhiya kya kuch dusra toh leka nahi agaya

Manik: ohhh shit... Neha vo pani ki tray ka sath exchange hogaya shayad

Dhruv: ha toh vapas lalenga na itna kyu tension lerahehai

Manik (panicked): abhay tension ki hi toh bath hai vo tray ladkiyo ke sath exchange hogaye...

Ayan: marvadhiya na tune ab...

Cabir: ab kya? Bhaita ho aaram se chalo dhekte hai ki unke halat kya hue hogi...

Everyone rushes to the poolside...
N what they saw there just blowed their minds...
...

Gonna update real soon
Bada wala sorry to all my readers
Just completed my boards n I'm gonna update it real soon
...
Preethi

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.
Page ka bhi comments check kalena
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Posted: 9 years ago
NEXT PART
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Dhruv: ohhh no tune tray exchange kardiya kya neeche

Manik: shayd.. Chalo chal ke dhekenge ( he was literally having panic attacks)

Cabir: manik chill kuch nahi hoga chill

Ayan: ha chal ke dheksenge
...

IN THE POOL

When all the boys reached pool they saw nothing the girls werent there..

Cabir: ab ye laha gaye

Manik: ohhh no agat auntys ko ueh baath batha chali toh they wil kill us

Ayan: aur meri toh vaat lag jayage

Dhruv: guyzzz ab dhundo

They search inside the house

Suddenly this loud music starts from nandini's room they all run there

...

IN NANDINI ROOM
(girls were totally on the drink)

mukti: ye lo bandar bhi agay

Cabir: mukti tu teak toh hai na

Mukti: nooo im awesome

Dhruv: ha vo dhikraha hai

Suhani: ayan ke bache... ( she falls on him)

Ayan: suhani... Suhani...

Aliya: lagta hai iska peheli bar hai iseleya bichari handle nahi kar pa rahe hai

Manik: girls where is NANDINI...

Aliya: nandini... Vooo toh yahe thi batha nahi kaha chalegaye...

Manik: what kaha chalegaye

Mukti: abheyyy humse kya puch raha hai tu kudh jaka dund na (laughs)

...

manik gets worried for nandini
...
On the other side in the street market nearby tge resort
Nandini who was drowling here n there...

Nandini: wow... Kya masth jagah hai ye...

Nandini phone rings she take it out from her bag...

Nandini to her self ; aree wahh finally manik ko meri yaad ahi gayi...

Nandini lifts the call

Manik: hello nandini tum kaha ho... Were are u yaar plzzz tell me n how r u tum teakh toh ho na...

Nandini: areee pehele tumare konsi question ki answer karu... (she laughs)

Manik: (in full anger tone) listen ms.nandini murthy kaha ho abhi ki abhi bathav

Nandini: manik gussa kyu hotha ho voo mein toh bas aisa hi aagayi thi yaha market mein

Manik: what????? Market ghumne kaliya vahi jagah mili thi kya ohhh god tumhara kuch nahi hosaktha hai nandini

Nandini: excusme (in a srs tone)

Manik: listem jab tak mein vaha na aau u dont move from there

Nandini: aree u hv so much of attitude... Manik malhotra now im going from here bye...

Manik: are.. Listen... Hello hello...

Nandini cuts the call...

Manik: ohhh god ye ladki...

Manik goes into the market n asks the ppl n finds out that a girl has gone to the hill top of that place...

Manik reaches that place n sees nandini sitting there in the sunset...

Manik to himself: thank god...

He runs to her n cathes her hand in anger

Manik: what the hell is this nandini

Nandin smiling: r u blind ye dheko it luks heaven
This beautiful sunset...

Manik smils

Nandini: ohhh toh manik malhotra is smiling

Manik: what me noo im not a fool like u to smile all the time...

Nandini: acha chodo let me tell u a story sunoge na

Manik: ha ab vahi nahi tha vo bhi kardo

Nandini: soo listen ek ladka tha who came in my life when i was in S.P.A.C.E ... Jise mein ne itna tang kiya itna kiya ki agar uska jagah koyi aur hota na toh shayad mujhe kabka chod ke chala jatha

Manik maniks eyes were rolling in tears but didn't let them come out

Nandini: n mein ne toh itne bhar ussa hurt kiya ki mekn kabhi kudh ko maaf nahi karsakti n u know what itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi im surprised ki vo mujhse abhi bhi pyaar karta hai... Mein shayad sabse lucky hu ki mujhe us jaisa ladka mila lekin us kaliya mein unlucky hu jo uski zindagi ki ek hissa hi karab kardiya... But u know what... Mein ne usko bathaya tha ki this would never work out lekin vo tha ki jisne kabhi bhi mere saath nahi choda... "He always told" what ever happens il tke care of it u just dont leave me "... N me i was a stupid ki mein ne usse chod dhiya

Manik (in anger n pain) : toh agar itna pyaar tha toh tumne choda kyu... Usse...

Nandini: usi kaliya

Manik: what

Nandini: ha ek din uske mom ayithi mere pass aur bola ki agar manik ki future agga badna hai toh mujhe uski life se hamesha hamesha kaliya chala jana chahiya... N mein uuski raste ka pathar nahi bansaktti thi...

Nandini turns towards manik she look in to his eyes manik also sees in her eyes...

Nandini: (tears in her eyes) : Manik
She catches his hands

Nandini: i know ki tum ab firse mujpe trust nahi karsakte but meri ek baath sunlo plzz ... Aaj tak ye" I CANT LIVE WITHOUT U " sentence bohot filmy lagta tha but aaj peheli baar tume khone ka dar lag raha hai kudh ko khone ka dar lagraha hai... Shayad i might bhi the worst thing hpnd in ur life but trust me ur the one n only best thing that hpnd to me... Jab tum mere sath ho toh acha lagta hai... Jis din se tuma dheke usi din se ache lagta hai... When i see ur eyes na aisa lagta hai ki im not alone u are ther to take care of me... Timhare bina kuch bhi acha nahi lagta hai... Shayad mein ne ye kehne mein bohot dher kardiya... now i dont expect u to love me its ur choice but... Plzzz forgive me...

Manik takes of his hands from her

Manik: nandini kabhi kisi bhi cheez kaliya dher nahi hoti hai... Aur jaha tak forgive karne ki hai... Toh mein kabhi tumse gussa tha hi nahi... Bas i was hurt ki shayad i didnt make u trust me shayd mein tume vo himat nahi dhesaka ki tum completely mujhepe trust karsako... But aaj tumne boldiya toh ab i feel relaxed...

Nandini n manik stand
Nandini goes on her knees

Nandini: manik will u marry me

Manik (he smiles n in funny way) : sochna padega

Nandini: what the hell do u mean ab. U hv no choice shaadi karo varna...

Manik: varna...

Nandini comes near to him toh il shoot u (laughs)

Manik: ha baba tume ek bar chodka dhek chuka hu ab phir se risk nahi lesakta hu... Ms.nandini murthy

Nandini comes close to Manik

Nandini: chalo jo itne dino se kehena chahti hu vo kehediya n manik can u plz take me home
N she falls on him

Manik: lagta hai isko chadgayi...
He kisses on her forehead

RESORT SCENES...

Manik bring nandini to resort n settle all the girls sleep in one room
...
Precap: MRNG SCENES... Really funny it will be...

Next update will be fun
Plzz gv me views about this updte

Edited by preethipari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tysm for updating

Chotu tha yr

N plxxz whenever u pm na
Link chalta nahi h
Plzzz tell me na y

Keep it up

Hope nandu manofy manik sooon

Vidhu

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