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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Awesome update
But I m so upset yar
Manan's break up...not fair
Can't bear it
Please fix it soon
Thanks for pm
Please update soon
Can't wait
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Shocking twist after a beautiful revelation..yaar two weeks fast forward kyun kardiya..atleast one chapter full of manan and then the jatka..well love the story and your writing too so I believe there are more amazing chapters in line..and manan will unite soon :) waiting for the next chapter please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Wooww amaizing and really sad to see manik like this. And yeah w trust u,
we hope next update will be evrrithink all right.
Cont soon 😉
Edited by Hadjer13 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
wow lovely update
but then ended very emotionally
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
hope you make up soon!!
loved your update
continue soon!!
thanks for pm!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Woww... seriously...
Wat a story...
in love wit yur story...❤️
Its super AWSOME! 👏
Read all parts in 1 goo...
I truly loved yur story... ⭐️
D best part u update daily...
Update soon...
Tooo excited... I knoe u won't seprate dem...
U need twists n turns stories sooits ok!!
Waiting... ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
hey everyone...here i am with part 12...hope u read enjoy and leave ur precious comments...also please spread the word about my ff... that would mean a lot to me...if u enjoy my ff then please do so :) :)

PART11
Its 3am..fab4's flight is in half an hour..Everyone is in the car..they r all sleepy except for manik..they dont talk much..they go to the airport and catch their flight for dehradhun..after arriving to dehradhun they met all of their teachers who were happy to have them back..afterwards they met veebha!!their best friend from WH whose now a teacher their..they all hugged her and were really happy!!at night they were catching up on everything that happened lately..suddenly veebha noticed manik isnt really paying any attention
V:r a manik!tujhe kya hua??itna khoya khoya sa kiyu hai?
C:isse ishq ne mara hai!
V:matlab?
Mt:matlab yeh nandini ko miss kar raha hai!!
V:nandini?
D:maniks love of life and our best friend..the only girl who manages to calm manik down!!
V:what??manik malhotra ko pyar ho gaya hai?is that possible?r u sure that this isnt one of those infatuations of manik?
M:tum logo k pass aur kuch nehi hai kya baat karne k liye?(he leaves the place)
V:ise kya hua?
C:kuch nehi yaar..bas nandini ko miss kar raha hai!!
V:so tell me more...I want to hear about maniks love Story!!
Cabir describes it all..how they met..how fab4 became fab5 and how manan got together
V:wow!!thie nandini girl sounds amazing!
D:she is..pata nehi manik do din kaise rahega uske bina!!abhi uski yeh halat hai!! Everyone laughs..then they go to their respective rooms..veebha was about to enter her room when she saw someone...
Manik was standing alone..he never felt this bad about anything..he has broken up with so many girls before but he never felt so bad..
Pov:did I do something wrong?Maybe I should have given her a chance to explain..but how could she hide such a big thing from me!!I cant let it go that easily..but it's been 15hours since I heard her voice..why didn't she make an attempt to contact!!oh god!!this is so frustrating!!what should I do?? Manik was lost in his thoughts when he felt a tap on his back..he turned around to see veebha
V:so mr.majnu manik!!abhi bhi nandini k bare mai soch rahe ho!!
Manik smiled faintly
V:r a baba!24 hours ki hi to baat hai..then ull be with her again..
M:I dnt knw..
V:what do u mean by u dnt knw?tum kuch din aur rahoge dehradhun mai?
M:I dnt knw about love v!
V:oh god!ur still stuck!manik I hav heard ur love story..its so beautiful...its clearly evident that u two love each other!!
M:I dnt knw veebha..I just dnt know
V:look manik I dnt knw tu aisa kiyu bol raha hai..aur mai puchongi vi nehi..bas itna kahungi ki manik that jo bhi hua hai jiske waja se tu itna upset hai thats not more vital than ur love..love is never easy..u always hav to fight to protect ur love n the person that u love..sometimes some things happen that u dnt expect..but theres a reason behind everything..but whatever that reason is its never big enough to let go off true love..
M:how do I knw k if its true love?
V:if its true love than u will feel it within u..just dont give up manik!!give ur love a second chance..or else u will regret ir forever...
M:hmmm
V:goodnight manik..maine jo kaha uske bareme sochna(she leaves)
M:veebha ur right...I cant let go of nandini...she is much more important than my stupid ego! Manik looks at his watch
Pov:24hours nandu!! We'll be back together!!!
Next night after the the performance fab4 took the first flight back to mumbai...manik was restless to meet his nandini..he wanted to go as soon as they reach but by the time he dropped everyone else it was too late so he decided to pick nandini up the next morning..but next morning when he reached nandinis residence it was locked.He thought that nandini must hav gone to college early to meet him.he went to college and entered the music room..nandini wasnt there..only fab3 was there with a sulked face..
m:what happened guys?Nandini kaha hai?
D:tujhe kuch pata nehi hai?
M:kya pata nehi hai?
Mt:teri usse baat nehi hui hai kya?
M:mukti just cut the crap..kya hua hai?
C:after we left nandini got a call from the biggest science college in banglore...she got a full time scholarship there..so she went there and she is actually considering about taking up this offer..cause then she would get to stay with her ams..
manik felt like his heart just skipped a beat..
M:what!!
D:well yeah!!usse aj subha hi hamari baat hui!usne tujhe nehi bataya!! Manik knelt down..he grabbed his head with his hands
M:oh god!!its all because of me..I've lost her..I've hurt her so much
Fab3 were shocked..they ran to him
Mt:hey manik we were just kidding...she went to banglore for her cousins wedding..when I talked she said that u guys haven't talked in the last two days..so we thought of doing a little prank..we r so sorry
M:no mukti!!I hav lost her its all my fault
C:what r u talking about? Manik narrated their entire break up story..cabir tightly punched manik..manik was startled..
C:what?I told u na that agar use hurt kiya to mera bura side dekhega!!Remember?
M:ur right..I deserve more punches..but I cant live without her..
Mt:u wont..pack ur bags!!we r going to banglore
m:what?
D:I think muktis right...last year when we went there we had so much fun!! Lets go
C:yeah dude!!lets go!!
M:but she wont forgive me
C:she will cause she loves u just as much..
manik gets up and hugs them all..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
nice update 👏
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
ohhh
thank GOD he's not angry
at her any more "
hope nandu forgive him
n they get back together
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Amazing...
In last update I thought tum in dono ko alag kar dogi...
But now all ok...
Waiting for managalore track...

Thanx for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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