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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Hi... I just loved it.. It was really good.. Please pm me too..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
So Manik along with the gang is leaving to fetch Nandu back.. yayy.. so excited!!
Update soon.
And if possible please pm me !!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello lovely readers...finally got an off from college today..so posting early today :) :) :) to all those who want pms buddy me and i will stop sending pms to those who dont comment cause at this point it seems like im wasting my point by disturbing u by a sending a pm about a ff that u dont even read...so please comment and lemme know that u r reading... :) :) :)


PART13
Fab5 reached the murthy residence in banglore..they entered and found chachi and ams talking..both chachi and ams were surprised and happy to see all of them..they went n hugged both of them
Ams:kya beta!poore ek saal baad aye ho tumlog!hamari yaad nehi ai?
C:apbhi to ekbr bhi mumbai nehi ai humse milne!
A;meri to umar ho gayi hai...main kitna travel kar sakti hu?
M:ap ki umar???kya keh rahi hai???ur still young enough to be my girlfriend...
aams pulled maniks ears..
Aams:ho gaya??ab or buttering ki zaroorat nehi hai...
M:ouch!!even u know that im telling the truth
Mk:ha aams...u have to tell me the secret to ur skin..its still glowing!!!
Aams:accha baat a bohat ho gayi..ab jake fresh ho jaw..bohat durse aye ho!
M:chachi nandini kaha hai?
Ams:tumhari dost bahar gayi hai navya k saath..ajaigi..
Fab4 went to take some rest..after a while they came out sat in the living room..they met Arohi and Rehan whose wedding was about to take place..
Arohi:nandini tum logo se milke bohat khush hogi!!aur ha ab agaye ho to shaadi to attend karke hi jaoge..
C:of course..
R:maine tumlogo ki bareme bohat suna hai..u guys will have to perform at our sangeet...
D:yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai...of couse..
they were all chit chatting ut maniks eyes were stuck on the door...hie heart was getting more n more restless every second...he was missing his nandini a hell lot..
suddenly nandini n navya entered the room..they were shocked to see fab4..manik felt so glad after seeing her..all he felt like doing was to run and hug her tightly..
N:tum log yaha! Mukti went to her and hugged her..
Mt:bass teri yaad agai to chale aye!
Cabir n dhruv also hugged her..nandini was happy then her eyes fell on manik who was then standing beside her..manik was about to hug her but she moved away smartly..manik was hurt but he didn't say anything..dhruv went and hugged navya..navya was startled but she hugged him back..they all sat down together and talked about their past two days..manik kept stealing glances of nandini...he tried to talk to her but didn't get a single chance to do so..
nandini suddenly got a call and moved from there...manik followed her...after finishing the call nandini turned to return when manik pulled her into a bear hug...nandini was sandwiched between his arms and his chest..manik hugged her so tight that if were made of glass she would break into pieces...he broke the hug after what seemed like eternity...
M:i missed you...he slowly kissed her forehead..nandini was about to say something but aams called her so she had to leave...
at night when manik was about to go to sleep cabir came in
C:dude nandini is alone in her room..mukti distracted navya..now is the right time..go and talk to her!!
M:thanx dude!
C:thanx baad mai bolna..now run!!!
Manik entered into nandinis room silently..it was dark all around.nandini was standing beside the window with her eyes closed..the moonlight was enlightening her face..she looked more beautiful than ever!!manik went to her and hugged her form her back..nandini knew who it was..she didn't resist the hug..a tear drop rolled down her cheeks..manik broke the hug..he came In front of nandini
M:nandini before u say anything..im sorry!!!im an idiot,im a dumbass..possibly the worst boyfriend ever..I judged u for protecting me from getting hurt..I shouldn't have done that..im sorry nandini..last two days were hectic for me..I cant live without nandini..I just cant..plz forgive me!!I promise ill never hurt u again..nandini smiled faintly
N:manik I cant forgive u
M:but!! Nandini hushed him with her fingers
N:I cant forgive u cause im not mad at u!!I didn't talk to u before because I thought u were mad at me..I was wrong manik..I should hav told u..im sorry
Manik hugged her tightly..nandini also hugged him back...manik broke the hug..he was happy to have his nandini back..he kissed nandinis forehead..he leaned in to kiss her..nandini put her palms in between..
N:theres something that I want to tell u
M:go ahead.. he intertwined their fingers and kissed her fingers..nandini left his hand...she turned to the other direction
N:manik after what happened...I dnt think that we should be in a relationship..I know that we cant live without each other..bt as friends we never fought.if we remain a couple then we'll keep fighting..I dnt want to lose u manik!!so we r better off as friends.. manik was shocked
M:but nandini!
N:no buts manik..I know that its going to be tough..but it will work out for the best later on..
m:but...
N:manik bohat der ho gayi hai..navya aati hi hogi..u should go to ur room..nandini in a away pushed manik out of the room...manik tried to knock but couldnt he was to do broken to do anything...on the other side nandini crashed into her bed...even though it was her decision she couldnt control her tears...

precap:entries...ceremonies...manan moments...

Edited by audity.sm - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
M first...
Awesome girl...
But plz dont seprate them...
U put the girl name in ur ff is aarohi..
my name is also aarohi... hahaha
But i have a doubt do u read our comments or not.. coz i haven't seen any reply or like on any comment coz if u read then plz like though we also come to know that u r reading our comments as well...
I hope u understand why I said that...
But its too short...
Make it lil long..
Cont soon..
Thanx for pm..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
Edited by angel98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Nice Update
Thanks for PM😊
Edited by CoolPasta - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
I always do comment dear
I love ur story
Loved ams and gang conversation
Cabir our all-time savior
But it's not fair yar
This time Nandini doesn't want the relationship
Please don't do this
Bring Manan together plzzz
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Fab update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Oh gosh again they are separated...phew.. manan are crazy..loved the fab 5 bonding with nandini's family..awesome update..waiting for the next chapter precap is interesting..please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: angel98

M first...
Awesome girl...
But plz dont seprate them...
U put the girl name in ur ff is aarohi..
my name is also aarohi... hahaha
But i have a doubt do u read our comments or not.. coz i haven't seen any reply or like on any comment coz if u read then plz like though we also come to know that u r reading our comments as well...
I hope u understand why I said that...
But its too short...
Make it lil long..
Cont soon..
Thanx for pm..

LOVE,
AAROHI...




First of all always commenting...I do read the comments but its so hard to reply to comments because of my stupid phone...since my exams r coming next so im not allowed to use my laptop for more than half an hour...and most of it I spend to update my story...but I read it and love all of ur comments!!!!!! please do showering my story with ur lovely comments...I know its a bit short...but it will be worth it in the next updates...Please do tell what u want type of scenes do u want to see next... options 1.sweet n romantic 2.emotional 3.hawt!!!!!!!! :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey it was amazing I really love ur ff its sonething different loved do update soon

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