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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Awesome update...manik planned a perfect date and nandini has said yes to the relationship..and the kiss romantic..but who is at the door hope it's our cabira..its budding romance don't want any villains now..waiting for the next chapter please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
awesome this is just so beautiful loving it
thank God nandu said yes
contu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
hello everyone!!!!! im back with part 9..hope u enjoy :) :) please buddy me for further pm's...and guys i can see a lot of silent readers not that i mind but ur comments mean a lot to me plus it would inspire me to write ahead...also please tell ur friends about this ff..the more people read it the more i will be inspired to post ahead or else i will have to postpone posting ahead till i get a good response..dont worry i wont stop posting but i wont update everyday... hopr u understand and like this part :) :)
PART9
Manan were standing together with their heads rested on one another..suddenly nandini opened her eyes..she looked at her watch
N:manik its time for ur class!!u have to go
Manik hugged her again
M:no I dont
N:yes u do
M:no nandu!!I hav to stay here with u..who wants to attend a boring lecture leaving his hot girlfriend alone!!
n:manik!!!go na plz..vaise bhi hum saradin to sath hi rehte hai...
M:ha par...
N:no par war..go now...she pushed him away
manik made a puppy face..
N:mr.malhotra thats not going to work plz go..ill meet u after ur class
M:ok baba jata hu!!!par tum kya karogi akele?
N:wo main library ja rahi hu...Harshad k sath group work karne
Manik becomes angry but he doesn't say anything..nandini understands him..she cups his face
N:manik u look really cute with ur red nose!!!!she stands on her toes and kisses his nose..she runs away immediately
M:oh god!!!yeh larki aise kiyu hai?kabhi mujhe gussa nehi karne deti!!!!he smiles and leaves for class
After two hours fab5 meet at canteen..they were all having their lunch..manik kept gazing at nandini and responded with a cute blush..suddenly all of them receive a text
NYONICA MALHOTRA INVITES U TO THE SPACE HOLI PARTY 2015!!!!
Everyone becomes happy except manik who has an whatever look on his face
C:r a yaar main to bhul hi gaya tha k kal holi hai!
Mt:main bhi!!!!
D:guys yaad hai last year kitna maza kiya tha humne!!
N:ha yaar!!yaad hai wo sharma sir talli ho gaye the!!! Fab5 remembered about last years holi and had a great chuckle..afterwards they went home.. Manik wanted to drop nandini bt mukti offered to do it first so he couldn't..he was sad..but before leaving nandini kissed his cheeks without anyone noticing..so he was happy again

Holi day!
Nandini wore a white kameez with a pink dupatta!!She was looking flawless..she did her prayers with her family and wished everyone..manik entered her house at that time.he was looking drop dead gorgeous in a white panjabi..nandini blushed immediately after seeing her..manik wished the murthy family..nandini was just smiling..they didn't talk to each other till they reached the parking spot..they only exchanged looks..as soon as tgey reached the car manik pinned her to the car
M:so miss.murthy mujhe wish karne ka irada nehi hai kya?
N:tumne bhi to nehi kiya!
M:u knw my style of wishing right!I thought if I wished u in my way then u wud be in trouble.agar tum chahti ho to chalo abhi sabke samne karte hai!he started pulling her towards the house again.nandini stopped him nd this time she pinned him to the car
N:manik stop it..kya kar rahe ho!
M:accha thik hai!ab jaldi se mujhe wish karo
Nandini kissed his cheeks
N:happy holi mr.monkey!
M:yeh keya!itni der so wish kiya wo bhi itni fiki tarhe se!kal mene sikhaya tha na..waise wish karo
Nandini blushed and looked down..manik leaned in but nandini pushed him
N:manik we r getting late..ab chalo!
M:par mera wish!
N:woh baad mein!ab chalo tum!
M:soch lo..baad mein penalty zyada ho jaigi
N:soch liya ab chalo!(blushing)
They got in the car and left for space
Fab5 met at space..Everyone applied color to each others face..they were having so much fun then nyonica came
Ny:happy holi everyone!
M:tum yaha kya kar rahi ho!
N:manik!! Nandini went n hugged nyonica..
N:happy holi aunty!
Nyonica touched nandinis cheeks
Ny:happy holi beta!tehy applied color to each others face n nyonica left
Mt:nandini tu nyonica ko itna pasand kiyu karti hai!
D:yeh kya puch di a!mother Teresa kise nehi pasand karti hai!
Everyone laughed bt manik was annoyed..nandini went to him and entwined her fingers with his..she hid their hands with her dupatta
N:bura na mano holi hai!(whispering)
At that moment navya came and wished everyone..nandini wanted to hug her bt manik didn't let go of her hand.she gave him a look bit he smirked..she pinched him and went to navya..alya came at that time..she hugged everyone and wished them..she hugged manik longer than the others..nandini got annoyed looking at this..she excused herself and went away..manik saw this and made an excuse to go after her
Alya n mukti went to the dance floor..navya n dhruv were just standing there.there was an awkward silence as they never really spoke to each other before..navya suddenly spoke
Nv:I brought some homemade gujiyas.would u like to taste it?
D:umm..ya sure!I love good food..vaise tumne khud banaya hai?
Nv:ha..hum a cooking ka bohat shokh hai!!
They both started conversing and left for the food counter...
Nandini was standing in a corner with a sulked face.manik came and hugged her from her back.he kissed her shoulder
M:kuch jalne ki smell aa rahi hai..hai na?Nandini pushed him away
N:nehi to!vaise tum yaha kya kar rahe ho!jao alya akeli hogi!manik grabbed her waist and pulled her towards him
M:jealous nandu kafi cute hai!!he slowly kissed her cheeks
Nandini again pushed him
N:dont try to act cute with me!
M:nandini she hugged me I couldn't just push her away!
N:whatever!nandini walked away
m:yeh larki mujh pagal kardegi!he followed her
Nandini bumped into harshad.he hugged her and applied color to her face
H:happy holi nandini!
Nandini also applied color to his face ans wished him..manik saw this and clenched his fists..as soon as harshad walked away he pulled nandini to a corner and pinned ger to the wall
M:yeh sab kya tha?
N:what r u talking about?
M:tum phirse loser k sath kya kar rahi thi?
N:manik he hugged me I couldn't just push him away(in a mocking tone)
Manan laughed at the same time
M:im sorry baba!!main abse alya se dur rahunga!
N:thik hai..or main bhi harshad se dur rahungi!she tried to leave bur couldn't as manik wasnt letting her
N:what r u doing?chalo sab intezar kar rahe hai!
M:thik hai par humara subah ki wish baki reh gaya na!Nandini took color from a nearby tray and applied to manik nose..manik took color in both of his hands.he caressed nandini hands from fingers to shoulder putting color everywhere..he nuzzled in nandinis neck with his nose applying color there with his nose..nandini grabbed his neck as manik tightened his grab on nandinis waist.they had an eyelock..nandinis heart was beating really hard..she closed her eyes.manik kissed her collar bone and then her neck..he slowly moved to her face leaving a soft trail of kisses..nandini was shivering..manik nuzzled his nose with nandins..a smile crept on nandinis face...manik then placed his lips on nandinis as she closed her eyes..they had a deep long kiss.manik was caressing her hair with one hand while the other encircled around her waist..she was stuck in between his arm arrest..she just caressed his face with her hands...after a while nandini pulled herself away.manik smiled
M:happy holi nandu!
N:happy holi manik!they smiled at each other and left to join others holding each others hands strongly
The same pair of eyes in the college was still noticing them...
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Fab5 were having loads of fun!!cabir and dhruv had a bhang drinking competition..and as usual no one could beat cabir!mukti turned on music...Everyone was dancing.bt mukti and nandini managed to grab everyones attention with their moves!after a while even navya joined them..manik came behind nandu and tried to grab her but nandini pushed him into the pool..mukti jumped in as well.nandini was laughing at drenched manik while cabir came from behind.he picked nandini up and threw her into the pool and jumped in as well..dhruv navya and alya also joined them..they had the most incredible holi!!after the party was over fab5 took some rest and went to the beach...cabir got ice cream for everyone..they were all sitting on the beach.. N:vaise dhruv!tu kaha tha jab hum holi khel rage the? D:wo main navya k sath tha!teri yeh cousin kafi interesting hai N:accha!mujhe to nehi pata tha!!Everyone broke into laughter while dhruv blushed...they lied down with their heada together..all of them felt peaceful!!manik intertwined his fingers with nandini while everyone was gazing at the stars..nandini looked at him and smiled..manik then moved his hand and encircled it around her shoulder and took her into a side hug and kissed her hair..nandini rested her head on his shoulders...after a few minutes of peaceful silence nandini got up.. N:guys chachi is calling ill be back in a minute! M:since when cant u talk to chachi infront of us? C:manik jane dena use!! Mt:ha manik tu bhi na kabhi kabhi zyada hi karta hai! Nandini went away...a while later manik was worried as nandini didn't return till then..suddenly they all heard nandini scream out loud for help..fab4 ran to the source of the sound..manik ran as fast as he could but it was dark all around..he couldn't see anything..he was scared to death!he shouted nandinis name as loud as possible but there was no reply!!he looked around but there was no one...
precap: guess :P :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Wow awesome update
It was so romantic
But worried for nandini
Hope she is fine
And please update daily
Don't punish us for anyone else
It's nt fair
I always comment yar
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Thanks fr the PM
Again a fabulous update:)
I guess it's harshad ? ;)
Update ASAP dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Super awesome update
Ohhh no
What happened to nandu
Plzzz update soon
This suspense
Is killer
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Holi party was amazing...
But end was scary..
What happened to nandini suddenly...
Cont soon...
Looking forward to what comes nxt...

Thanx for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Nice update.
Why this suspense u said u will reveal the person anyways continue soon n hope nothing will happen to Nandu.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Awesome update..loved the manan moments..and the suspense continues of who is watching them and the ending is scary hope she is fine and when manik finds her his reaction would leave everyone surprised but will be Gud as everyone will know about them..sorry that's all the wishful thinking...and I like your writing..please continue soon and don't stop regular updates I keep commenting and so does others too so for us update regularly..and thanku for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
loving ur reaction people...thanks for all the comments...ur comments inspire a lot... I will try my best to update asap!!!
p.s:I would love to know what u think is going to happen next ...what happened to nandini??who is watching them??? please comment and let me know...whoever answers correct will get a sneak peak one day before the update :p :p :p

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