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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Very cute... their kiss was describes perfectly...
Continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
hey guys!! since i wont be able to post tomorrow im posting part7 right now..hope u enjoy :) :)
PART7
Manik somehow ditched fab3 and reached nandinis house n thats when he saw harshads car leaving.his mood changed.he sneaked through the window in nandus room.nandini was getting ready for bed..he grabbed nandu from behind..she was about to shout but he held her mouth n said its me dumbo!shut up...nandu was shocked and happy at the same time
N:manik!What r u doing here?I thought u were partying!
M:kiyu?Main tumse milne nehi asakta?
N:of course!Par mere ghar me darwaza hai!
M:ha to!.manik smirks lies in nandus bed.nandu sits beside him
M:vaise tum ne to kaha k tum bz ho!wo loser yaha kya kar raha tha?
N:kon harshad!wo main jab goa main thi to ekta assignment di a tha professor ne.kal deadline hai to harshad came to help me
M:kiyu?or koi nehi tha?
N:wo to mera lab partner hai!so he understands my way of working more then neone
Manik pulls nandini close
M:so ur saying he understands u more than anyone?(in a angry tone)
N:incase of physics only!Otherwise..
M:(becomes happy)what?
N:kuch nehi!manik pulls her closer.
M:listen nandini mujhe nehi pasand k tum uske sath as a matter of fact mere ilawa kisi bhi larke k sath itna waqt bitao!!Except cabir n dhurv
N:y?
M:cz I dnt want u to share ur time with anyone...not even for a second!get it??
He leans in to kiss her but nandini feels shy and gets up
Manik smiles looking at her innocence..suddenly he feels like teasing her even more
M:so nandu!When do u want to talk about it?
N:talk about what?
M:about what happened in goa..I know ur shy but sooner or later we hav to talk about it..
Nandini instantly turns red
N:what happened in goa?I don't remember(says hesitantly)
Manik gets up and pins her to the wall
M:u want me to give u a flashback?huh!He smirks and leans in again
Nandini enlarges her eyes puts her palm on his lips
N:no no its ok!
M:nehi nehi!!let me help u na!!plus while im at it we can make new memories (he winks)
Nandini pushes him away!!n:its ok..I can recall it by myself...
M:ok..(frowns)so when do u want to tell our frnds?
N:manik can we not do this now??can we talk about it tomorrow?plzz...
M:ok fine nandu!!ill go!!!bt tomorrow I won't spare u!
Manik starts to proceed towards the door..nandini stops him
N:manik what r u doing?chachi is awake!
M:so?
N:she didn't see u coming in..plz go from the window na!
M:nandu!!!itni mushkil se may andar aya!!ab tum chahti ho k mai firse wo karu!!(sarcastically)
N:plzz!!
M:ok..on one condition...wish me goodnight!!
N:goodnight manik!
Manik pulls her closer
M:I thought u recalled ur memories!wish me like u did in goa!
Nandini blushes..she kisses him on his cheeks and says goodnight manik! And thats all u get! Now go away!!!
M:aj to chor raha hu!Par agey se nehi nandu!
manik leaves; nandini blushes.n:aiyyappa yeh larka pagal hai bilkul!plz always keep him like this...she smiles and goes to the window..manik was sitting in his her waiting for her to do that...nandini waves her hand...manik smiles and starts the car...
Next morning
Manik reached nandinis house and saw cabirs car.he went inside n saw fab4 having their breakfast
M:r a wah!aj mujhe chorke hi chale ai!
C:tu hi to tera phn nehi utha raha tha
M:oh Accha!phn silent pe tha.(he sits beside nandini)
M:tumne bhi mere bina hi beth gayi!( whispering)
C:nandu ab tu to khana start kar!manik looks at nandini and smiles..nandini whispered jawab mil gaya!she served breakfast to manik and herself..manik suddenly held her hands strongly under the table
N:manik what r u doing?
M:what am I doing?
N:leave my hand na!koi dekhlega!
M:nandini we hav hold hands before!they even saw us hugging!!
N:par now to its different na!
M:accha!kiyu?
Nandini blushes..fab5 finish their breakfast and leave for college.in college manik takes the first chance and takes nandini to a corner
M:u said today we would talk about what happened in goa!So speak
N:I cant..
M:what do u mean u cant!
N:I cannot!
M:so u wont say anything!
Nandini nods
M:u hav decided huh!
N:yes
manik pretends to angry and lets her go
M:fine then dont talk to me!manik goes away
N:ufff yeh monkey manik malhotra!!!tum samajhte kitu nehi!its tough for me..I want u to tell ur feelings first..par koi baat nehi..mana lungi tumhe!!!!
Nandini leaves for music room

Fab5 were practicing..manan were sharing an eyelock..nandini kept making puppy dig faces and manik gave angry expressions..suddenly alya and navya walked in...
Navya hugged nandini and they started chit chatting..bt then the bell rang navya and dhruv had their accounting class so they left
To make nandu jealous manik hugged alya and wished her a good morning...alya also kissed maniks cheeks..nandini understood everything she smiled at maniks attempt.she put on her earphones...manik got angry.he told alya that he wanted to show her something..he took her outside holding her hands...alya was on top of the world
Mt:cabir tujhe nehi lagta ki manik or alya ka couple bohat acchi lagti hai!
C:wo to hai!!!hum jitna bhi manan to tease karle inka malya ka couple to pura hit couple ha yaar
Mt:vaise bhi manik n nandini r poles apart..they can never work it out.they r best as friends...mujhe lagta hai hum a shahed tease karna bandh kar de na chahiye...kiyuki agar in dono ne sach main date karne ki koshish ki to work out to karega hi nehi upar se itni khubsurat Frndship destroy ho jaigi
Nandini listens to it all...she feels really bad..she leaves the music room..
C: ab ise kya ho gaya! Bye bhi nehi bol ke gayi!
Mt:gana sun rahibhe shahed kho gayi hai..chal canteen chalte hai...
Mukbir leave for canteen
Nandini went outside and saw manik.manik looked at her and gave a crooked smile..nandini replied him with a faint smile and left.maniks pov:oh god Kahi zyada bura to nehi laga!manik waited till her classes were over but nandini didn't come to meet them.she messaged mukti that she wasn't feeling well so she went home.mukti informed the rest.maniks pov:mujhe kiyu nehi bataya!shit! Shahed bohat bura laga hai use!ab kaise manau??he decided to go to her house bt fab3 didn't allow him to do so.he was restless but he had no options..he started thinking about ways to pacify her
In the evening
Nandini was standing in her balcony with her eyes closed.she felt a tap on her shoulder.she turned around to see a huge bouquet of chocolates and only chocolates.behind it was manik..he came out with a puppy face.nandu couldn't help but smile.manik hugged her
M:sorry
N:im not mad at u.but manik we hav to talk
M:ummm sure whats up?
N:I thought about what happened in goa.i think we should just keep it there and forget it.nothing can ever happen between us manik
Manik gets shocked
M:what!Nandini in the morning I was just trying to tease u.plz don't be so mad!
N:I know that manik..bt I hav thought about it.u n I are poles apart!we can never make this relationship work!
M:how can u say that without even giving it a chance!
N:even if I do manik.it wont work out.i dont want to lose our friendship
M:what makes u think that it wont work out?
N:manik we r really different..we can never work it out!we r completely opposite
M:well opposites attract!do u not know that?
N:exactly manik!what if what we hav is just an attraction!I cant lose the wonderful friendship that we have for just a mere attraction!
M:and u think after these incidents we can still be normal?
N:I don't know but at least we can try.it wont be as hard as it would if we dated
Manik was speechless
N:manik I think u should go home
Nandini went inside her room with tears in her eyes..manik just stood there and took a deep breath...
precap:stubborn nandini...even more stubborn manik :P :P :P :P
p.s: dont worry guys i wont separate them...😃😃😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Amazing dear :)
Felt bad fr nandini :(
Hope she'll understand :D
Thanks fr d PM
Update soon.. :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Haha!!
I feel bad for Nandini .. Stupid MukBir :( sochke to bolte huh.. But its okay ..
Thodi takraar bhi zaruri h! :P
Great update!
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Nice update.
Continue soon
Thanks fr d PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Nice update
But a lil update at the last
Feeling bad very bad
I hope u will surely nt separate manan
Waiting for next update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Update was nyc...
And ssly dont u dare separate them...
Thanx for pm..

Continue soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Tnx don't separate them n pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Yaar this mukbir ko Koyi kaam nahi kya..and cabiraa u r supposed to bring manan closer how could u man..mukti tho always realises at the end but this was not expected from our cabir..manan are both stubborn so let's see how it goes..awesome chapter..waiting to read more of the story..please continue soon and thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Awsome loved it continues soon 👏👏

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