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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey read you ff i must say its an interesting one!! You can take your time and write the other ff but could you please give me the link?? Thanks.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey guys..accrding to ur response i have posted my first ss on manan...the first part is up...please read and shower love on it like u did with this ff :) :) :)


NEW MANAN SS : BE MY DATE <3

link address - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4421147#p124649714
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb ff
in one day i read all
ur parts nd they r amazing

so continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I jst lv ur ff u r amazng
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry!!!!!im incredibly sorry for the late update...so here u go an update for all u lovelies...please ignore the typos as i didnt have time for proof reading and everything...please read enjoy an share ur precious reviews...criticism is more than welcome...if u want a pm please comment let me know and also buddy me :)
Part21

nandini woke up with a headache...she could barely get her eyes open...she sat taking the support of the headboard...manik walked in with a cup of coffee...
M:good morning beautiful!!
N:good morning...what am i doing here?
M:u dont remember?
N:no..
M:u were incredibly drunk..came here shouted ur lungs out and made the whole house a fish market...
N:oh god!!!oh yes i remeber before cabir left we both had a drink...shit...what else did i do?please tell me aunty didnt see me..
M:she didnt..how much awkward it would be if she saw her assaulting her son...
N:what?
M:yes miss murthy...u my darling tried to assault me last night...sexually!!!
N:hahahhahaha...sure!!i believe u..
M:yes..
N:manik urg to just trying to mess with me..
M:u dont believe me...ok fine !!
he started removing his t-shirt...
N:manik..what are u doing?
m:wait..
he removed his shirt and showed her the bite mark that she left on his body..it had turned deep red by then...
N:oh my god!!!
M:thats not all..
he turned around and showed her the nail marks..nandini covered her face with her hands
N:oh my god manik!!im so sorry...
M:well its a little late for that..
N:you should have stopped me na..i hurt u so much!!oh my god!!
she started caressing the bite mark...
M:wait...thats what your worried about...not about the fact that we did it..
N:no...manik..i trust u..even if something had happened all i would regret about the fact that i wouldnt remember it...
M:really?
N:yes manik...i love u..i dont care
M:i love u too
he kissed her forehead..
M:u know since you dont mind..we have time..
he leaned upon her...nandini encircled her arms around his neck..manik kissed her eyes...he leaned to kiss him but nandini turned her face.he smiled and kissed her cheeks..
M:what??i thought u didnt care...
N:i dont...
M:then?
N:as much as i would love to be with u here right now...but u have to go to college and i have to go to home..
M:why?stay here na...
N:no manik...i have to go..im having breakfast with aryaman at the grill..
maniks reaction immediately changed..he got up from her..
M:what??
N:oh yeah..i forgot to tell you..i had a conversation with him last night and as it turns out...
M:what??u like him as well and now u two r going to have breakfast...alone!!!
N:manik i love u!!! i like him but not in that way
M:and thats why u r going on a date with him...
N:manik this is not a date!!
M:oh really!!hmm lets see...u two r alone..u like him..he likes u...he is ur fiance..sure sounds like a date to me
N:manik ur over reacting...
M:oh yeah sure!!
N:ok first of all...
M:oh yes nandini please do tell...
N:u know what manik...
M:what?
N:lets take a break...if u dont have a little patience to hear me out...maybe u need time to figure stuff out...
M:what?ur breaking up with me?
N:no...we r taking a break...take some time...im leaving
nandini got up to leave..manik grabbed her and pinned her to the wall...his grab on nandinis hands were real tight..his eyes were blood red..
N:manik ur hurting me..
M:im hurting u?? i m??ur the one who just broke up with me and going on a date with ur bloody damn fiance...
N:manik...shut up!!!this is not a date...u always hang out with ur friends...i talked to aryaman last night..he doesnt like me..he just pretended to like me just to be sure about my feelings for him...he is going away today..and he is my childhood friend..im just going to have a nice farewell meal with my friend...u hang out with ur other friends all the time...well im extremely sorry..i was upset because u got mad at me...at that time cabir came to me and we had that drink...
after listening to her he let go off her hands..nandini started to leave
M:im sorry nandini..
N:i dont want to talk about it right now...
M:nandini please dont leave me
N:look manik even i dont want to...but i need some time to myself..i feel suffocated...im sorry!!and please dont follow me...and yes please dont make a big deal out of it...
M:but nandini..
he hugged from the behind...tears were dropping from both of their eyes..
N:manik please let me go..
M:i cant...
N:manik..im not saying we r breaking up...we r just on a break...u need some time to figure some stuff out and so do i...if u dont let me go right now im afraid i cant some back to you..please...
manik slowly let go off her..nanidni started to leave...manik knelt down and broke into tears...
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a few hours later...aryaman and nandini were done with breakfast and got out of the restaurant...Aryaman hugged her..
A:im going to miss u..
N:ill miss u too...text me when u reach home..
A:u sure u dont want me to drop u home..
N:no...ull miss ur flight...ill take a taxi dont worry..aryaman smiled kissed her forehead and got into his car...
nandini went near the main road and started to look for a taxi...but it was a very busy road...she couldnt find one...some boys aroudn her started to tease her..at first she ignored them but that just ignited them...they started to come towards her...she got scared..just when one of themm tried to touch her he got a serious punch in his face by none other than th e great manik malhotra...the other guys pushed him..manik tripped a bit..his hand got hurt as it got punched witha big piece of rock...before the situation turned into something worse the traffic police came and took care of the situation...nandini hugged manik..manik hugged her back and cringed as his hand started to ache..nandini immediately broke the hug..she dragged him to his car..she made her sit on the car bonnet...she opened her bag and started to clean his hand with water,,,she bandaged it with her scarf..tears were rolling down her cheeks constantly...manik was looking at her intensely...afetr she was done she still held his hand..she kept looking down shredding tears..manik slowly cupped her face
M:nandu they are gone...u dont need to be scared... she punched him lightly
N:thats not why im crying u moron...
M:then?
N:im crying because ur hurt...why did u have to that??
M:he was trying to touch u..i cannot let anyone let u feel a tad bit of annoyance...
N:oh manik!!!
she hugged him...
M:so r we cool?
N:of course...
M:and r we still on a break?
N:manik...i still love u...but we just need a little time..
M:but when will that be?
N:we will know when its time..but please dont tell fab5 about it..musicana is coming up..i dont want to stress them anymore...
M:ok..anything for u..im really sorry
N:i know..im sorry too...
M:lets go then...
N:yeah...
they both got into the car and started for college with a heavy heart...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mindblowing update
what nandu did in her
drunk state shocking
but rocking too
finally aryaman is gone

plzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update dear😊
continue soon
waiting for next part
take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow Awsome
Fab
Mind blowing update. Tnx for pm
Amzzzing
Keep updating
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...naughty Manik. But I m extremely happy because now aryaman chapter is over. I just don't like him.

MaNan scene was super cute. But why are they taking break. I don't want my MaNan to be separated. Please bring them together again.

Thanks for pm. Please update soon

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