MANAN FF FOUND PERFECTION WITH YOU part25 on 45 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update!! 👏
I truly loved it! ❤️
Ok... i suggest you 1 n 3...
C I wpuld love to c sweet n romantic Manan scenes
soo I am waiting for the nxt part. ...
n Hawt... dat toh dey r... Ofcourse dey have to b hawt... afteall dey r manan
nyways its upto u...
update soon..
waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was so wonderful.. 👏
Luved Navya this time.. how cutely she made Manik's hope alive. And Navya & Dhruv's bonding is something new and m luving it.. 😉
Awww that haldi ceremony.. luved it..
Jealous MaNan are the cutest one 😃
And story is going amaZing... i m luving it..<3
And if you ask me i'll suggest 1 & 3
Thoda hottie sa romance... 😉 😉 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update..waiting for the next chapter..please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing Update ;)
Thanks fr the PM dear :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey guys i know m late..had to be late i had a lot of practicals due...finished them and im back :) :) sorry for the delay please read this part and enjoy!!!!!!

PART_15
manik turned around to see nandini..she was looking drop dead gorgeous in a red lehenga..she could give arohi a run for her money..her face was glowing..all manik could think of was running to her and kiss those puffy cheeks which were attracting him like a magnet..mukti came to him and closed his mouth
Mt:mu bandh karle...agar macchar ghus gaya to wo tujhe phir kiss nehi karegi..
M:tujhe kabse cabir ki bimari lag gayi??
Mt;matlab?
M:matlab aisa lame joke sirf wo hi crack kar sakte hai..
Fab3 laughed out loud..nandini came to them
N:whats so funny?
D:kuch nehi.
C:vaise nandu fab lag rahi hai!!
N:thanks..ab chalo performance ka waqt ho gaya hai!!
everyone left for the stage..but nandini was pulled back by manik..she gave him a questioning look..manik in reply slowly kissed her puffy cheeks..
M:ur looking absolutely gorgeous!!
nandini blushed and looked down..
M:ab aise hi blush karti rahogi to performence miss ho jaiga..chalo
they both left
It was time for their performance...the whole group danced in "Ranjhaana hua mai tereya" song..the girls danced in "Chitiyan kalaiyan" the guys danced in "desi boys"then it was time for nimisha and maniks romantic number..but suddenly while walking nimisha twisted her ankle..all of them got worried..they cancelled that performance..nandini who was worried for nimisha became happy about the cancellation.but she kept a worried look on her face but it was very tough for her to hide her smile..cabir noticed it and went to her..
C:vaise nandu mera kafi effect ho raha hai tujhpar
N:matlab?
C:yehi ki koi insan gir gaya hai..takleef main hai or tujhe hasi aa rahi hai!!
N:what??im not laughing..cabir u and ur imaginations..
C:mujhse jhut bolne ki zaroorat nehi hai..i know everything..
N:whatever.. she started to leave but cabir held her hand
C:agar itna hi pyaar karti hai to chali ja na wapas..wo bhi tere liye hi mar raha hai!!
nandini smiled and left
In exchange of the romantic dance fab5 decided to perform a song for everyone...manan sang "Marjaiyan"...Everyone applauded for them..after the performance manik was looking for nandini..but it seemed like suddenly she disappeared..he heard someone scream.he got scared and looked around...he found nimisha on the ground.manik rushed to her
M:what happened?
Nim:I fell down..Please help me! Manik picked her up and made her sit on a couch..he told her to wait there till he asks someone to come..nandini saw all these from a distance...she was super mad..manik saw her..nimisha was about to thank him but he called navya for helping nimisha and left the place as soon as he possible
Nandini went to the terrace..manik went there and held her hand..nandini jerked it and turned away.manik again held her hands..she jerked it..this m=time manik got pissed he strongly pulled her towards him..he made her look into his eyes..nandini was crying..manik wiped her tears
M:kya hua?
N:y do u care!! Jao na tum..nimisha k pass jao..use tumhari zaroorat hai..yaha kya kar rahe ho?
M:nandini she was hurt.she fell down and u know na she already twisted her legs once
N:ha ha!!she is the most helpless person in the world..why di u have to pick her up in ur arms?
M:to kya use wohi gire rehne deta??..wait a minute is someone jealous??
N:y wud I be jealous??jao na tum...yaha kya kar rahe ho
M:thik hai! He turns to leave..nandini stops him
N:kya kar rahe ho?
M:tumhi ne to kaha nimisha k pass jane k liye to mai ja raha hu!! Nandini starts hitting him...
N:manik ur such a monster..aisa kaise kar sakte ho tum..tum mujhe chor k uske pass jaoge!!!she grabbed his collar
N:listen mr.malhotra im not letting u go!!
M:but we just friends na!!
Nandini again hits him...manik smiles and hugs her tightly...she tries to free herself at first but his grip was too strong..he buried his face into her hair..she felt weak and then she gave in..manik hugged her even more tightly...
n:manik im sorry..but I cant let u go!!I cant see u with anyone else..hum hamare bich hui sari misunderstandings dur kar lenge but plz dont leave me...manik broke the hug..he kissed her forehead
M:I can never leave u nandini...because
N:because?
M:because...
N:because?
Manik wiped her tears..he closed his eyes
M:because I LOVE U NANDINI...I LOVE U!!!!
Nandini was startled...this was the first time that manik said those words..
Manik was going to say something else bt nandini again hushed him
N:I LOVE U TOO MANIK!!!!! Manik was speechless...he without even thinking once kissed her...nandini didn't hesitate at all..she kissed him back..he ruffled her hair with one hand while the other was clasping her waist into an arm arrest..nandini stood on his toes and encircled her hands around his neck..they broke the kiss and hugged again. .after a while they rested their heads on each other...they felt content once again..both of them had tears in their eyes..they cried together but with tears of joy..
one hour later
Manan were still staring at each other.both of them were overwhelmed with the feeling of love that they just realised..dor them time had stopped...manik suddenly pulled nandini closer
N:kya hai?
M:kuch nehi
manik removed strands of hair from her face.nandini blushed.manik hugged her tightly..he wanted to assure himself that all these happiness its true..at that time fab3 walked in..they also joined them in the hug..
C:awww..look mom n dad r done fighting..Everyone laughed and broke the hug
D:vaise tum log ek dusre mai itne khoye the k tumhe pata hi nehi chala k hum agai..humne to socha tha k dar jaoge
N:dhruv hamari friendship itni bhi weak nehi hai tum logo ke hone ka ehsas hume nehi hoga..
m:thats true..hum a pata tha k tumlog chup chup k dekh rahe the k hum kya kar rahe hai..Manik held nandinis shoulders and side hugged her..cabir suddenly pulled nandini
C:accha ab bohat ho gaya yeh sab senti baat a..now its punishment time!!
M:punishment?
Mt:ha tune hamari nandu ko hurt kiya uska punishment to milega hi na..
M:wo punch kafi nehi tha?
C:us waqt tu Toot chuka tha isliye varna aur bhi parte
M:nandini kuch to bolo!!
N:main kya bolu!!u do deserve punishment!
M:tum bhi!!
D:guys I hav the perfect punishment for manik
Mt:kya??
D:nandini wont kiss manik for one week
M:what?no
C:oh yes!!
M:yeh kuch zyada hi ho raha hai..
Mt:yehi bilkul perfect hai..so its decided..no more arguments..chal sone jate hai
N:guys yaad hai last year we slept in here on terrace..kaal to hum ja rahe hai..kiyu na ajbhi wasa hi kare
C:ur wish is our command.chal blankets le aate hai
Everyone left bt manik was standing with a sad face.nandini pulled his hand
N:mr.eiffel tower chaliye we need ur help
Manik smiled and went with her
Cabir,manik n dhruv made all the arrangements for their slumber.mukti lied at one corner..nandini lied down beside her..manik was going to sleep beside her but cabir jumped to that spot and smirked at him..manik gave him a death glare..cabir hugged nandini
C:nandu pls save me from this monster
Nandini laughed
N:manik kyu tang kar rahe ho ise..agey aur kiya to mujhse bura koi nehi hoga..
C:yay!jab tak nandu mere sath tu mera kuch nehi kar sakta!
M:whatever..manik lied beside cabir..they all went to sleep..
At 4 am
Nandini opened her eyes and felt weird cz she was snuggled tightly by someone..she turned to see manik and a smile automatically appeared on her face.he looked like a little baby while sleeping.she touched maniks cheeks and said good morning in a low tone..to her surprise manik rubbed his nose in her hair and said same to u..
N:manik ur awake?
M:hmm..tumne sone kaha diya..
Nandini blushed n then she remembered that she slept next to cabir last night
N:manik tum mere pass kaise ai..
m:kuch nehi cabir ko raat maine hata diya..tumhe kya laga main sach main tumse itni dour rahunga!!
Nandini tries to free herself
N:manik choro..sab dekhenge to kya kahenge!
D:hum kuch nehi kahenge bt please let us sleep..
Mukti n cabir: yes please..mukti n cabir pushed manan from both sides so that they get more close..manan were shocked..nandini felt awkward she again tried to get up..manik pulled her close
M:stop being a spoil sport nandu..he hugged her tightly and nandini finally gave in as she had no other option..she hugged him back and closed her eyes
After 2 hours all of them woke up..they all had a busy day and had barely some time to talk with each other as it was the wedding day..at night after helping her sister in dressing up nandini went to her room..she wore a beautiful red lehenga..while on the other side manik was restless as he couldn't talk to nandini properly the entire day..he went outside and climbed up the pipe to enter into nandinis room through the window..
Manik stepped in the room and found nandini standing in front of the mirror..she was adjusting her stole..manik was lost just by looking at her
N:manik kab tak khare rahoge? Manik came out of his trance
M:how did u know that I was here..tum to us taraf dkh rahi thi
N:bas aise hi..my sixth sense u know!!
Manik came close to her and hugged her from back..they were both looking at their reflection on the mirror..manik removed nandinis hair from one shoulder to the other and rested his head on her..
N:manik kya kar rahe ho..hum late ho jayenge
M:sshh..dont spoil it.he hugged her tighter.nandini also closed her eyes..after a few minutes they could hear alya from outside calling nandini..manan came out of their trance
M:ur looking beautiful..nandini blushed..manik took the earring placed on the table and made nandini wear it..he held her by shoulders
M:perfect!He leaned in to kiss her but nandini pushed him away
N:ur punishment period is going on mr.malhotra
Manik pulled her close again
M:so u will punish me huh!!
Nandini nodded her head
M:so let me also punish u na!!
N:what do u mean?manik started tickling her..nandini broke into laughter was begging manik to leave her but manik was in no mood to do so..after a while nandini was breathless so manik left her..nandini took this chance and ran downstairs..the wedding rituals started..but rehan was still wearing his shoes..nandini was almost becoming upset so manik took an initiative..him,cabir n dhruv literally snatched the show from rehans feet..nandini was super happy and manik was happy to see her smile..when the couples were taking there Pheres manik came near nandini..he started showering flowers on nandini instead of the couple
N:kya kar rahe ho?
M:kuch nehi..vaise nandu mandap bhi hai..pandit bhi hai..chalo shaadi kar lete hai..what say?
Nandini punched him lightly
N:tum pagal ho..she ran away while manik ruffled his hair..soon the wedding rituals were finished..
Fab5 and navya were outside the house..they were about to leave..nandini was upset..she hugged aams n started to cry..aams was also upset..she broke the hug and consoled nandini..aams called manik
A:beta iske chacha chachi to do din baad jane wale hai..tum iska kheyal rakhna..bohat upset hai yeh..
M:aams ap tension mat lijiye..main hoo na..He side hugged nandini..finally all the family members went inside
Cabir tappes on maniks shoulders
C:driver sahab chale?
M:wo cabir..main na bohat thak chuka hu!!u dont mind driving do u?bas do ghante fir main chalaunga
C:I dont mind..par jhut kiyu bol raha..tujhe to nandini ki baho main peaceful sleep chachiye..nandini punched cabir
N:kuch bhi!!
Mt:vaise guys ek kaam karte hai..inhe sabse piche betha te hai kiyuki muje inka live mms dekhneka ka koi shokh nehi hai..Everyone broke into laughter
Cabir sat on the driving sit and mukti on the passenger sit..dhruv n navya sat in the middle and manan at the back..
They started their journey
Nandini was still a bit upset..manik wrapped his arms around nandinis shoulders..nandini rested her head on maniks shoulders and intertwined her fingers with his ones..navya was asleep..in her sleep she tilted towards dhruv..dhruv was just happy seeing her innocent sleepy face..they were driving for about 3 hours or so when suddenly the car broke down..they got out..smoke was coming out of the car..manik called someone to send a car but they said that need at least a few hours to reach that location..
N:guys this place doesnt look safe..chalo agey jake dkhte hai kahi rest karne ki jaga milti hai ki nehi..so they all started walking..it was an empty road..cold wind was blowing..they could sense that it would start raining in a few minutes..Everyone frowned except nandini..theh started walking faster..they saw a dhaba at a distance..they all went there and took shelter under the shade..soon it started to rain..nandini was about to run to get drenched but manik held her hand
M:kaha ja rahi ho?
N:mars!
M:what?
N:r a baba bhigne ja rahi hu!
M:r u out of ur mind?bimar ho jaogi!
N:ok uncle ji!She pushed him away and ran into the rain..soon she was joined by everyone else except manik..he was just standing in a corner looking at nandini..Cabir went to him
C:o mere romeo!shakti kapoor ki tarah look mat de..shah rukh banja..
Manik smiled.he went near nandini..he took one of her arms and placed it onto his shoulders and intertwined with the other..he grabbed her waist and pulled her close..he started singing (Man mera)..manan started moving with the tune..dhruv also pulled navya for a dance..navya was shocked but she happily gave in..cabir n mukti had nothing to do but too dance with each other..nandini was mesmerised by maniks voice..she was lost in his eyes..her trance broke when the song was over..manik tucked a lose strand of her hair behind her ears..
M:ab chalogi?ya main utha k le jau?
Nandini smiled..they all went inside..manik received a call that due to rain all the roads r blocked so the car wont reach their location till morning..so manik discussed with the owner of the dhaba if he could arrange for their night stay..teh owner made arranged 3 rooms for them..navya n mukti went in one room..dhruv n cabir in another room..all the rooms had 1 double bed each..manik was wondering what to do..he knew that nandini would uncomfortable to share a room with him
M:main cabir aur dhruv k room main sojata hun niche u cam take the other room..cabir n dhruv had already locked the room and were fast asleep..manik knocked on muktis room but they were also asleep
M:tum jao..main bahar so jaunga
Nandini laughed
N:vaise manik main tumahri izzat pe haat nehi dalungi u can relax and come with me..
m:ur not uncomfortable?
Nandini cupped his face
N:I trust u manik..manik smiled..they went inside the room..nandini went in the washroom to get changed then manik went in..when he came out he saw nandini drying her hair with a towel..he went near her..
He caressed her hands from fingers to her shoulders..nandini shivered and closed her eyes..manik turned her towards him
M:ur really pretty!
Nandinis cheeks turned red..manik couldn't resist anymore.he kissed her right cheeks..nandini openes her eyes and moved
N:manik ur punishment?
M:punishment to yeh tha k u wont kiss me..aisa nehi k I cant kiss
N:tumhare dimag mai aise loop holes aate kaha se hai?
M:side effects of being with u..bow shut up let me savour this moment..he kissed nandinis forehead;her eyes;her cheeks..
Nandini fisted on maniks t-shirt..
N:manik can we take a break?
M:what??ab maine kya kiya?y r u breaking up with me?
N:sshhh..break up nehi break..from this punishment thing..
Manik smiled..
M:have I ever said no to u?
Nandini kissed maniks cheeks..manik couldn't wait anymore he kissed nandini to which nandini responded...
Manik broke the kiss
N:what happened?
M:kuch nehi..agar tum muje aise hi kiss karti rahi na to kuch der pehle tum his trust ki baat kar rahi thi na..main wo tur dunga!!
Nandini laughed..they lied on the bed facing each other..manik maintained a safe distance from her..although the lights were turnes ofd they could see each others face by the moonlight coming from outside..manika hand was in the space between them..Nandini kept her hand on his..they were lost in each others eyes..nandini didn't realise when she fell asleep..manik leaned in to kiss her forehead..he went back to his side..he held nandinis hands again and closed his eyes..

hope u guys liked it :) :) Please comment to let me know...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow beautiful update.
They r together I am happy for that.
Aww manik punishment.
Rain n romance everything was good.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update 👍🏼
loved it so much ❤️
finally manan are back together
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...Thanks for the lovely n wonderful update...its jus fab dea..
i jus loved it...each n every part u penned it so nicely ...the way u write is outstanding...i am totally in love with u writing...ur such a awsm writer...
keep it up...cont. soon eagerly waiting for next part... 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thankuu so much for such a lovely and a super long update😊
Luvd each nd every bit of it...cabini r so adorable😛
U r really good at writing😉...commenting for d first tym😛
Manik is so naughty...loophole even in d punishemnt😛
Luvd it...thnx for pm
Always keep writing😊

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