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Arunima

@jesse93

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Aw how sweet was that,it feels so good to see Manik unknowngly having mental attachment with Nandini. He can actually feel her love for him and do care for that also . But Nandu ko cancer hai! Please make her alive the end. Awesome story yaar do continue with the next chapter asap.

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badgarlriri

@badgarlriri

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Wow awesome update🤗

I hate cancer as my closed one die due to it 💔

I m still crying 😒

come soon

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zaroge

@zaroge

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

its so sad ...
but still lovely
contu soon

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sheen16

@sheen16

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

You are such an amazing writer.
your all stories are amazing.
keep writing.

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Asha_25

@Asha_25

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Very Emotional update.
Amazing story.
Loved it.
Continue Soon.

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Angel

@Endurance

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Nadia this story has great potential .. And with ur beautiful thoughts it's like cherry on the cake ..but few scenes I think u need to clarify .. I am not disrespecting u but just giving suggestion.

When u wrote

Manik you are more famous but the group is our " she said and look at her friends Manik look at his other friends all stand behind Aliya

Navya came forward and beg " please Manik don't change your mind my Nandu will not stay long in your life" her voice shiver

"Why you are saying that?" he held her both hands and shakes his head she take out a file and give it to him

Here u didnt clarify how Navya came and heard Manik and Alia's convo like she was in guest room with Nandu no??

just these Lil things and u can be a great writer. . 😃 Please don't take me wrong I am just trying to give suggestions for betterment..

I hope u won't mind ..

Edited by Endurance - 10 years ago

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Manancrazy_95

@Manancrazy_95

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Ita soo good
So emotional
Nandu cancer 😭 i m sure manik ll safe her 😊 they are meant to be together
Brilliant concept loved it
Its amazing

Update soon
And plz pm m fr next update

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@navk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

wonderful update
i never knew tht there would be tht kind of twist
loved it
navya manik part was so emotional
navya u r sooo good yr
& aliya no words 4 her
manan part was sooo cute