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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Loved the way you have penned bond between Cabir and nandini is awesome...
Manik and nandini were ...muahhh!!!!
Beautifully penned expressions
Damn nice update...
I usually don't read manan ffs but this one really is the 1st ff which I am gonna read...
Thanq u for the pm...
Waiting for next update and their college fun...
Take care...
Misha




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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Awesome update
And MaNanBir are back after 5 years
But I wonder what happened to Tiksha
And Nandini's parents are so cruel
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
emotional and beautiful part...loving this a lot
mananbir...fantastic
loving nandu and cabir bonding a lot
continue soon
take care...!!!


i think this storyline is so close to ur heart...!!! i felt so much of emotions in ur words...!!! u penned it so beautifully...!!!

with love
aavani
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Chapter 5 A new-fangled day.

It was 7 am when my cell buzzed. I slept at 3 or 4 maybe and these people couldn't even let me sleep. What do they want? I picked my phone from the side table and my hands stumbled. It was Tiksha's call.


"What?" I spoke as rude as I could because I know, one more word from her against me and I'd have ended up with tears.

"Give me your address." She ordered. But it was the same childish tone in which we used to talk.

"Why? So that you can send goons to kidnap me? Oh, for them it's B-500, Enchanting Apartments across the basement camp. They are most welcome. I will serve them with my world famous coffee too." I replied sarcastically and mentally patted myself for such a good performance.

"Good. I'll be there in an hour or so." She said and I cut the call and cried. Why did I? She isn't worth crying Nandini. I said to myself and got dressed in my shorts and went out to prepare the breakfast.

I didn't know their food choices so I made things of my choice and dressed the dining table.


It was exactly 8 when Cabir came out. He pounced on the sandwiches as if he was hungry since ages.

"Easy dude! It's all yours. And btw you didn't even wish me." I said making a pout.

"Oh sorry! Good morning princess. And thank you so much for these tasty sandwiches. I'm dying of hunger." He replied while filling his mouth with sandwiches and juice.

"Haha awe good morning and your welcome." I replied and started having mine.


We both were eating when it hit me. "God! We forgot about Manik! What would he eat?" I said while eyeing the last sandwich which was in Cabir's hand.

He looked at me, then at the sandwich and started running, "It's mine. Get that!"

"No it's not! Give it back. What will he eat?" I replied chasing him.

"Hurrr! Tu jake aur bana de uske liye. Ye to mai hi khaunga." Cabir sheepishly said.

"Mukka na maardun mein?" I asked in anger.

"Phele khane de fir maario." And he ate the whole sandwich in one bite.

"Hey bhagwan! Bhukkhe dinosaur. Uske liye to mai pasta bnaungii. Khaa tu sandwich!" I said and turned towards the kitchen to make something for Manik before he gets up.

"Mai bhi help kr skta hun agar tu mujhe bhi thoda degi to." He said grinning.

I just showed him a slap and walked towards the kitchen counter when the bell rang. Tiksha! She was saying that she would come. Is she here? I totally forgot about her.

"Cabir open it na" I was forcing him to open the door when Manik came down rubbing his eyes.

"Good morning amours." He wished us and sat for the breakfast. I served him while Cabir went to open the door.

"Hey. Come in." Cabir directed her to the sofa. I was standing in the kitchen pretending to do something.

"Hii. I am Tiksha. Nice to meet you! Can I talk to Nandini for a moment?" That gloomy smile from on Cabir's face had vanished and Manik had stopped his hand where it was. They both had tightened their fists. I wanted to calm them down but didn't because even I was in the same state as theirs.

"Guys, don't!" I said after a while stepping into the living room. They both were standing close to her with anger in their eyes. She was seeing me as if she has seen an alien and they both made faces and went inside leaving me alone with her.

"What." I said.

"I can explain." She said pleadingly.

"Yeah speak." I straightly said without any type of emotions. I just wanted to punch her in the face and hug her tight, because, best friend.

"Firstly, I broke up with Piyush." She said. I could see tears brimming in her eyes. She was so in love with him. But I couldn't console her at that moment.

"Cool. So?" I said rudely. I know this was too rude for her but she deserved this after saying all that to me at night.

"Someone poisoned me against you." She lowered her head and said. I know she was embarrassed.

"And you let him poison you against me. Great." I said sarcastically faking a smile.

"Listen to me first." She pleaded again.

"Okay."

"I was about to come to the airport that day when Piyush called me telling that it's an emergency and I've to meet him. So, I went to his home and found him drunk. He was taking... your... your name vigorously." She said with anger and sadness in her voice. I could sense something was too wrong.

"What? Why?" I asked totally shocked.

"Let me speak first. I asked him what happened so he told me that he loves you. And I was just..." She choked and I handed her a glass of water.

"Mai ek zariya thi tum tk pahuchne ki. He told me that he didn't love me. I thought that it was all your mistake that you were so into me and knew everything about me. And for irritating me more, he said that you were well aware of everything and you used to tell my personal things to everyone. I was so confused that when you called me I said those words to you. I am sorry. Later, Dhruv cleared everything and I took the next flight to New York to meet you." She said and broke down.

I hugged her as tight as I could because I knew she needed it. She was saying the truth. Her eyes said it all. I knew she loved Piyush more than herself. She had many beautiful memories with him. I looked up while I myself got tears in my eyes seeing my best friend crying so vigorously. I saw that they both were standing at the staircase smiling at me. I knew they were standing because they were tensed for me. I smiled back and broke the hug.

"So where are you going to live now?" I asked smilingly. I knew she got happy as I didn't ask her much and just changed the topic.

"Dormitory?" She said rather asked.

"No, with us. Right Cabir?" He remembered my promise and replied positively.

"So get ready all of you. We are leaving for the college in 20." I announced and showed Tiksha the only vacant room left in the house. I stepped out of the room giving her privacy as her mother had called her and it was something serious I guess.


Suddenly, Manik pulled me with him to his room.

"Are you okay?" He asked with concern in his eyes.

"Never been better!" I exclaimed with a cheeky smile and he kissed my cheeks.

"You look so cute like this." He said and hugged me. I was blushing very badly. I was still holding my cheek where he kissed. He broke the hug and asked me to get ready fast. I just nodded and was about to go when he stopped me and said, "30 days Nandini and you'll be mine." And then he let go off my hand and went inside his bathroom. I blushed. So. Hard.


God! I have to tell him that I love him. But how? Kal to maine use kehdiya ke its too fast. God help me please. She went to her room to change her clothes when Tiksha entered and asked her for a spare dress as her baggage was still not delivered from the airport.

"Haan wo mere cupboard mein se lele kch bhi jo pasand aye." I said and walked in the washroom. I returned wearing a white top and blue shorts with a green jacket only to find Tiksha looking hot in my red dress. "Haw kutti it was my favorite." I said.

"And that's why I wore it." She replied cheekily

"I said was'. It isn't now because you wore it." I replied playing with my eyebrows.

"Gandiii." She said making a cute face, hayee.

"Motttiii. Now get your strands straight I don't want to be late. Let's fight sometime else." I said cheekily drying my hair.

"Okay."

We both went into the living room only to find my two bimbos waiting for us all dressed. Cabir wore a cool purple T-shirt with blue jeans while my Manik wore white shirt and black trousers. Wait. I just called him my Manik. Am I mad or am I mad? No stop it. I love him, he loves me, and so what's the matter? Yaa, he's my Manik. Only mine.

"What are you thinking sissy?" Cabir asked clapping his hands in front of my eyes.

"Huh? Nothing! Let's go."

I

t was a 20 minutes drive to our campus. Manik stopped the car in front of the college gate and asked us to wait for him till he comes after parking the car. Tiksha excused herself for going to principal's office as she still hadn't completed some of the formalities. Our trio walked inside as MaNanBir. Haye I was in between those two muscular bodies protecting me from every evil eye.

So our subjects were mix matching with each other.

Cabir and Manik had chosen architects with interior designing while I had chosen Fashion designing with interior designing. I and Manik have also chosen music as our side course.

"Yay so none of us would be left alone here." I exclaimed with joy.
"Yup cutie." Manik said pulling my left cheek.
"Why are you so obsessed with my cheeks?" I asked making an angry pout
"I am obsessed with the whole you." He said leaning over me with a scary expression.

"Bas karo tum dono. Chal Manik our first period is about to start. Nandi hm dono tujhe library mein milenge okay. Take care. " He said. Awe how concerned he is for me.
"Otay." I replied like a baby.


I went in search of my first class in my dream university. I went inside and sat alone in the corner seat of the last row. Those foreign students were coming inside and taking their seats one by one leaving me all nervous. I couldn't face so many people and all of them strangers.

Actually, I have many disorders. And I am going to reveal them all just now. So, uhm, I am Claustrophobic, Xenophobic, Autophobic, Glossophobic, Agoraphobic, Brontophobic, Pyrophobic, Atychiphobic, Counterphobic, Hagiophobic, Necrophobic, Plasmophobic and Zeusophobic. (I do have all these phobias in my real life since the starting, hehe. And you can also search them on the internet to see which slang is used for what type of phobia. I am too phobic, haina? xD)


Suddenly a boy of my age, thankfully an Indian, because I am afraid of foreigners, came and sat next to me. "Hey." He said playfully.

"Hi."
"So?"
"Nandini, and you?"
"Aryamann it is. Please tell me I am your first friend here." He asked like a child. He acts so cute.
"Haha, yes." I replied in awe looking at his cute expressions.
"Yaye! Same pinch." He said pinching me on my hands. We talked for a moment and then turned towards the teacher who just entered the class.


"Good morning freshers. I am Mr. George Ivy. You can call me Ivy too if you want. I am going to teach you some prospects of designing. So this is our introductory class. C'mon introduce yourselves."

"Hey guys I am Steve from England..."
"I'm Noor from Pakistan."
"Hey, I am Nandini from India."
"And I am Aryamann from the same country as Nandini's."

And the introduction went on really well. The left 10 minutes were given free and Nandini asked Aryamann to join her to the canteen.

Cabir and Manik were already in the canteen when Tiksha entered inside to find any one of them.

"Tiksha hey!" Cabir shouted from his seat and Tiksha approached them.

"Nandi kahn hai?" She asked adjusting herself in the seat.

"Aati hogi. We are also waiting for her." Manik replied seeing towards the entrance and saw Nandini coming inside chatting with Aryamann. His blood boiled.

"There she is!" Cabir exclaimed. "And who's that guy?" Manik asked angrily.

"How do I know? Classmate hoga koi." Cabir replied confusingly.

"Hey guys!" I waved them from a distance. I could see Manik's angry face and in no time I guessed why. I approached them and begun, "Uh guys, this is Aryamann, one of my classmates. And Aryamann, he is Manik, he's Cabir and there, she is Tiksha."

"Nice to meet you guys." Aryamann replied cheekily.

"Nice to meet you too, Aryamann." Manik replied stressing on his name with a pure sarcastic smile.

"Manik." I gestured him with eyes to stop this and he walked out.

"What's his problem?" I asked Cabir.

"Pagal hai saala." Cabir replied me cheekily.


I didn't see him the whole day that day but fortunately, we found him at our house when we reached home. Rest of my day was pretty cool with almost no fouls. Aryamann was a fun loving and a genuine guy. We prepared the dinner together and then slept late while talking with each other. Manik still wasn't talking to me. Kya hua ise? I thought and went inside his room only to find him pacing in the balcony.

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So guys this is chapter 5. Boring na? I also feel the same. I will try to make them more spicy in the upcoming chapters. ^_^
LAMBE LAMBE COMMENT :(((((((

Edited by shavashava - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Aww Jealous Manik is damn cute!!
I have my doubts on Tiksha idk y but i think she might be trouble ...
CabiNi bond is super cute!!
Update soon ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: manya_189

Aww Jealous Manik is damn cute!!
I have my doubts on Tiksha idk y but i think she might be trouble ...
CabiNi bond is super cute!!
Update soon ;)


Oye hoye!!!!! Jealous manik...
Entry as mananbir was fadduu...
Aryamaan and nandini I must say a nice match...
I agree with manya on the tiksha part...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
they are
just so cute
it will be so nice to have
more mananbir moments
they r awesome
plzzz
cont soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awesome update
MaNanBir together
And then its Aryamann-Nandini meet
And Manik getting jealous!!!😆
Nice one
But Tiksha... Still have doubt

Cont soon
And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
No no its not boring at all.
Its good.
Ahh well i just love the MANANBIR trio. The trio is so damn cool
You are doing a good job.
Keep going. Till then waiting for the next update.
Lots of love.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
manik jealous from first meeting
uh huh
please do continue
bye sumi

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