Need to be loved. ON HOLD

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Prologue:
Every girl's life is not perfect.
Every girl in this world isn't happy with what she has.
Every girl in this world isn't positive.
Every girl in this world ain't rich.
Every girl in this world ain't beautiful.
And one of them is our dear Nandini Murthy.

She isn't perfect. She is a bit fat with chubby cheeks beautiful eyes and a pakoda nose. She loves her family and friends. But ain't that lucky to be loved back. Every other friend of her stabs her and she is left alone. She has now understood. She don't have any best friends now but some good friends which she really cares. She don't care what they think of her. She literally hate being ignored which she has to tolerate many a times.

She has a perfect imperfect little family. There's her dad who drinks on a daily basis and ignores being too attached to his children. Then there's her mom, who always fights with her for some reason or the other and most of them is partial between her and her elder sister. Then there's her elder sister, Sujata who is loved by her whole family. She is being pampered but Nandini is not. She is having her personal phone from a very young age but Nandini on the other hand, isn't even allowed to use her sister's phone for an hour. And she seldom allows her to.

Her mother, she always scolds her on slightest of her mistakes. She always abuses her a lot. She
'bhadkas' her relatives about her but as if she cares, lol. Nandini has lost all hope for a good daughter-mother relation with her mother. She is even having second thoughts that is she even her real mother?

Her father, abuses her after drinking and treats her badly often. But he loves her and his heart aches when her mother beats Nandini. But still, he don't speak to protect her. He is selfish. He doesn't interfere because he don't want to spoil his relation with her mom.

Her sister, she ain't that bad but not that good too. She is always on her phone and never really spends quality time with anyone except her friends. Nandini knows that deep inside she too loves her.

She have had enough. She doesn't care what her family thinks of her anymore and totally avoids being close to them.

She doesn't wants to be around people anymore. She is hurt. Too much. She was a very bright student and a topper of her class as well. But slowly and steadily, her performance is going down. She spends most of the time on her laptop following funny pages on Instagram to make her laugh and reading stories on India Forums and yeah, by watching her favorite show, Kaisi yeh yaariaan, and hoping Parth and Niti to become PaNi.

She dreams of being in the New York University with one of her really good friends, Tiksha. She wants to be there for her, to make herself proud not for anyone else.

Will she find someone who loves her to the extent which she deserves or will she be left out as usual?
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Guys so here it is the prologue. This maybe short or long I don't have any Idea but as of now this story is very close to my heart. Criticism is accepted with tomatoes and not eggs because I am a vegan, hehe. Will continue this soon. Do tell me how's it?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really loved the concept, it sounds something new, something interesting so waiting eagerly for your next update.⭐️
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I really liked this, can't wait for an update!
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Introduction

Nandini, she was too bubbly and funny. She always made everyone laugh but nobody knew how much pain she had inside her. She hid her pain behind her ever so charming and cute laughter.
She could never stand her friends cry instead she did funny things even in public to make them smile. Their smile meant a lot to her. But, there were only 2 people who actually loved to see her smile. Lavangi, and maybe Tiksha, only they cared for her a bit. She considered them to be her best friends. She didn't know about them.

This was Nandini who loved to see people smile unlike her.
She was 14 year old and was busy reading stories of her most favorite couple on India forums.

I too wish to have a pure love story as them. But it's just a show. Actually, true love doesn't exist. Like how could one just spend some time with the other person and start getting physical with him/her and name those lusted feelings as love? Like how? It's nothing but a mere infatuation. I can only think of being loved by someone. What's wrong in dreaming? She thought. OH GOD! Its 3:11, now I'll again sleep late and would wake up in the evening. How will I complete my tuition's homework? Sir won't spare me tomorrow. Please God save me! She said aloud.
Huh let it be! I am just gonna read these stories. At least, I can imagine about my dream man *_* which doesn't exist and I know that I'd end up marrying a total jerk. Btw isn't it ironic? Like you marry someone whom you don't even know and then on the first night you get physical with that unknown person... Hey bhagwan how do they even manage? Sharam nai aati chee chee! I'd never let my husband touch me. Uff these jerks na! Acha now Nandu just shut up and concentrate! Waise bhi you one day you'll be in THE NEW YORK UNIVERSITYShe talked with herself and then got herself into different stories.

She was chatting with one of her old friends at 4 in the morning on facebook. Like seriously? Can you imagine? When the world is about to wake up she didn't have slept. Total mess she was.
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Manik Malhotra! 14 years old boy with a lot of attitude. He was charming. No wonder how he had so many girlfriends at such a tender age. He didn't care about studies until the last day of his exams and totally ate all the pages at the last moment and pass with nice marks. God these girls! I can't understand any of them why are they so chipku? I'm just done with these girlfriends just gotta study and a lot and be in THE NEW YORK UNIVERSITY. He was grinning while thinking.

Mom, make some good food. Cabir is coming for Dinner. Manik shouted so that his voice could reach her mother who was in the kitchen. Jee malik she chuckled and Manik smiled. Now stop smiling and pick him! Her mother replied.

He shared a good relationship with his parents. They were fun loving like him and didn't bother about his studies as they knew that he would come up well! They never forced him for anything. He was kind of independent. Could have night stays, girlfriends, parties, and could waste his time and money. He was a boy, at last!

They were too totally different kids with different sanskars'. At last, they lived in a hypocrite society. Boys were given full azaadi whereas girls couldn't even meet their friends outside school. Boys were always treated like this. So let's see how these two different souls end up being together!

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So guys, this was a brief introduction for the story and maybe you can call it a character sketch. As I've already mentioned in the PM that it's my story so you can say it to be my love story with some added mirchi masala. As of now, it is based on total reality. I will bta you whenever I'd add things to spice up the story! Do enjoy my so called autobiography! And ya do comment tihehe.😛
Btw for your kind information it's just a character sketch kind off so its short. The chapter would be long enough to satisfy you! Adios amigos. 😳

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Chapter 1 The Adolescent Amour!

Nandu uthh jaa it's 4 in the evening. Tuition nai jana kya? Tiksha spoke while waking up her dear friend Nandini.
Haan good morning kaisi hai? Nandini spoke while rubbing her eyes. Good morning nahi evening! Tayyar hoja tuition ke liye late hojaynge warna! Tiksha scolded her. Acha baba see I am awake. Tu exercise complete kar mai tayyar hoti hun. Nandini replied and went outside the room.

It was common for Nandini to see her friend Tiksha in her house every now and then. But the amount of taunts she would receive from her mother about how good Tiksha is was just too much. She tried to not bring her home often and maybe she also understood her dilemma.

They both chatted for awhile and then left for tuition.

Yaar mujhe neend aarhi hai Nandini whispered. Same pinch Tiksha replied. And they both started laughing without any prior reason.

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Manik was just flickering around in facebook when he saw Nandini Murthy's profile picture.

She is so adorably cute. I am adding her! And with that he sent her a friend request . Tu nahi sudhrega na said Cabir while entering the room and listening his words. Never! Manik giggled and again said, yaar look at her she is so cute. Agar mein nai badla hota to isme bhi kch hot dhund leta he winked at him and they both started laughing. Dekhte hain madam accept karti hain ya nahi Cabir said and they both went out for snacks.

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Nandini was eating namkeen chawal' while surfing on her laptop.

Are yar bht din hogye lets open facebook. She opened and went through her friend requests. Manik Malhotra haan. He looks so pyaara. She went through his profile and accepted his request.

Manik immediately messaged her Hi!

Speed han? 😛Waise Hey hi Nandini replied

Actually I was waiting for this angelic girl to accept my request so that I could chat with her for a while. 😛

Stop flirting and tell me did we ever meet?😕

Why? I don't think so I am not sure

Yayyy yaad aya. You remember basketball competition mein hamari team jeeti thi when we played with your school?😃

...Oh to tum wo ho...

Yes 😳

You insulted me so much naa I still remember😭

4 saal phele ki baat hai 😛

Whatever, I will take my revenge Miss Nandini Murthy.😉

We will see. Acha listen bye now I need to go. Take care 🥱

You too. Good night.😊

So this was their first healthy chat. They had met 4 years before in a basketball match when she went to Mumbai and Manik's team had lost. They didn't talk but exchanged angry glares. Now they were 14. Still were a bit egoistic but had forgotten about that incident. Manik thought her to be cute and Nandini gave him a new name, Pyaaaraaa'.

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hey both started chatting on a daily basis. They exchanged their WhatsApp numbers. Nandini would literally beg her sister to give her phone for an hour. Slowly and steadily they became best friends and told each other every little happening around them. Nandini felt really happy when talking to him. She used to forget all her worries for some time. They started having video chats and it had been an year now. They were best of friends and were dying to meet each other.

One day, Nandini came running from her school and messaged him on facebook that she has been selected for the basketball competition that is going to be held in his school and they would be meeting soon. She thought that he must be in his academy so she took a short nap went to her tuition and returned and checked her account hoping for a reply. But all she could get was disappointment. Manik didn't reply. She felt that's something wrong but ignored and slept thinking that he must be stuck somewhere.


Next day, it was an off from school so she messaged him again in the morning. Still, no reply. 2 weeks passed but Manik didn't come online nor did he reply her. She even called him but he had changed his number. And one day when she was deep lost in her thoughts about Manik she remembered about Cabir. He was his best friend. She messaged him and asked him about Manik's whereabouts. After a 3 day wait he replied: His parents have taken him abroad and he may not be able to meet us ever. He asked me to tell you but I couldn't find you on facebook. Glad that you messaged. I don't have his number either.

She was broken. Why? After so many years one good thing happened in her life. But it remained only for a year. She was again lost in herself. No out goings, bad academic performance and what not?! She decided to just forget everything and move on. She would get many best friends in future...

Precap-

Leap of 5 years.😃

So guys, that's it. I will update long only on weekends because I am too busy with other stuffs. Do comment :))))))

Edited by shavashava - 10 years ago
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It was very nice update looking for manan scene
Thsnks for thr pm
Do pm me next time
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WOw yaar this is interesting
I am really liking it
It's ok update whenever u can
Bt am greedy so update at ur earliest 😛

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This story is very interesting.
And thanks for the pm.
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PROMO: (Keep guessing what's the celebration is for)
Acha to its celebration time, let's go on a silent drive across the area, Tiksha suggested.
Raat ke 1 baje? Nandini asked with a not so good expression.
OH YES! Please uncle 1 ghante tak waps ajaynge pakka! Tiksha started requesting her father who allowed only for an hour as it was...
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Chapter 1 Years subsequent-ed.

It has been 5 years since that incident and now everything was sorted. She forgot him and was living a very happy life or maybe I should say that fake' happy life again. She scored 98.3% in her 12th boards and now she was going to be Eighteen years old. It was her birthday eve.

Tiksha why weren't you picking up the phone? Nandini shouted when Tiksha picked her phone after half an hour of trying.
Wo actually phone silent pe tha na. Tiksha stammered while speaking as she was preparing a surprise party for her.
Acha Okay she replied and cut the call in anger.

Oh so my cutie pie is angry haan? I will make it up pakka promise, said Tiksha to herself.

It was 3 minutes to twelve. Nandini was sitting on her bed and was thinking deep.
I am turning 18. Finally, I am going to be legal and look nobody cares. I am left all alone in my room at my 18th birthday eve. Huhh Nandini was talking to herself when Tiksha with some her friends and relative sneaked inside her house and in front of her room. They all started count-downing, 5...4...3...2...1 Bhooom HAPPY BIRTHDAYYY NANDINIII!!! They all pounced on her. At first, she got scared and then hugged everyone and thanked them.

They had a brought a big chocolate cake, her favorite one, and OUR LITTLE MONSTER NANDU' was written over it. After cutting and feeding the cake to each other. They all started presenting their gifts. Her sister, who was now earning, had gifted her Iphone6s because she was longing to have any type of apple gadget. Her mother gifted her pearl watch. This was her first, wow! Thought Nandi.
Hey Dad! Aap ke laaye mere liye? She asked him with excitement and in return he gave her an envelope.
Envelope? Seriously? She made a confusing face and opened it. Her eyes enlarged in shock when she saw the scholarship acceptance letter from The New York University.
PAPAAA!!!! WOWOWOWOWOW THIS IS SURELY THE BEST GIFT EVER!! YAYYY! She pounced upon her dad and thanked him a zillion times.
And you know what? I am gonna accompany you mottiii! Tiksha said with a smile.
What? Seriously? It's the best birthday of my life!! And she hugged everyone again and wasn't able to control her happiness she started jumping here and there. YAYYAAYYAAAYYAAA!!! She was so happy, God!

Acha to its celebration time, let's go on a drive. Tiksha suggested.
Raat ke 1 baje? Nandini asked with a not so good expression. Tiksha started requesting her father who allowed only for an hour as it was her 18th birthday.

That was an amazing night to think again for! They enjoyed and literally made shops open for them at 2 am. They were having fun while her fun stopped ringing for the 6th time. Uthale important hoga to? Tiksha forced her to pick it up.
Hello? She said.

Are you Nandini? Nandini Murthy? A voice came from the phone

Yes, speaking. Why what happened? She asked concerned.

Are you sure? The caller asked again.

Arre haan yaar I am THE NANDINI MURTHY speaking! She said in a fake anger.

Happy birthday! The called wished her and cut the call.

Bada ajeeb tha. Pagal huh! Nandini blabbered.

Kya hua? Asked Lavangi, one of her really good friend.

Nothing yaar. I am just curious. There's a guy. He always calls to wish me on my birthday since when I got my phone. And you know what? He always calls with a different number. Nandini spoke after a short pause.

To kya hua? You must be happy. Tera secret lover! Tiksha teased her and soon Lavangi and her other friends too joined her. They enjoyed their teasing session and then went home. They dropped her at 4 am in the morning. Her parents were watching TV to keep themselves busy as they knew that she'd late because afterall she's 18 and its her birthday. They greeted her and asked about how they enjoyed. She asked her papa as to when is she leaving for New York.

Beta! Wo... Mai tuje phele hi btadena chata tha but I thought ki birthday pe gift du so...

Are koi bat nai I loved this! Kab jana hai btao na?

5 din baad.

WHAT?!?! Dad are you mad? How will I manage? It's January na. New session tou I mean new session starts from July August right?

It's not India beta. Her mother interfered

Haan ye sahi keh rhi hai whn April se shuru hojata hai. Januray mein jayegi, streams wgarh choose hongi fir tere liye rehne ke liye jagah and tuje friends bhi to chaiye na aur uske baad tu wahan ghum liyo.

Aur aap log aoge na mere sath?

Ayenge na. Sab ayenge.

Fine!

She stormed into her new room in Dwarka. Her family shifted to Dwarka after she passed her 12th. She thought of taking a drop so that she could do better in the entering exam of any college.
She thought that how could they send her so early. But then she thought that her father is doing this much for her then why can't she obey her obediently. After all they are doing this for her. She felt good and called Tiksha to be ready for shopping tomorrow evening. She thought for a while and slept.

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Manik come down! Have dinner with us. We are waiting. His dad shouted.

Coming paa. He came down and sat.

Manik, listen carefully to I'm going to say. We, I mean me and your mom, we are shifting back to India because of some business purpose.

What about me? Am I not your family? Manik asked with attitude.

Beta you are. But me and your mom, we want you to study in the New York University. Please child. It's our dream. We didn't ask you for anything ever! This one thing. Please.

Fine dad! I will go. When am I leaving? Manik asked in arrogance.

After 5 days. His father replied and retired to his bed.


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Somewhere in the world:

Yes boss?...Oh okay... We will kidnap her... Yes... Where?... Okay... And what's her name?... Nandini Murthy hmm... And the caller cut the call.
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So guys this was it. I am sorry for updating this late but I can explain. I was out hehe and sorry for this chottu update too. But next one would surely be longer and they both might come in each other's way. So stay tuned and please comment. I am literally begging you -_-

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