MaNan SS : The Incomplete Song (Part 10 - Pg 62 - 13th April)

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#241

amazing one of the finest part...beautifully penned
Cabira was awesome... finally Manik accepted his true feelings in front of him..
Nandini ' realisation also penned beautifully... .
Last part was the most awaited. . truly magical .. i read the part two three times
...so magical can't explain
desperately waiting for the next part Hope they will express their feelings suppressed
for six long years .
...finally MaNan having their Hope back :
you are such a wonderful writer thank you so much for the wonderful writing... great work.⭐️

egarly waiting for next part... pls update soon

Thank you so much for PM 😊

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Roshni S

@Roshni8

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Amazing update dear

It was simply awesome

Nandini's realisation

ManBir talk

Nandini-Virat talk

And finally the last part

You've nailed it

Looking forward to read the next part

Pls update soon

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kiaraMaNanholic

@kiaraMaNanholic

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#243

you again left me thinking that whether I should reread the story or I should just wait for you to write the next chapter..
I am actually glad that you dint started MaNan conversation coz they seriously don't need any interruption this time.

coming to your update, it left me baffled again thinking how can someone write the emotions like really deep cause I know going to depth takes loads of concentration and hard work so I think you are putting loads of hard work writing this beautiful piece of story.

outrage of emotions is very necessary in any relation cause it's really hard to carry the burden on chest and it only leads to piercing yourself daily from inside. so manik's outrage was the best part and for me it high lighted your update.

Nandini's dilemma is quite justified Virat has always received her love as a whole now she is confused whether she can divide her love and whether they both can accept each other wholeheartedly.

I thought this in your previous update that did Manik change that he left her alone crying cause he can't do it and i was right you made my belief on Manik more now yes he was standing there just to check that she doesn't fall down he was in pain cause he was the reason she was shedding those precious pearls that pierced his heart thousand time..

you showed it very clearly and it is the fact that after Cabir if anyone could understand them than it was Navya and she cleared the air that was revolving around Cabir in taking the next step

so now if manik is taking it further from here then he would make sure when she returns its eternal...

i am in love with your story cause it depicts each and every emotion deeply..
let it be the love, the wait, the pain, responsibility, friendship, care, trust, protective, and need!!

wrapping my comment by saying you that you are one awesome writer and i would love to read more works from you..

Love,
Kiara..

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#244

wow awsm update

loved it

very nicely written

cont soon

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Omg omg another rocking update..loved realizations of both n timely cupidgiri of cabir..

Nywz continue soon revs..me loving ur as more n more as every update pass by

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: NAVYA64
nice update
loved it
cont soon

Thank you dearie😊😊😊

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: simply16
That was a super duper update... I liked the way Manik dealt with the situation, its just like him...I think its going to be fun from here so plz do not keepe waiting give me an update soon dear.love u, Della

Thanks a lot dearie...😊😊😊

Will try to come up with the next update soon...