Manan FF // The Impulsive Soul-Mates// Ch22 link updtd on pg152 29/7 - Page 42

Nice update dear...I just loved the way nandini wanted to make Manik feel jealous but it was she who underwent all the torture...oh my god I was giggling to glory when I read nandini threw her shoes at Manik...my husband had a questioning look at me he thought I had gone insane...I just love u girl it just made my day and the romance was apt not vulgar just wild...ha-ha

this update is fabulous...so this will lead to issues I suppose...the whole protection thing u mentioned..whatever ot was great reading. ..update soon ;)

M speechless!!

Wasn't vulgar at all!
It was hot and sensous..
The wait.. The teasing was worth it ;)

omg wat an update..
this is just awsome..tooo good..
these two are something.
seriously nandu did every possible thing to make him jealous but but but hez manik who always have an upper arm.. they are sooo cutee..
i loved how he ws taking revenge n teased her.. n lol she threw her sandles on him aftr hearing his witty comment.. he purposely rang the bell..
i loved their talk.. awwee nandu is soo cute.. crying lyk a baby.. n then hez pacifying her.. n they are together.
i loved nandu n her demand for kiss.. these two are the cutest manan.. i must say..
u really write sooo well... every scenes is just wow.. im loving it .. n thnx fr a big wala update..
update soon will wait.. :)

okay my suju babby pehle rona bandh karo m sorry kan pakarke i was hell busy today u knw i came home at 10 pm so m super late sorry meri jaan so sorry ab to has de 😃
now com time...
nandu was must be looking breathtaking beautiful
tujhe pata hai i was so angry on u for embarrassing her n making her crying like hell itna gussa aaya tha na ki soch liya tha ab read h nehi karungi
n manik aur soha...i was boiling wid anger n upar se nandu was flooding whole mumbai 😆
bat the next things...ufff...m blushing like a idiot...
so its all manik's prank to make her jelo accha hua her temptations was rising ...uff ...she was so gussa
itna big big heels usne manik per feka hihihi lol thnk god manik is in one piece...😆
n the most awaiting part sacchi mein tune bohot wait krwaya yaar i was telling u to wrie dis for long
the love making part was tooo hhhaaawwwttt ssseeennnsssuuuaaalll sssiiizzzllliiinnnggg
too much to handle ufff kya scene tha yaar just loved it
nandu was having fun but manik ki toh band baj rahi thi
theres too many parts in her body compared to his lil mouth n...ok m speechless ...u raised up too my expectations ...ufff love u yaar kya update tha
n nandu itna bod kaise ho gaya n omg r u serious they haven't take any protection isliye ye ladhki preg ho gayi 😆 but aur v din age baki hai na jane ab kya kya hoga
love so much meri jaan don't cry yaar feels sad i was damn busy today [:'(]
lotzzz of love ❤️..❤️...❤️...
thnx for the pm
update jaldiii
so is dis com up to ur expectations as u were dying to read it????😉

Wow fab update

Yaiiyeee u updated u updated and yes this time it was uummm hot ofcourse it wasnt vulgar at all according to me wonder what was he really doing under the blanket lol😆 okay before my comments appear to be vulgar let me come back to the update the jealous thing between manik and nandu was superbly written hsi so cool behavior was amazing well i always say and am sure now that he is like me... I really thought that manik would be jealous but u surprised me this really is awesome... the nandu famous cursing n ranting was hilarious to read...

naughty manik made ma nandu cry.
fab update dr.
cntnue soon.

Awesome and superb update
Loved it
Mind blowing update
Update the next part soon