Manan FF // The Impulsive Soul-Mates// Ch22 link updtd on pg152 29/7 - Page 22

Originally posted by: Senpoo

Hiii... @Sujal1fan! (Let me know if you want to be addressed by any another name here)

</div>First of all 👏👏👏Your story and scripting is very gripping and very engaging...👏👏<div>

Just bumped into this FF as one of my random reads and found it interesting!!!

The characters defined are very enthralling thus making me go WOW!!! The impulsivness in Manik & Nandini to meet just a day before Nandini's engagement day... Then trying their chemistry test 😉😳This Nandini is too cool to be ignored... Manik being a cool dude without heavy emotional baggage and his take-it-easy going flair is fascinating too... 👏👏

And the way you had put the pages jumping between the flashback and the present, it keeps me curious to know both what's happened then and what's happening now... You got the flair to keep the excitement ON... When I am reading the flashback I want that to be continued... But now when I read the present I want this to be continued... 😆Such a thing is your contentful sequence that is keeping me as a reader hooked to either of the parts...

P.S: Hope you have the full story defined in your mind and not going on the flow to see where things take you... And I really hope you are regular at updating your FF so that I am not left waiting forever and also stranded without any further updates... 😉

And I am sure you are enjoying your writing as well... Keep it going for your own satisfaction and our own entertainment too... If you are regular in your writing then I will make sure I am regular in my reading as well... Deal?! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Senpoo

Hiii... @Sujal1fan! (Let me know if you want to be addressed by any another name here)

</div>First of all 👏👏👏Your story and scripting is very gripping and very engaging...👏👏<div>

Just bumped into this FF as one of my random reads and found it interesting!!!

The characters defined are very enthralling thus making me go WOW!!! The impulsivness in Manik & Nandini to meet just a day before Nandini's engagement day... Then trying their chemistry test 😉😳This Nandini is too cool to be ignored... Manik being a cool dude without heavy emotional baggage and his take-it-easy going flair is fascinating too... 👏👏

And the way you had put the pages jumping between the flashback and the present, it keeps me curious to know both what's happened then and what's happening now... You got the flair to keep the excitement ON... When I am reading the flashback I want that to be continued... But now when I read the present I want this to be continued... 😆Such a thing is your contentful sequence that is keeping me as a reader hooked to either of the parts...

P.S: Hope you have the full story defined in your mind and not going on the flow to see where things take you... And I really hope you are regular at updating your FF so that I am not left waiting forever and also stranded without any further updates... 😉

And I am sure you are enjoying your writing as well... Keep it going for your own satisfaction and our own entertainment too... If you are regular in your writing then I will make sure I am regular in my reading as well... Deal?! 👍🏼

Plz update naaa...