Manan FF // The Impulsive Soul-Mates// Ch22 link updtd on pg152 29/7 - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
Alright guys now i get it..it seems many of you havnt read the prologue then

Ok no issues it is fine please read the character briefing and Prolugue in Pg 1and then may be you get it a bit and for the rest you will have to wait and watch err read

Actually this is a bit of back and forth narration ,something like u find in Anurag Basu's movies. i am a huge fan of his way of narration its like in bits an pieces but by the end of it every thing falls into place just abt perfectly. So i thot of experimenting sum on you guys😉

But i guess it didnt quite go well wid u al don wory will try to take care of it hence forth and immense amt of thanx for all the reads and feed backs means a lot.

Although i don personally reply to u al but trust me guys it means alot. I am a lazy writer otherwise u you guys keep me goin😊😛

So keep the feed backs cumin helps me improve

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey.. Jst so u knw.. I hit like button 10-15 tyms.. Bt ain't workin.. Dnt knw y ..
Comin to ur story.. Its really awesome n unique.. Dnt knw y som readers got confused.. Bt i really lykd d present n past tracks of ur story ..
Waiting fr mor awesom updates..
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Posted: 10 years ago
babez no offense wid chap it was great at its place but I feel disconnected as in if this was present then wat was that earlier in 6 chaps ahhh it was hell confusing uhmm plzz updatr next chap to clear our doubts I think track was lost somewhere like no connection in this and last one
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very very nice Update.
Awesome Story.
Loved it.
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh I just thought throughout the chapter that I was reading some other FF..
BUT thanks to you ..u told us abt the prologue which many of us didn't read at start. ..

I was thinking we would get more abt their mumbai life. Was kinda loving it.. I hope u are going to write. .. how she got pregnant. Why the hell manik asked to get rid of baby..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pm me next time.
You write beautifully. Best of luck.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow amazing...i loved it.waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
The entire story is so good.. I am loving it..keep updating
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Posted: 10 years ago
Firstly I felt disconnected but after reading prologue I understand this part...ya it is quite interesting
Waiting for next part
Plz update soon
Jst can't wait to knw wat happened between them
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
goes right with the flow
loved it
cont soon

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