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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay, completely random drabble. I'm just posting this here because I'm not sure about the main forum. I haven't written fiction for around three years now so tell me how it is. Honestly.


It was a fact very evident that Raima Roy was hot. Well, as hot as a girl of fifteen could be. And whom else would allegedly hot fifteen year old girls date other than the popular boys of their resident rock band? So blame the naive and narcissistic minds of the teenage realm, not his conscience. It isn't as if she genuinely loves him.

Strawberry. How cliche, he thought. He liked strawberries, didn't he? Not really, to be honest. But then, perhaps one could learn to like them. He could make do with strawberries, yeah. So he tried to mute his thoughts as their lips gracelessly danced together, much like the two drunken teenagers they were. Her slightly steadier lips spoke about the little experience she had, the same, unfortunately, couldn't be said about him. Like it mattered to any of them. His arm around her waist? Check. Hand in her hair, yes. He pulled away a minute later, charming the girl with one of his standard smirks coupled with a diverting quip about her choice of lip gloss. She coyly blushed and with a teasing glance, bade him a good night and walked away from the secluded section of the library. As he walked towards his dorms with dread, Cabir reflected how he felt about all of it. It wasn't specifically bad, but he had listened to enough retellings of first kisses to pretend to be oblivious to the obvious disparity. Then, there was the question of his morality. Sure, the girl was nice-looking as evidenced by the trail of gifted roses she walked upon, but he was convinced that was all there was to it. As long as he gave her the status, she would give him a mask. And well, Cabir Dhawan didn't do guilt. Even so, as he stood before the doors, he searched his pockets for any spare crumbs of courage. Breathe in, breathe out. He hadn't even crossed the threshold when he heard the smug question from the familiar bed, 'sooo how was it?' Breathe in. His friend. Breathe out. His best friend. Breathe in. And so he turned, still in the dark about his answer, as he mechanically mirrored the smug smirk and spoke, 'f**king amazing'.



Edited by Stardust09 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: diva82

Kiran!!!!😳 Hey pri

The last segment, someone sent a cheap gift to parth, pink and calling him a princess. His face looked so hurt. My heart broke.



Shit... I kinda figured it out by reading last few pages... Can we comment on the segment and tell them take it down... We dont have to see people getting insulted😡.. stupid aqsa.. that girl should have edited that part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Whoa the AT moved fast from yesterday😆
How is everyone?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sars.

Whoa the AT moved fast from yesterday😆

How is everyone?


dude sars so much has happened in the last 4 hours
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Cherry-


dude sars so much has happened in the last 4 hours


What happened? I was too busy studying History😭😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Some ppl every thing make Parth Vs. Niti...personally I feel Parth and Niti shud stop together any segment ..these segments dont look good not even entertaining...all time these segments trend to fans war...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LIKEDMG

Some ppl every thing make Parth Vs. Niti...personally I feel Parth and Niti shud stop together any segment ..these segments dont look good not even entertaining...all time these segments trend to fans war...


Well I think they're going to kinda have to do segments, they're the main couple and most main couples have interviews all the time. It's just some fans sometimes over-analyse everything. At the end of the day they're two individuals who 'work' together and then go home, so it is 'professional' in a sense that they have to do interviews I guess.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sars.


Well I think they're going to kinda have to do segments, they're the main couple and most main couples have interviews all the time. It's just some fans sometimes over-analyse everything. At the end of the day they're two individuals who 'work' together and then go home, so it is 'professional' in a sense that they have to do interviews I guess.


That's the problem...if they have to do it ..then they shud act properly..they openly show their awkwardness that trends all out of box theories...
they need PR team...all of them...
fans shud be little bit logical
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LIKEDMG


That's the problem...if they have to do it ..then they shud act properly..they openly show their awkwardness that trends all out of box theories...
they need PR team...all of them...
fans shud be little bit logical


Yeah I agree with you on this, If they do an interview they should make it less suspicious that something negative happened between the two.
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Posted: 10 years ago
OK that person who sent that gift which made parth upset wrote on intsa that it was a mistake/error, she didn't mean to sent it. Now I don't know how true she is but I know of someone who does know this person and she said this person never bashes Parth.
But having said that, Aqsa SHOULD NEVER have zoomed in on Parth's discomfort like Anu said, it hurt everyone sentiments.
That shouldn't have been aired, period.

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