Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I Love this nautanki update...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Haha..hilarious😆..love this girl..manik tho fida hogaya and the hug left him dumbstruck..awesome update..waiting for the next chapter please continue soon :)
Edited by Kuushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
this is just so awesome
loved it full
entertainment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 8 teaser

NEXT DAY

Nandini came to college in her short shorts with her half top with her waist exposed and a jacket over her shoulders covering her arms

As soon as she entered she saw a tensed cabir

Kya mujhe tumhare chehre par tension dikh raha he?? asked nandini poking cabirs chest

Waha dekh said cabir pointed towards a group of girls going ga-ga over someone whos face was not a visible

Is that manik there among those girlss told nandini gritting her teeths
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Srry guyss for the late update but what could i do birthday party thi fir sare assignments and presentations bhi the but now i am back so lets start the chappy and cut this
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CHAPTER - 8

NEXT DAY

Nandini came to college in her short shorts with her half top with her waist exposed and a jacket over her shoulders covering her arms

As soon as she entered she saw a tensed cabir

Kya mujhe tumhare chehre par tension dikh raha he?? asked nandini poking cabirs chest

Waha dekh said cabir pointed towards a group of girls going ga-ga over someone whos face was not a visible

Is that manik there among those girlss told nandini gritting her teeths with anger

Nope he is maniks cousin Dishank replied cabir in a irritated voice

So what so much in him that girls ate dying over him let me also see told nandini with a mischievous smirk

Chal cabir told nandini dragging cabur with her

WHO IS DISHANK??? screamed nandini

Yeh toh sachi ki queen kong thought cabir and chuckled to himself

I am she heard a manly voice as a boy came out from the crowd giving a lusty smirk to nandini

Sheeh iss me aisa kya he cabir jo ladkiya iss pe marti he ?? Isse toh accha manik dikhta he told nandini

WT* true told cabir laughing like a lunatic and rolling on the ground catching his stomach

But befire nandini could react to cabir she felt herself bieng pinned to a wall with her hands over her head

You bi*** what u told manik is beyter than me ?? Have even ever had s&* with anyone ??

None of your businesses bas***d !! Snapped nandini back at dishank

Ooo so that means u are a virgin huh?? But u look just like a sl** .donno how will u look without your clothes on my be...

But before Dishank could continue he was on the ground with his bleeding lips

SHUT THAT AS***** MOUTH OF YOUR U JERK !!! screamed nandini and kicked him repeatedly 3-4 times on his organ making him howl in pain

LET EVEN ME SEE HOW U HO TO A GIRL WITH BAD INTENSIONS !!bas***d!! told nandini and walked of

But this all melodrama was observed by none other than manik

He followd her and saw her remove a revolver from her thigh and remove all the bullets on a nearby tree

Smoke started emitting from the holes where the bullets were shot

CHEAPO ,BLPODY bas***d,STUPID ,IDIOT ,JERK ,ETC HOW COULD HE SPEAK ALL THOSE RUBBISH THINGS TO ME !! ME NANDINI MURTHY UURRGGHHH!! Screamed nandini with all her might and collapsed on her knees sobbing like a small kid

N..n..nnaandini ?? Asked manik in a cute voice

What!!?? Asked andini in a stern voice

Fishank was my cousin i always used to share with him everything i also had a sister AArohi i used to love her a lot but he... he...played with her feelings and used her and then left her i ... i... have seen her nandini the way she was broken,she never smiled ,i lost my sister my sister nandini the next day she..she..she ..jum..jump..jumped ..fro..from ..th..the..te..rr..terace told manik shedding rears and choking

Hey manik i didn't mean to hurt u i was just feeling so low but i am ok now replied nandini i a cute voice

Yaa replied manik

Smile now manik told nandini

He tried to smile but could my are not allowing me to smile

Accha k then before manik could react nandini came closer towards him and sat on his lap and wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him closer that he could feel her hot breath over his face and she could his

And before manik could tell anything she pressed her lips over his and started kissing him

At first manik was shocked but later he to wrapped his hands around nandinis waist pulling her closer and started kissing her passionately sucking her lips and biting them to which nandini responded by moaning

He parted her lips and entered her mouth kissing her

But before manik could do something else nandini pulled back and winked at him which made manik simle and blush at the same time

How was it manik?? Asked nandini teasing manik to which manik blushed more deeper

Hahahaha manik malhotra is blushing like a tomato told nandini giggling

But manik soon pulled her close and asked So when u were talking to dishank u told i am even better than him so am i really better than him?? Asked manik giving his mischievous smirk

Wh..wh .what ..d..do ..i..know?? Replied nandini blushing for the first time

U are blushing nandini told manik huskily in her ears

manik leave me told nandini

No lets see if i am good or not then u will even come to know na told manik winking

Haawww!! Told nandini making her mouth in an O shape

Ya lets try it huh?? Told manik removing his jacket and throwing it away

GET AWAY MANIK screamed nandini pushing manik away and blushing like tomato

Ho away manik told nandini running off

Atree wait nandu wait na told manik picking up his jacket and running away with it behind nandini

I will make sure u will pay for whatever u did nandini murthy i won't hurt u but i can hurt manik na told dishank evily


Precap:- dishank to kidnap manik
Nandini to the rescue
Jungle me mungle

So how was it i hope u all will enjoy my story a
Like always

Love

ANGELA



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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
awesome just loved it
m so loving this nandini
its just amazing
plzzz update soon
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Mera chapter and guys

CHAPTER - 8

Manik was trying to catch up with Nandini but she was to fast for him

she was running through corridors with Manik right behind her she reached at an end and saw it was jammed by students

Dammn nigga man !! Uttered a frustrated nandini

Suddenly all the students especially boys started running away like rats with a cat behind them

What is happening?? Thought nandini to herself

CAUGHT YA!!! Screamed manik and caught her shoulder and twirled her

She saw the whole corridor was empty which full now

She tilted her head little amd saw a bhojpuri hindi mam walking towards them eyeing manik

Shit kamini thought nandini and told

Manik i am a bit tired so can we just move from here fast bery fast told nandini to manik

Aree!! Why are u feeling scred asked manik cheerfully

Tumhe tumhari izzat ki parwah he?? Asked nandini

Ha he replied manik

Toh chalo yaha se told nandini and tried dragging him but before she could do anything esle

BALWANJI!!

they both heard a voice

But nandini saw maniks expression it showed a shocked face

Suddenly manik pulled nandinis hand and started running

BALWANJI!! AREE BALWANJI!! they heares the faint voice

U idiot u could have told me kamini was coming told nandini

But i didn't knew her name replied nandini

Mwra rape hote hote bach gaya by the way...

Me ja rahi hu bye balwanji told nandini and ran off giggling

This girl na thought manik to himself

As he was about to turn and go...

WWAACCKK!! and manik was on the ground unconscious

NANDINI MURTHY U WILL HAVE TO PAY FOR WHAT U DID told dishank and laughed like a maniac

Take him to the godown and tie him up ordered dishank

Now lets play the game miss murthy

SPACE COLLEGE CANTEEN

hey yaar yeh nandini kaha he asked navya

Aur manik bhi told cabir

Yeh lo nandini toh aa gayi told navya and went towards her

Arrmm guys manik kaha he?? Asked nandini politely

Humme nahi malum nandini replied both mukti and cabir flashing a genuine smile at her

Kuch toh gadbad hui he warna manik mujhse pehle yaha hota thought nandini and tried to call him 5-6 times but he did not pick it up

Nandinis mind started connecting points to think what might have happened

Guys come on maniks life is in danger told nandini

What ??they all asked she narrated them how they got stuck with kamini and then she leaving manik and comming here leaving the kiss part

Cabir u have a tracker device?? Asked nandini

Yup k track maniks phone right now she asked him

Yup told cabir and did it with his mobile

Now mukti...before she could complete her phone started ringing

Cabir note the no. Right now while 1234567890

Noted gud track him while keep him busy

Hello?

Nandini murthy ?

Yess

I am dishank

So??

I have manik as my prisoner

Yah so?

So what so come and take him from here

Why ?

What do you mean by only a why?

I mean what is he to me that u are calling me and telling that helko i have kidnapped manik do i look like his father-mother to u??

But no buts just keep the sickning phone k

Hello i will kill him k

Yah go ahead i am not his girlfriend

But..but..

Just cut the call stupid saying this nandini cut the call

Traced??

Yup replied cabir

Where are they ??

In kharghar devrai jungle

Oo lets move guys

Yah fab-4 sat in thier jeep while nandini drove the BMW in full speed

I am coming for u manik and i will save u its my promise YOUR GUARDIAN ANGELS PROMISE.

TO BE CONTINUED...

cliff hanger na but what can i do bohot bada chapter he but will try to update soon as exams are there from 6Th july

So wish me luck

LOVE,
ANGELA
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
woah m likin it
m curios to kno how she will save him

n dat phone convo part
was crazy
i was imagining wat wud b harshads expressions

plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Best of luck for ur upcoming exam.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
nice!!
cont soon
thanks for pm
Edited by paarsa - 10 years ago

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