Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
nandini rocks
dishank shocksss
hahahh it was soo good
mein uska father hun kya
awsomeee part
continue soon girl
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Lovely update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
awesome
all the best for ur exams dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Thanks for all support and i will cont writing

CHAPTER 9

Guys we will split up to search manik and ya take this everyone told nandini throwing revolvers to everyone

God!! From where did u get these asked mukti

I always wanted one u know those JAMES
BOND types told cabir excitedly

This is not a toy so no mistakes as due to these lives can go so shoot only on those kidnappers not on manik got ya??

Yes captain replied they all replied in a Union

Come now

Mukti with me,navya with cabir,dhruv with aliya now move guys told nandini and took mukti with her and ran off

Comeon mukti we have to find them urrgh !! How does he manage to fall in problems like these told a frustrated nandini

Nandini see that told mukti pointing towards a building type thing

Come on told nandini

See those people are guarding it i am 100% sure manik is down there

Yeah u are right nandu...srry nandini told mukti

No probs call me nandu i don't mind

Thnxs

You go and try to seduce that guy there mukti while i will knock them down and we will sneek in told nandini

Aye aye captain they both heard from bushes

Whos there? told nandini pointing her gun there

Chill its uss told cabir coming out with dhruv,aliya and navya

Go for it mukti

Hey boys told mukti coming towards them seductively

Kya item he yaar told one of them

Arre zara mujhe pe bhi dhyan do came a voice and 3 Of the men were on the ground

Yesss! They told and hi-fi each other

Guys u take care that no one enters in i will call out when i will need help take care k told nandini running in

Lets do this guys for both manik and nandini

Yeah

KHARGHAR,DEVRAI JUNGLE ,SALT GODOWN

Huh! That girl doesn't even care for him what should i do now with him arrgghh!!

Leave u jerk she will never come u had destroyed my sisters life now leave her

Never she insulted me !!ME DISHANK MALHOTRA

U are a shame on malhotras k

Just shut up or i will kill u

DISHANK they both heard a voice

DON'T EVEN THINK OF TOUCHING MANIK U WANTED REVENGE FROM ME RIGHT HERE I AM SO LEAVE HIM told the voice and appeared a girl

Nandini whispered manik

So at last u are here miss murthy and aahh why would i leave him he is so my golden duck which i will use to make u dance on my fingers told dishank with an evil smirk

And i even have a surprise for u miss murthy bpys told dishank

Many men came and srounded nandini with sticks in thier hands

Now now they will beat u but u will not react to it k if u do your manik will be dead told dishank keeping and revolver on a tied maniks head

No nandini never just go away from here plss told manik

I am srry manik whispered nandini loud enough for manik to hear

START BOYS told dishank

And wack someone hit nandini and she was on the ground with some bruises

NANDINI!! screamed manik

Wack went one more

AAAHHH!! screamed nandini

Go on boys i want her to beg for her Manik told dishank

Wack went more and one more

THUD !! And nandini was on ground

NANDINI SHOUTED MANIK

Tch..tch...tch..tch..bechari tch now what to do best u surrender and beg for your Manik to me

Never..never..ever...nandini...murthy..never ..SURRENDERS screamed and threw salt lying all over the grpund into his eyes

FAB-4 screamed nandini and started shooting

At once Cabir,Navya,mukti,Dhruv and Aliya were in

Expect aliya all started shooting on the men

Nandini ran and came towards manik and untied him

Are u k?did they hurt u?beat u? U are k na? Why are u not telling anything? tell na?? Manik ?? Told nandini

But manik was just thinking how much she cares for me

MANIK !!! Screamed nandini and started shaking him vigorously

Yah..yea..yeah ..replied manik

Come on told nandini and walked towards dishank who was lying on the ground trying to wriggle away as he was shooted by nandini on his legs

Game over told nandini and shooted him dead

Come on guys lets move to a doctor you all are injured told nandini

Actually we all arw injured replied manik

Yeah k i agree i am also injured k now lets move and mr manik malhotra i need to talk to you about this dishanks kidnapping fassio
K told nandini throwing draggers at manik with her eyes

Tu toh gaya kaam se beta told cabir maniks ear

Sacchi

Yayy! Khatam dekho kitna accha update diya chalo abhi ache comments aur bohot sare likes do
Love
Angela
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Hi Angela...awesome update with very interesting storyline...
fearless nandini protecting manik.. just awesome..
and also a different story as in usual story its opposite like man protecting the gal but this is so different and thats why loving it...
keep up the good work..👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Lovely update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
wow...action filled update...
loving this action heroine nandini a lot
beautifully penned
continue as soon as possible
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Superb update
Loved it
Update the next soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Thanks for all the love and care guys though its my exams i just could not control myself from not writing so here it goes

CHAPTER 11

What the hell were u kids doings that u are hurted so badly huh?? Asked the doctor

Woh sir we fell of a cliff replied nandini

All together?? Asked the doctor suspiciously eyeing all of them

Woh sir kya hua na me gira mene iska hath pakda usne uska aur usne uska aur aise hum sab niche aa gaye told cabir to the doctor very dramatically

Chalo chodo nurse sabki maram pati kar do
Ordered the doctor

The nurse came and checked everyone as they had suffered minor injuries

Chalo tumhara bhi ho gaya abhi tum aao told the nurse pointing towards nandini

M..m..m..e..me?? asked nandini

Ha ha tum hi aur apni yeh jacket nikalo chalo jaldi karo

H..h..a...ha

Nandini removed her jacket and everyone saw gave them shock

Nandinis whole back was covered with cuts and bruises from whick very much blood was oozing out

Arre bappre tum pehle yaha aao aur baitho ordered the nurse which nandini obliged

AAA!!

winced nandini as the nurse dabbed dettol antiseptic liquid cotton all over her wounds and bandaged them

Abh yeh aaj hi sookh jainge aur fir tum kal acchi ho jaogi

Par pehle tumhe yeh tectuis ka injection lena hoga

I..in..in..i j...inje.injec..injection ?? Nahi!! kabhi nahi!! Me injection nahi lungi bilkul nahi lungi maar jaungi par injection nahi lungi told nandini and ran outside

Jao usse pakdo uska injectipn lena zaruri he!! Told the nurse

Come on guys we need to catch nandu told all and to different places to find her

Shit!! Mera phone toh room me reh gaya thought nandini

Par agar waha gayi toh injection na baba na

Are ha me doctor ka cpstume pehen leti hu fir toh woh mujhe nahi pakad painge

She rushed in a room where it was written staff only

And soon came out in a green robe with gloves shower cap and a mask to cover her face

She went and saw manik standing near the room where her phone was

NANDINIS P.O.V

shit yeh light pole yaha kya kar raha he ?? Agar issne mujhe pakad liya toh me kya karungi urrgghh!! Ha nandini u have to stay calm kuch nahi hoga woh mujhe nahi pehchaan paiga

END OF P.O.V

MANIKS P.O.V

Sheesh kaisi ladki he gunfo se nahi darti gun se nahi darti mujhese aur mere gusse se bhi nahi daryi he par ek injection ek chota se injection se darti he

Woh doctor waha kya kar rahi he usski height toh nandini jaisi he aur aankehe bhi aur ussne boots pehne he ...
boot?? BOOTS!! Nandini ne aaj boots pehne the so miss nandini aap doctor he toh me bhi aapsr kaam nahi

END OF P.O.V

Arrmm excuse me can i go inside plss asked nandini to manik

Sure doctor sure go inside replied manik and with sign language told the nurse that the doctor is nandini

Nandini came husky voice in nandinis ear

Manik turned her and made her face him plss take the injection baby plss told manik and came so close to nandini that he could feel her breath and she could his

Manik removed the mask from her face and kissed her passionately moulding his lips with her and sucking the life out of them

Manik signalled the nurse and she successfully injected nandini

He parted and saw her

How u came to know it was me ?? Asked nandini

Because of your eyes hair hand skin and cute nose

Really asked nandini

Na just kidding because of your boots told manik and started laughing

Arrgh and nandini started hitting manik with everything she could keep hands on


Srry fir chotu sa update but next time bada wala pucka promise

Precap:-nandinis twin entry pooja
Manik confused who nandini who pooja
Poojas true intentions

Chalo abhi me regular update toh nahi de paungi par jabhi update karungi pm kuch hi logo ko mil sakta he as i am not a groupbie so srry for those who i can't send pms and silent readers plss comment karo yaar your comments are very valuable to me it encourages me to bring new ideas in this story

And once again srry for chotu sa update

Love,
Angela
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Nice
Nandu twin
Twist hay interesting
Tnx for pm
Egarly waiting for update but can't wait
Plz when u post make it. Long or 2 part post plz

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