Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: angelanadar087

The winner is ashu i am 13 told u na bohot choti hu me yrs me par fir bhi sab darte he mujhse toh socho abhi meri story achi he toh bade hokar toh ...😆

My birthday comes on 21st June sun

Aur ha maha update toh ek kal milega ek part

Aur sun ko milega dusra

Happy B'dy in Advance sweety!!!
By d way my b'day is just opposite to yours!!!!
Thats 12 june!!!
N mai bi bahut choti hu!!!
M just 14!!!
N update next part fast!!!
Waiting!!! Waiting!!!
Babyee!!!
Take care!!!

Regaurds,
Garima!!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Question he mereko toh ans bhi dedo
Which villan is better
Humari pyari chudail(soha)
Or
Harshad??? Tell me fast i am waiting
As i have to start thinking for the upcoming track on my story
And there is a suprise!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: angelanadar087

Question he mereko toh ans bhi dedo
Which villan is better
Humari pyari chudail(soha)
Or
Harshad??? Tell me fast i am waiting
As i have to start thinking for the upcoming track on my story
And there is a suprise!!


i hate that chudail..!!! 😡 but i hate harshad also..!!! 😡
Harshad is better...!! 🤔

and a surprise..!!! i am waiting for next part..!! 😳
Edited by PrettyAaShu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
if possible do pm me nxt part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
awesome update..loving this nandu and navya...a lot...!!!
continue soon
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Lovely update..navni are gr8...now what is manik upto but nandini is way too smart she will escape..looking forward to read more of the story..please continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Only one ans 😭

Guys i am srry woh actually i want to know that if i should add

Humari chudail soha😡
Or
Not harshad kyuki nandu has already tackled him
Dishank malhotra (maniks wicked womaniser cpusin)

Jaldi bolo i am updating the other part just now
😆
Edited by angelanadar087 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: angelanadar087

Only one ans 😭

Guys i am srry woh actually i want to know that if i should add

Humari chudail soha😡
Or
Not harshad kyuki nandu has already tackled him
Dishank malhotra (maniks wicked womaniser cpusin)

Jaldi bolo i am updating the other part just now
😆



anyone...u think which will be good for ur storyline...!!!! 😊

Edited by aavani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
CHAPTER :6 part-2

Cabir u have to go and catch that behenji friend of nandini by that time i will try to locaye her baki ka plan after we catch that behenji
Call me k told manik and rushed of

K boss told cabir and rushed of to find navya

Sheesh!! Kya faltu plan banaya he iss street light ne aur koi nahi mila kya ? Par me bhi nandini murthy hu tum mujhe ek se blackmail karoge toh me tumhe 4 se told nandini with a smirk over her face

As she was running she saw aliya in a class room trying to search something

God!! Kaha chali gayi ye ladki huh$! Aur upar se mera makeup bhi mit raha he uff !! Nandini murthy i hate u told aliya to herself

Mujhe dhund rahi ho kya told nandini from behind

Uuu i found u now i will tell my baby(dhruv) to come and catch u told aliya happily

Arreee pehle yeh coffe toh pilo dekho kitni sweat kar rahi ho tum told nandini

Ya bohot sweat ho raha he told aliya and gulped it down

Bye aliya told nandini and walked

Hey wait baby aa ra... and aliya was on the ground sleeping

Thank god to sleeping pill ayippa told nandini to herself and dragged aliya and kept aliya in a corner and locked the doir and went
out

Yeh aliya kaha he dhruv thought to himself

Dhruv nandini told and came towards him and pressed his neck point and in a second dhruv fainted

God job nandini told nandini to herself and dragged him in the same room where aliya was there

Nandini soon rushed towards the canteen and saw cabir there biting into a sandwich

Mene expect yahi kiya tha told nandini to herself

And went towards cabir with a stick i one hand hidden neatly behind her back

Hey cabir!! Told nandini

Hey !! Told cabir

Areee tum toh bilkul queen kong ki tarah dikhti ho

Konsi kong??

Arree humare school me ek ladki he nandini murthy woh bhi tumhari tarah hi dikhti he par ma kasam bohot jor se marti he

Ooo

Ha aur obviously tum toh nandini ho hi nahi sakti kyuki woh toh khud chalke nahi ayegi na mere pass kyuki hum usse dhund rahe he na

Ooo

Me na cabir tumhe uske pas leke jati hu

Ha tumhe malum he woh kaha he ??

Ha mujhe malum he saying this

WACK!!! and cabir to was on the ground 3Went 2To gotold nandini and dragged cabir to the room and locked it

Suddenly she saw mukti and told mukti #!

Hey nands toh baki sare kaha he me bhi chali jati hu kyuki mujhe behosh nahi hona he

Hahaha sure saying this she opened the doir let mukti in and locked it

Arreee!! Chodo hume told navya as manik had caught hold of her in the bio class

Areee tumhari nandini ati hogi tumhe chudane told manik cheekily

Kya mujhe kisi na yaad kiya ?? Told nandini

Lo agayi chalo nandini abhi me tumhe principle ke huwale nahi karunga par tumhe mera dare karna padega

Acha !! Par tum akele aur hum do told nandini smirking

Aree abhi bulata hu na told manik and called cabir

Ring...ring ...he saw towards nandini how had 4Mobs in her hand

Aliya said she and pointed towards one phone
Dhruv ,cabir and mukti

So heres the deal manik leave us both and in return i will give u your friends

What where are there ?? Asked manik worriedly

Let us both go first told nandini

K told manik accepting his defeat

Nandini took navya and told her to straight go to home she went back there were manik stood went to him

And came so close to with thier lips almost touching

CHEMISTRY CLASS

Told nandini ahaint his lips and peck it and before going told u wanted this only righy??

Byt manik only blushed thinking about that

But nandini only giggled and went away

Ufff!! Khatam

Chalo abhi like karo aur comments do mujhe

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
super duper awesome
the best part
manik malhotra
blushing
cont soon

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