Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
hilarious update i was just laughng like a maniac
actually main gira usko padka usne usko padka wahh cabir ka dialouge very funnyyy
nandini doctor chotu doctor
awsomeee part
totallh loved it please update next part soo
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
superb...loving this story a lot...
cabir is such a drama king and nandini...no:1 drama queen...ha ha ha
action heroine...or running away from injection wow...
loved manan scene a lot
thanks a lot for the pm dear
continue asap
take care

all the best for ur exams...!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Very nice update again...
loved it..
twin coming for problems.. seems interesting...
continue soon dear...😊👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Wow,..twin sisters...plzzz cont it asap..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
👏 it was just awesome..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
mera promise and thanxs all for this love for me and my story

CHAPTER 12

NEXT DAY
SPACE COLLEGE CANTEEN
Itna khubsurat kaise muskura lete ho,
Itna qatil kaise sharma lete ho,
Kitni aasani se jaan le lete ho,
Kisi ne sikhaya hai.. ya bachpan se hi kamine ho? Told cabir to manik and stsrted laughing like an idiot

Shut up cabir replied manik in an irritared tone

Aur tu kabse esi faltu shayari marne laga ha? Asked mukti and twisted cabirs ears

Aree!! Lagta he lady bheem hum toh shayari karte the par tumhara kabhi dhyan nahi tha samkhe!! Told cabir

Nandini tumhe koi shayari aati he kya?? Asked cabir ??

Ha aati he kyu?? Replied nandini who was busy in making navyas braid

Bolo na fir all fab 5 requested in a union

Tumhari yaad dil se jaane nahi denge,
Tumhare jaisa dost khone bhi nahi denge,
Roz sharafat se sms kiya karo warna,
Ek kaan k neeche denge or rone bhi nahi denge. Replied nandini and pointed towards cabir as if indicating that it was for him

Hahahaha all fab 4 including NavNi waere giggling like crazy

Kya nandini huh?? Aur aapko badi hasi aa rahi he madhubala ji he?? Asked cabir sarcastically

Suna nahi kya ek kaan ke niche laga denge aur rone bhi nahi denge told navya and started giggling

Sahi he navya told mukti and alya and hi-fi her

Cabir me ek bolta hu sirf yere liye k told manik and smile evily
Hum dua karte hain Khuda se,
ki wo aap jaisa dost aur na banaye,
Ek Cartoon jaisi cheez hai humare paas,
kahin wo bhi common na ho jaye!
Told manik and all started laughing and giggling like idiots

Kya hua cabir pasand nahi aay??tujhe toh pyaar tha na shayari yo se ??All asked in a union

Ishq K Khayaal Bohat Hain..
Ishq K Charche Bohat Hain..
Sochte Hain Hum Bhi Kar Le Ishq..
Par Sunte Hain Ishq Mein Kharche Bohat Hain.. told cabir and again all were giggling

Chalo navya me zara washroom me ja rahj hu told nandini

Ha chalo replied navya

Guys we are in washroom so be here only we will be back told nandini and dragged navya with her

AFTER 10 MINUTES...

Yaar yeh donno kaha reh gaye ??asked cabir and suddenly his face lit up

Nandini aa gayi told cabir

Kaha?? asked manik and saw there she was standing

Suddenly nandini came towards them and before they could tell something cabir told

Navya kaha he??

Who navya? And who are u?? Asked nandini

Arre!! Me cabir ,woh mukti,aliya,dhruv ..

Aur woh manik told cabir

Nandini saw towards manik who saw towards her and gave a charming smile

Hi!! I am ..nandini was about to shake hands with manik when ...

POOJJAA!! came a scream from some where

Nandini !! All fab-5 stood up and saw an angry nandini standing towards the door and shooting draggers threw her eyes towards the girl

Ek minute yeh nandini aur woh bhi nandini aur dono bhi ek jaise dikti he aur bolti he huh?? Abh in mese humari nandini konsi he?? Asked cabir

Woh he the girl near them and i am pooja

Arrmm hi ..all replied

And who are u hottie asked pooja flirting with manik

Suddenly pooja was on the ground

Don't u dare come near anyone of them told nandini warning pooja

Huh!! I don't need to come near him he himself will come to me i am just so good looking u know told pooja with full on attitude

Suddenly cabir came towards her and told only for u and pointed towards pooja

Sure told pooja
Mohabbat Karli Tumse Bahut Sochne Ke Baad,
Ab Kisi Ko Dekhna Nahi Tumhe Dekhne Ke Baad,
Duniya Chhod Denge Tumhe Pane Ke Baad,
Khuda Maaf Kare Itna Jhooth Bolne Ke Baad!
Told cabir and the whole canteen was laughing like maniacs

How dare u did that to me ? U idiot told pooja angrily

Like this told nandini and came towards her with a bottle of cold drink in her hand and poured it all on pooja

Again they all were laughing

Hay!! Bechari esa nahi karte kisi ke sath told mukti and came towards pooja and put her arm around her and picked a plate full of noodles and dumped it on her and told

Essaa karte he saying she hi-fied nandini who was laughing like a mad

How could u laugh on me nandini i am your sister told pooja with fake tears

Ohh! Cut the crap pooja where did that sisyer go when she pushed a cliff and left me on a road to die after beating me up just because i denied s** to your boss who was s jerk told nandini angrily and pushed her to the ground

U know what u deserve more than this but i have humanity i am not like u k a sl** like u understood and keep that thing in your one-track mind of yours

And be away from them k told nandini and walked past her

Fab 5 And navya to followed her but cabir staued and bend down and said

Ek shayari bolu kya ??

Just get losst !!! Told pooja angrily

And cabir just ran away giggling

U and your friends all of them except will pay for what u did nandini especially u manik i will kill u to take my revenge on nandini that will be enough to make her kill herself in regret of not being able to save manik thought pooja to herself and smiled wickedly

Hashh!! Over see such a big chapter i gave its big na ?? Plss like and comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Srry but my limit for posts has finished dur to which i can't pm anybody srry i am really very srryy
Love,
Angela
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Such awesome update...
all the shayaris were amazing and hilarious...
good work...👏👏😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
sab manik ke piche pade hein
hahhahaha
all shayeris were gud
funny
awsomeee update

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