MaNan - Shadows Of Darkness Finale update on page 29

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I was not happy the way cvs handled the post kidnapping dealings...So here's my take on MaNan struggles to deal with it..Hope you will like this one...

Shadows of Darkness...Part 1...


It was late in the night, everything was quite. It seemed like the entire world had gone into a deep silence, a silence which was deafening, a silence which needed to be broken and a silence which was louder than any scream. It was killing, has the storm settled or this is the storm before one more storm? Has the worst passed or is it coming? How do we got in here ? How do we get out of this ? Why has life sudden dark turn ? Will these shadows of darkness ever leave us ? Manik sat on the couch thinking all this, the more he thought the more he felt drowned in them..


Suddenly he felt choked by all these thoughts, he couldn't breath. He got up and went out to get some air. As he stepped out a cool breeze welcomed him. He sat under a tree recollecting the events of the evening. How his beautiful dream turned in to his worse nightmare. He closed his eyes hoping when he would open them life would go back to what is was; Nandini lying in his arms, them sharing the joys of life, dreaming and hoping for a future that was gonna be beautiful. His mind played the memories of the night the rain, the candles, the fireflies all blessing their love. How he announced his love to her, how she ran into his arms and sealing the love with a kiss, them laying in each other's arms weaving beautiful dreams of a life of together. All these brought a smile on his face and then suddenly the images of him running madly all around shouting Nandini's name, feeling lost, his frantic search for her being near and yet far and finally finding her at Pandit's house. Images of a shocked, crying distraught and hurt Nandini flashed across. The way she sighed "Manik" when she saw him, tears started to roll from his eyes. He wanted to wake up from this nightmare.


Manik opened eyes only to find Cabir standing in front of him. Manik "Tell me its all a dream and everything is just as normal as it was when we left the college." Cabir "Unfortunately Manik it not and this needs to be lived and survived by you and Nandini together." Manik "How did it all change in a second, how could I let me star go into a black hole, how just how did this all happen?" Cabir "Manik it was not your fault don't blame yourself. Now you need to focus on teaching Pandit and getting Nandini back to normal."


Manik "Yes I have to be strong, I have to be strong for her and me and for us. Pandit will be taught a lesson that he won't be able to forget and I will get Nandini back to normal, i will get her smile back." Manik was determined, Cabir smiled and said "Let's go you need some sleep." They both walked in. Manik slowly opened the door of the bedroom to find a sleeping Nandini. He sighed a relief. He went and sat beside her looking at her beautiful face. The calm that was trademark of Nandini Murthy was missing. He saw all of her wounds the cut on her ear, the rope marks on her wrists and ankles. he caressed them as if he wanted to take all that pain away from her. He kissed her wounds very gently careful enough not to wake her up. She had gone to sleep with great difficulty, it seemed her eyes and she didn't feel anything. It was blank all around her, darkness was taking over her. Manik "I will not let you slip into this darkness Nandini, we will get your smile back, get us back.." He wanted to sit next to her and love her all night but he was human after all. His body was asking for rest, his mind was craving for few hours of calm and quite before the battles in the morning began. He slowly laid next to her still holding her hand and quickly slipped into a deep sleep. Finally of them the dark night seemed to be coming to an end..Was it or was there more to this night? Where shadows of darkness were looming large and threatening to engulf everything that came in its way.

Unfortunately for Manik and Nandini this seemed like a never ending night. Just as Manik went into deep room her sleep he suddenly felt a sharp pinch on his hands. He woke up in an instance only to see Nandini clutching his hands with all her power. She was mumbling his name "Manik..Manik.." Sweat was dripping from her entire body. She was reliving the entire nightmare in her dreams.. Manik tried to wake her up, he cupped her face with one hand as she won't let of his hand "Nandini, nandini wake up..You are at home right near me." Manik tried to assure her..Suddenly everyone in the house woke up loud screams of Nandini calling out "Manik..Manik.." They all rand to her room only to find her holding Manik in tight grip and all terrified. Manik tried to calm her down "Nandini relax I'm here right next to you, see you are safe in your house." Chachi came close and tried to console her "Nandu come here beta!" But she just won't let go of Manik. "Don't leave me" she said in a shaky terrified voice.

Every eye was teary, Nandini Murthy the girl who picked up everyone's battles, fought for them was all lost and broken. She was a picture of a distraught girl whose soul was robbed of its innocence, something died in there. They all made a silent vow to fight this battle for her. They looked at Manik and assured him and left. Manik was holding Nandini and praying for this long audacious night to end...

End of Part 1...

Will be back soon.. Lemme know your views...

Ciao..Love..



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Posted: 10 years ago
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great start
please update soon
please do continue
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wow wat an start
very nicely written
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Okay that was really well penned down ..

The grief the Hurt everything vert well depicted ...

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Nice start
Rather very interesting and intense start...

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Very well written...
Nyc start...
Good luck princess..😉
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Recap:


Every eye was teary, Nandini Murthy the girl who picked up everyone's battles, fought for them was all lost and broken. She was a picture of a distraught girl whose soul was robbed of its innocence, something died in there. They all made a silent vow to fight this battle for her. They looked at Manik and assured him and left. Manik was holding Nandini and praying for this long audacious night to end...

Shadows of Darkness Part 2..The night continues...

Manik "Nandini main yahin hoon. Chalo so jaao. I am not going anywhere." Nandini looked to him with her big blank eyes and asked "Where were you Manik? Why couldn't you hear me?" Manik had nothing to say..He couldn't sense her, couldn't find her before she was broken, tortured and traumatized. She spoke in hours and her words pierced his heart like a dagger. He looked up to her and hugged her tightly and started crying.. Those tears told the story of his love for her, his failure to protect her and his determination to get her out of this darkness. He won't give up on her no matter how hard all of it is cause she wouldn't have given up on him, on them. She never did now its his turn. He needed to shine for his star at her darkest hour.


Manik put her head on his lap and started caressing her hair trying to put her to sleep. She said "Manik! promise me you won't leave me again." Manik "Nandini! I promise I won't leave you again. We will walk this darkness together hand in hand and find light." She held his hand tightly and fell asleep. Manik kept looking at hours and slowly slipped into sleep. This time day which started as the best day of their life and ended in the worst etting nightmare was finally getting over..The morning will be a new beginning for them. There will be tough times, difficult days but they will walk this bridge together hand in hand. be each other's support, be there to hold one another when they will fall, pick up and fight back. They are meant to be together no matter how many challenges life throws at them they are in this together always and forever.

Chachi slowly opened the door in the morning at 5 am to find them sleeping peacefully in each other's arms. Suddenly she felt someone was standing behind her, she turned back to find Cabir who also came in to check at them. Cabir "They have each other, they will be fine you don't worry." Chachi " i know they are the best thing to happen to each other. Woh dono ek doosre ko sambhal lenge."

It was 7 in the morning when Manik woke up he didn't find Nandini anywhere he started looking for her frantically only to find her washing last night's clothes. Manik "Nandini what are you doing? You don't have to do this now." Nandini "Manik I have to do it. Don't you see it's spoiled." Manik "Nandini relax it's just a dress, we can get a new one." Nandini looked at him "Manik its just not a dress, will you replace me too as I am not the same huh" and she walked out. Manik stood there all shocked trying to come to terms with what just happened. This was not his Nandini, she can't break like this, she can't be this bitter. No she can never be. What happened there with her last night, what did that Pandit do to her, why is she so scarred? He needed to get answer to these questions before she reaches her point of breakdown, she can't be all strong and pretend all ok..No she has to cry and let it all out, she has to be weak at this moment cause being weak and letting it all out is the only way she's going to be normal and strong..

He ran behind her only to find her looking blankly at the fan while she was lying on the bed. He sat down at her feet and put his hands slowly at her legs and Nandini was all baffled and got up. She curled up in a corner with a scary look on her face and fear in her eyes. Manik was shocked "Nandini its me Manik, main hoon kya ho gaya tumhe.." and he opened his arms, Nandini looked at him for few moments before rushing into his arms. Manik "Nandini what happened there? Did that Pandit do something?" As soon as Manik asked these she started reacting very strangely, she got all agitated and put her hands on her ears closing them up, closed her eyes tightly and said "Don't don't please don't." Manik knew there was something terribly wrong with and he had to find out. He said "Okay fine, we won't talk about it, now just calm down." Nandini looked at him with fiery eyes and said "I have to teach him a lesson." Manik "Yes we will but now one step at a time Nandini, you need to calm down right now."

It was almost 10 am when they all reached the police station. Pandit was already there in custody with his lawyer, as soon as Nandini saw him she got all scared again all the images from last night started flashing in front of her, she held Manik tightly and hid behind him. Manik looked at her all scared and terrified and he looked at Pandit wearing an evil smile. Manik pulled Nandini forward and wrapped his arms around her tightly conveying that this time he ain't gonna let him her hurt and as long as he is there she is safe.

It was time for the trial to begin and everyone was waiting for Riddhima, but she never turned up. they waited long enough finally Manik got a video message saying that she is going back and doesn't want any involvement in the case and she is going back to Ranchi. All are shocked at this back stabbing of hers, Manik looked at Pandit who gave him an evil wink. Manik and Nandini was disheartened especially Nandini she seemed to be loosing all hope. Manik held her and said "this is not the end Nandini, there is along battle ahead, we will fight back and get him to his rightful place but I want you to be strong and brave. I want you to keep hope like you always do." Nandini looked at him and let out a faint smile. Though there was enough evidence to nail TK for Nandini's kidnapping but that will not ensure he will pay for his past sins. Nevertheless it all got out to the media and his name was already maligned. His reputation which was so dear to him, which he used to trap innocent girls was all gone for a toss.

As soon as Manik Nandini and their friends came out after lodging a formal FIR against Pandit, the media personnel surrounded them and started asking questions like "What was your experience when you were kidnapped?" Asked one reporter and another one popped another question "how did you feel now that you are free?" "How long you were kidnapped, would you like to share the details of events that happened?" "Did you have to undergo any kind of physical assault?" "Did he assaulted you ****ually too, where all did he touch, did he molest you?" Nandini got all scared and Manik was very very angry he was about to beat up those reporters when he saw a scared Nandini running away. He shouted "Nandini wait" and started running behind her. Everyone else followed Manik to stop Nandini.



End of Part 2

Be back soon..lemme know your views..

Ciao..Love..

Sweta

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That was so good dear
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nice update
very nicely written
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Beautifully penned down
Loving it

May be she breaks down now in front of manik

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