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baani9

@baani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#851

Beautiful update
U penned it beautifully the pain the longing for eachother when they are away.
Liked the song apt to the situation.
Continue soon

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kirankusum

@kirankusum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#852

Its was very nice
How do you.manage to.write alwys so good

The update was nice.
And.being far away from our.loved ones is a difficult task but at some time.we have.to.do.it ...

So lovely update
Thanks for the pm
Do pm me next time ...

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rupmanan1

@rupmanan1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#853

hii this is my first comment on ur ff
read all the parts in one go...
its amazing
i realy like ur work .
keep going.. 😊

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Himanshi Shah

@himanshishah15

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#854

Purely a bliss!!!!
Each & every part left me speechless.
Wonderful updates..
No combination of 26 alphabets can pour out what i feel for your story ..
Its just so adorable..
I am purely in luv with it..
I can actually see the efforts you put in penning down these parts.
They are so lovely & enticing.
Luved your story and Ofcourse your songs...
They completely compliment the situation.
Keep writing..
You are so beautiful at it...
Lots of love...
Update sooon...

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#855

This is wonderful... loved how they dealt with being apart, so sweet and then his trick and her reaction... very , very cute... I am really loving how adorable they are... terrific job... thnx for such a sweet story...