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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
ohh its too small update.. want more...
please update fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
PART 21 (C)
Next morning nandani is jogging in park..
(park is just hardly 2 minutes away from manik house)
cabir is standing in his balcony he is talking with
dhruv.. when he notice nandani jogging in park..
holly crap dhruv luk who is there. cabir smirked..
dhruv looks around.. where he asked..
cabir -abe dhakkan there in park.. luk there
dhruv saw a girl is jogging in park.. her back is visible
to him..
dhruv- yr koi ladki lgti hai..
cabir - ha ha ha very funny.. mujhe to pta he ni tha wo
ladki hai..
he slaps on his head.. abe gadhe dhyan say dekh..
dhruv- dekh ra hu tu maar to mat..
cabir- ha tu dekh pele..
dhruv tried to see her face..
he shouts ohh teri yeh to woi hai..
cabir- chal usko milkr ate hai..
dhruv- ar u mad.. manik ko pta chl gya na wo chodega
ni tujhe or mujhe..
cabir- bad mai dekh lenge pele tu chl to sahi..
dhruv- akele ni jauga tere sath.. sbke sath jauga.. iss
ladki ka koi bhrosa ni manik pr cold coffee dali thi.. wo
kuch ni kr paya fr hum kya krlenge..
cabir- point hai tere baat mai..
he drag everyone with him too park..
nandani was busy in jogging.. she is still angry on
manik..
she didn't realise manik gang is also there nd watching
her
nandani notice sumone is luking at her.. she turn
around and saw them al standing near a tree.. she
notice cricket bat lying on floor.. as,sumtym back few
kids were playing cricket there they left there bat there..
she took bat in her hands nd start walking toward
them.. now fab 5 nd navya saw nandani is cuming near
them with a bat in her hands.. they were panicked nd
thinking what to do.. how to save there lyf from this
lioness..
nandani - with one hand she grabs cabir collar.. she is
literally showing bat to them.lyk any moment she is
going to beat them.. al..
nandani- hey u.. kaun ho tum sb or yaha kya kr re ho..
nd why ar u staring mee
cabir is nt listening to what she is asking.. he was
shouting mummy mummy
nandani- slaps him on his face (PATAAKK)
mukti who never get scared from anyone get scared
from nandani seeing her in that avtaar..
she stammer..
mukti- wo wo
nandani- kya wo wo jaldi bolo..
mukti - wo
navya interrupts.
navya- wo mukti keah ri hai we ar manik's friends
nandani-( leaves cabir collar) what??
cabir- silently thanks to god from saving his lyf
cabir- yes
nandani- after listening manik name.. super angry
nandani- to mai kya karu.. bhangra karu tum manik k
dost ho..
cabir pull dhruv in front of him he hide himself behind
dhruv back..
cabir-wo we want to talk to u
nandani- kya baat krni hai she shouts
alia- manik
nandani - tumko agar us SADOO ne bheja hai to bol do
use mujhe usse baat ni krni..
cabir who is hiding behind dhruv now cum infront of her
cabir nhi usne nhi bheja.. hum khud aye hai they al said
in union..
to be continued...

(hope this one is nt a chotu sa update :P)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: annachi

ohh its too small update.. want more...
please update fast



updated dear :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: bhavanims

Nice update continue soon



thanku dear :)
updated :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
read all parts in one gooo... amazing
awesome ... superb... beautifully written...
thank you for the wonderful story...⭐️
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">read all parts in one gooo... amazing
awesome ... superb... beautifully written...
thank you for the wonderful story...</font>⭐️
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">continue soon...</font>



thanku so much.. :*
u guys appreciates my work lyk my story what else I want..
thanku :)

Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Super update they all r scared of Nandini loved it continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
PART 21 (D)

NANDANI- what?
all together- yes
nandani- but why
dhruv- we told u na we want to talk to u..
nandani- checks her watch..u guys have only 10 minutes .. jo bolna hai jaldi bolo..
cabir- lalita pawar tum (:P)
nandani - what
cabir- stammer wo wo I mean nandani..
nandani- again checks her watch
2 minutes over now u guys have only 7 minutes left..
navya- AREY tum bolne dogi tb to hum kuch bolege then she realized what she said navya in mind now this lady gabbar will kick al of us..
but instead of it nandani in soft voice - ok ab bolo..
dhruv- pele wo bat usko thoda syd karo..
nandani- ok or kuch
mukti nhi nhi bs
nandani to ab bolo..
alia - wo tum kl humare ghr pr kya kr ri thi..
dhruv- or tum ro kyun rhi thi..
nandani - none of ur buisness.. she is annoyed agar kuch imp baat krni hai to karo warna I'm going..
cabir -(in mind) yr beta cabir aise to tujhe kuch pta ni chalega.. ki in dono ka kya,scene hai..
he got an idea..
cabir- ahh ahh. he held his tummy
nandani- drops bat.. nd hold him
nandani- hey what happen..
cabir-bhot pain ho ra hai..
nandani- look at him than at his friends who was standing there clueless nd thinking what is he upto
nandani- bde beshram ho tum log yaha tum log itni pain mai hai or tum log uski shakl dekh re ho..
al still staring at him - in union - no nothing lyk that..
nandani- ok isko hospital leke Jana padega
cabir- after hearing hospital name - shouts no.. mujhe nhi jana.. then he notice nandani is staring him with question full eyes..
cabir- act lyk he is in pain - I mean mere kidneys mai fault hai(in mind kidney kuch or he bol deta) mere medicines ghar pr hai.. mujhe ghr le chalo medicine khauga theek ho jauga (:P)
nandani- recalls manik words.. go from here..
nandani speaks in low voice.. no I can't go there..
cabir thought he can't let his plan.flop
he again act aah aah nandani bhot pain hora hai he hold her hand
nandani- panicked theek hai theek hai mai ari hu
cabir - sighed.. he is feeling proud on himself :P lyk today he won some trophy

stay tunned :D
and do cmnts hwz it :P
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PART 21 (e)
nandani took cabir to malhotra mansion with the help of
dhruv.. while others just follow them..
nandani ask navya where is his room
navya- wo stairs k syd wala
nandani- dhruv help plz..
nd mukti alia plz,kuch fruits le ana sath mai,pani.. plz
they both nod there head in yes..
she took cabir to his room with the help of dhruv..
navya just followed them.
manik was sleeping so he doesn't knw what is
happening,in his house
..
she put cabir on bed nd ask navya to bring his
medicines..
navya - medicines kaha say lau ab mai..
she luk at nandani mai kitchen say lati hu.. nd she went
to kitchen
nandani to dhruv
tum Jake dekho alia mukti kaha reh gye
then she luk at cabir
nandani- cabir u knw mere uncle doc hai..
cabir- acha wow
nandani- smiles at him to tumko yeah drama krne ki koi
jaroort Nhi hai.. bcz I knw ur al ok
cabir-who was feeling proud on himself for fooling
nandani.. luk at her with blank expressions
. what?
nandani- laughs seeing his condition..
nandani - what what she again laughs
cabir- tumko kaise pta chla..
nandani jb tumne bola tumko kidney mai prob hai tbhi
cabir- but kaise
nandani- I told u mere uncle doc hai
nd moreover u guys where so much busy in ur drama
that u don't realise I already knw ur name
then she luk back at door.. whole gang wAs present
there with shocked expressions..
cabir- iska mtlb Maine khud ka ullu bnwa liya..
nandani,laughs yes
cabir- but how u knw ar names
nandani- remember yesterday I was at here at ur
home.. manik told mee abt u al.. nd I knw navya is ur
girlfriend she said dis with sad face nd luk at navya
who was busy in blushing.. nandani smiles at her..
al in union,-,ohh, then they start laughing
nandani-,yes isliye,i,know he is doing drama..
cabir,- bevkoof manik
nandani- give him faint smile
al together friends-
nandani- yes
al pull,her in hug
but cabir,notice she is sad
to be continued
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PART-21 (F)
then al went to living area..
they were sitting on sofa nd were chatting.. with each
other..
but nandani was luking here there.. lyk she was
searching,for sumthing..
cabir sensed restlessness in her eyes..
he call her nandani cum with mee.. I want to talk to u
something imp..
nandani get up from his seat.. they went to kitchen
cabir- hey nandani.. what happen why ar u sad
nandani- no I'm not sad..
cabir- common don't hide we ar friends
nandani- nothing baba
cabir- if ur luking for manik he is sleeping
nandani bcm quiet.. she looks down on floor
cabir- notice her facial expression
cabir- tum dono ka kl fr jhgdra hua na
nandani- yeah wo bhi bcz of that monster manik
cabir laughs
then he bcm serious
u knw nandani manik waisa,nhi hai jaisa show krta hai..
nandani- what do u mean
cabir- I mean to say he is lyk coconut hard from inside
soft from inside.. he care for ppl.. but never show to
them.. he is scared of loosing pplz.. whom he care luv..
cabir luks at nandani who was luking at him curiously..
lyk he is giving sum notes of her fav chap.
then he told her abt manik disturb childhood.. his
parents separation.. how he never get love from his
parents.. he carved for there love.. his sister whom he
luv alot miss her alot. cabir told her everything abt
manik.. he luk at nandani.. who has tears in her eyes..
cabir- nandani don't tell manik Maine tumko ye sb
btaya,..uske samne kbhi zikr bhi mat karna.. he may
don't lyk it..
nandani- hmms bdw cabir manik ki sister ka nam kya
hai
before cabir tell her manik sister name
navya calls them
and they went outside..
mukti- was, making fun of alia.. nd dhruv nd navya was
laughing
then nandani got a call
she checks her mobile screen it was incoming call from
her home she excused herself nd pick up call
it was her Chachi call.. who was calling her home..
nandani - I'm cumimg chachi
then she went from there
precap- manik , fab5 nd navya at nandani home for
dinner
(hey guys pm mee sum unique ideas for manan
scenes :P)
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago

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