Destiny will do its work note on pg 26(pls read) - Page 4

yaar u v became mystry queen..
So much suspence..
Feeling excited..
Want to knw more with our detective Manik..
Continue soon..

Originally posted by: Aresha_uchiha

Awsuum cont soon!!!

n more whys r arising why!!! hehehe

Most of all i think dat manik's boss is nandu's dad!!

hope my guess is correct!!

which means luks lyk destiny iz d chief cupid of manan story!! LOL

destiny iz being the actual cupid here in d absence of gr8 cupid Cabir Devil Dhiwan!! heheh LOL

Lov this updt!!

actually ur a mystery writer rite!!

bt dont leave in dis cliff hanger 4 long!!

Lov

Aresha

Again so many mysteries...

mystery mystery mystery
awesome update cont soon n thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: adita

yaar u v became mystry queen..
So much suspence..
Feeling excited..
Want to knw more with our detective Manik..
Continue soon..

Awesome good excellent superb fully entertainer ..

Love this so far... I sense a connection between Manik's boss and Nandhu... but I will wait, looking forward to more MANAN time...😊

Originally posted by: acaia

detective manik ummm... ye detective story lag rhi hai kya?

want to know more...even I want to write more but lack of time yaar...so many tests of mine.

so u have to wait

Waiting..though i knw its going to be updated. If its nt detective manik then no problem..i m writing one detective story on manan..but it will b detective nandu..

Originally posted by: adita

Waiting..though i knw its going to be updated. If its nt detective manik then no problem..i m writing one detective story on manan..but it will b detective nandu..

Hi everyone.
Thanks for all the sweet comments. You all encourages me with your comments and likes. So for u guys I thought of introducing nandini's side story but only for sometime. So enjoy...

Ch-3


"Where is that chit? Aunty have u seen that? Please come here, search with me. It's important for me. Aunty!!!" I had already checked here, maybe on that table.
"No, not here too, if not here then where it is?" maybe there...no how it can be there..aargghhh...It's important for Me it is part of my belief in that thing... .
"Oh my god! What is all this NAndini? Messed up room! Haan? What are u finding? Tell me I will find u that. But u come sit here, you have to take rest otherwise you know na I will make u drink that tasteless soup thrice a day."
Chi!!!! That tasteless no... Soup with weird taste I don't want that.
"No...I m not gonna drink that again...pls...see am sitting here and will rest till the time u wanted ok."
"Ok.. hahahha"
"Why are you laughing Aunty? Is it fair? No na."
"Ok I will not. Now tell me what you want?"
"Aunty here was a colourful chit, have u seen that?"
"No beta, maybe himansh had taken that. Himansh!!! Come here."
Himansh...maybe but...
"But I hadn't seen him since morning so how?"
"He had come to your room when you were sleeping dear."
"Yes mom, say want to ask something? And di your chit is here with me wo man...nahi wo mere paas galti se agaya tha sorry"
"Awww... don't need to say sorry come here di want to kiss you "They care for me a lot god pls hear all their wishes waise bhi They are the only ones who are mine.
"No..m a big boy now so no kiss ok."
Big boy...
"Hahahaha...really big boy ok I will not happy now?"
"Himansh now come we have to go home now."
"Ok mom lets go. Mom you know what Manik bhaiyya had told me yesterday that he was going on tour for three days."

Himansh said to aunty when going towards the door.
"Have u become friends with him?"
"Yes sort of...mom what if we will invite him on dinner when he will come back?"
Dinner with him? Out of question.
"U are really grown up now baby and it's a nice idea so invite him whenever he will come home ok"
"Ok"

I was seeing them leaving when aunty turned n said that she was happy to see me coming back to my original state.

Normal condition... How can I be? It is hard to fix the broken things. Nandini herself don't remember how she used to be like?
But sill faking my happiness bcoz I don't want to trouble her anymore. She is doing so much for me.

Manik's return( I mean after 3 days)

"Aunty I don't want to go downstairs pls"
"Are u planning to live in this room for whole your life?"
"Aunty pls..."
"Ok... but on one condition that you will have to come for dinner downstairs tomorrow with us n Manik ok"
Manik?????? No way, not at all.
"He is a nice person Nandini, believe me. He saved your life without knowing you and this is the quality of selfless person."
What Aunty was trying to explain me is right so why was I being so reluctant?
"Thik hai Aunty.I accept your condition"
Ab aunty ko kaise kahu ki instead of saying thanks what I had done to him?

Should I say sorry to him? No who says sorry to idiot.
"Nandini I have to go somewhere now? But listen pls go to nearby park so you will feel nice.pls do it for me ok. Bye"
"Hmmm...bye"
So many pls...now how can I say no? Aunty knew me this well..

At Park

Why I m here? To see the happy lives of other people? To again absorbing those fake memories of my childhood? To again...why the hell m crying for that person?

My all thoughts were disturbed by the most famous idiot.

.
"Hey! Why are you crying?"He said while wiping my tears.
"Is it a matter of your concern? Nahi na then why all this?"I said while pointing towards his hand.
"Why are you so rude to me?"
"Is it the answer of my question?"
"Is it the answer of mine?"
"You want to fight with me? Come, we will fight but listen isn't it shameful to loose infront of so many people especially children?"
Is he out of his mind? Idiot
"Ya it is but for you as u will lose."
"Ohhho...so you are ready to fight?"
"No... And what are you doing here? I mean what about your tour?"
"Wo its over n when I was going to my house I saw you here so..."
"So you came here to irritate me."
Hadd ho gayi
"So tum irritate bhi hoti ho? I thought u just know how to be depressed all the time"
Why he is blabbering so much? I m not interested in listening. And yes I have to say sorry to this idiot too wow!! Nandini just say sorry n leave from here as soon as possible.
"Listen m not interested in talking. N yes sorry for that cushion thing"
Why he is looking at me and why he is so surprised?
"That is something new...sorry haan? But you know what I am ready to accept your apology but on one condition."
Unbelievable!!!!!
"And what was that?"
"Simple...bas u have to go on walk with me every morning for 30 days"
It means I have to bear him for 30 big days ... out of question.
"No"
"Yes"
"No"
"You have to"
Yes u have to for aunty.
"Ok"
"Yes! Yes! Yeah!"
Why he is jumping like rabbit? Like he has just completed his secret mission.
"Why are you so excited idiot?"
"Idiot??? Am I like idiot?"
"Yes... idiot."
"By the way you can call me that if that brings the smile on your face like this."
I m smiling because of him? Well if someone will do things like this than this is obvious.
"Bye idiot."
"Bye and don't forget to come here at 6 am ok tomorrow."
"Hmmm..."

I left from there all smiling after so long... .


Manik's POV

What have you just said?

You will get up at 6 am really!!!. She was right you are idiot Manik..

Suddenly he saw Himansh playing there so he called for him.

"Himansh!! Come here."

"Bhaiyya aap kab aagaye? "

"Just abhi umm.. about an hour before. Himansh had you completed what I told you to do?"

"Yes bhaiyya, maine di ko chit de di. Don't worry, I always complete my all work."

"accha have u completed your homework?"

"Oh shit! Mom will scold me now... Thank you bhaiyya. bye"

He ran towards his house leaving manik. So he too leaves from there to get freshen up.

Love you all

Waise I have made century with this post.

Buddy me for pms please so it will be easier for me ok.

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