Destiny will do its work note on pg 26(pls read)

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AAVANI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

awesome loved it
slowly she will love her life with the help of manik...
u penned it so beautifully
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm

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Garima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Awsm part!!!
Loved it!!!
Continue Soon!!!
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Kaju.acacia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: aavani
awesome loved it
slowly she will love her life with the help of manik...
u penned it so beautifully
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm

thanks for the comment

n yes she'll love her life soon

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HGArtistwriter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Interesting

Do update nxt part soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

hehe!!

it was an awsumm 1 !!

i lov it thank u !!!

wow manik's here 2 trying 2 make his nandu smie!!!

n why 30 days??

So many whys yet again!!!

Love u my suspense writer

Aresha

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Kaju.acacia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: KewlaniGarima
Awsm part!!!
Loved it!!!
Continue Soon!!!
Ty for the PM!!!

glad u like it

thanku

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Kaju.acacia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Aresha_uchiha
hehe!!
it was an awsumm 1 !!
i lov it thank u !!!
wow manik's here 2 trying 2 make his nandu smie!!!
n why 30 days??
So many whys yet again!!!
Love u my suspense writer
Aresha

love u too

n thanks alot for liking it

n 30 days bcoz according to his condition he has 30 days to be with her on every morning

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Kaju.acacia

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Hi guyz. M here with new update woh bhi itni jaldi. M so so happy..have many reasons for this but one them I want to share with you is that I have got 9.8 cgpa (my class 10 result)
But can't give u treat so giving u all this chapter especially to u adita thank u so much.Once again thank u to all the readers. Enjoy reading this too n do tell me howz it.

CH-5 a

EVERY NEW DAY BRINGS NEW HOPE IN LIFE NEW RAYS THAT ERASES THE DARKNESS.BUT WHAT ABOUT THOSE WHOSE LIFE IS IN DARKNESS FOR THEM THERE IS NO HOPE FOR THEM IT IS COMPLETE HELL TO WAKE UP EVERYDAY TO SEE THE DARKNESS IN THEIR LIVES ALL OVER ONCE AGAIN.

"Hey m sorry for all that yesterday thing."
"Its ok" whispered. It is clear that she is not ok at all.
"So friends?"
"Hmmm... "
"Friends?"
"I don't have any friend." How this can be possible at all?
"like seriously? But I can be na?" I asked her nervously bcoz if she rejected to be friends then it will be more harder for me to keep her happy.
"Yes from now on friends. And pls don't be shocked. U know when situation changed the person so much that he is not able to open infront of anyone so in that case no one can become the friend of that person."
"But u r opening in front of me don't u? "
She started staring here and there. Like she too is confused that why is it so?
"Yesss for the first time m expressing my emotions to anyone except aunty...but pls don't ask for more."
"M happy that atleast you are talking to me. But yes you can share anything with me bcoz I can understand this pain. "
"No u can't bcoz there is lot more than this. "
Lot of mysteries.
"And even aunty don't know about this hai na?"
"Pls don't talk about all this now I want to forget all that for sometime pls..."
"Nandini"
"Hmmm..."
"Nothing. Ok so as we r frnds now so we should know each other so tell me about your hobbies."
"My hobbies ...don't have any now but when I was in school I used to sing n had got so many prizes..mostly 1st prize."
"Really? So atleast we have one thing in common...as I love singing too n I sing whenever I feel tired or emotional. It soothes me to great extent. But why don't u sing now?"
"Bcoz...bcoz...My parents they...they used to fight alot Manik..all those things hurted me to this extent that I lose my all happiness...it was..." She stammered bcoz of the tears that had started to built up in her eyes.
"Nandini...just look into my eyes..."she looked into my eyes I started again bcoz I need to assure her "see Nandini you have to forget all that n to forget all that u need to first tell all the secrets u have hidden inside you to someone u trust the most n believe me it will help." She seemed to be convinced for a second but again she was all confused. I wiped those tears n rather then asking more I simply changed the topic.
"Sooo Nandini what about if we sing together today?"
"Manik but its been years now when I last sung for a competition...seriously I don't know if I can..."
"Yes you can believe me you can..."
"Okay but not today pls will sing some other time and now its time for me to go as Himansh must be waiting for me."
"Bye will see you again then."
She smiled for the second time infront of me. It gave me great relief.
"Manik thanks."
"Thanks for what????"
"Thanks for lightening my mood I m feeling a bit happy now."
Still a bit. Need to erase that bit from the sentence.
"No need to say thanks as friends are for these things only... but seriously Nandini I want you to break all those walls that you have made around yourself...I know it is difficult but not impossible. Think about this."
"Manik u just can't forget all things on just one morning. Bye" saying this she left from there.

But I want u to forget because I know how difficult, how painful it is to accept that now there is no one to take care of u, no one to love you, no one to make you happy. Now u have to take care of yourself have to love yourself n have to make urself happy.

NANDINI STILL HADN'T TOLD ANYONE ABOUT HER LIFE COMPLETELY TO EVEN HER FIRST FRIEND BCOZ IT IS NOT EASY FOR ANYONE TO TRUST A PERSON COMPLETELY AND TO BE ABLE TO OPEN COMPLETELY IN JUST TWO DAYS...FRIENDSHIP NEEDS TO BE NOURISHED FIRST. ISN'T IT?

"So sir is everything alright?"
I asked my boss even when I already knew that he wasn't alright at all.
"You already know then why r u asking?" He knew me too.
"Sir pls don't feel guilty bcoz now u can't just changed anything" we both were in his cabin during lunch break. This is all like daily routine for both of us. During whole break I just used to make him happy in which I succeeded very less.
"Sir just try more harder this time maybe u'll get to know her address this time."
"What if I ll get that, there is no use of it bcoz I know she hates me I was the reason for all er sufferings. But I miss her u know na how much?"
"Her name, what is her name sir?"
To interrupt us my phone ringed. I checked n it was call from unknown number so I declined that.
"Her name is..."my phone again ringed but i again declined the call.
"So sir u were telling me..."
To my frustration my phone ringed again.
So this time I accepted the call n literally shouted on the caller.
"Who the hell is this? If someone is declining again n again then it means he is busy na." N I heard someone weeping on the other side of the phone n that instant I realized what I had done.
"Ma...ma...nik...manik sorry I don't know that u were busy m sorry. I will call u later"
"Sorry sorry please don't cry yaar m sorry bas I don't have any idea that it must be you. Sorry"
But she just hanged up without replying to me. I was cursing myself for making her cry once again. A tear escaped from my eyes too. I turned to see my boss who was busy himself talking to someone on phone. After his conversations on phone I asked for permission to leave now only as I need to go to Nandini..she needs me and the great thing was that he did not asked me any why?

DESTINY HAD MADE HIM THE ONLY CONNECTION BETWEEN THESE TWO PEOPLE. BUT WHY ONLY HIM?

So guys this is what I wrote yesterday night for all my readers.
N now many secrets are going to be revealed soon but not all. So stay tuned and wait for next one .
Waiting for more n more comments n likes.
Buddy me for pms
Bye

Edited by acaia - 10 years ago