Drabbles (#7 Bets) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Stella324

beautiful !👏

actually being a girl I have a secret crush on Nandu !! She is that much adorable !! Yes, she is! 😆

This is really what others feel when this adorable child woman passes by along with her man of her life . I really love this one to the core ! Thank you! Glad you liked it! :D

Lovely !!

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Beautiful

Loved it

Keep smiling

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Wow...I think this is the best one yet...loved the 3rd person POV and the observations are very sweet and realistic...completely makes sense how someone would fall for her, and your descriptions about her guy and BFF are amazing...seriously great, yet again...already excited for your next one.😊

Originally posted by: kaumudisss

all the three of them r so good but the third is just awesome

keep writing more dear 😊😊😊

Originally posted by: drnidsur

i just read all the three drabbles and have absolutely no words to say on how beautiful all the three were

each wriiten in a completely different way , esp the last one

ie seeing their relationship from another person's pov ...mindblowing

really your words and the way you express them, indeed they do not trangress even one bit of your feeling or the exact things in your minds .

osum ...

do keep writing many such ones whenever possible . I will! :)

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Riddhiii...!!!! 🤗 Seher! 😆

You did start to write OS...So gald and so happy I am...Dancing Ahhh, finally I will get to read the beauty of your words more often...😳 Heh. All of these are wayy shorter, but much more convenient to write!

First one:- Aww...I love Manik's POV wale OS...Your words...There is always something so beautiful that does reflects his feeling, perfectly... Thanks! ❤️

2nd one:- I did got Randhir wali feelings from the start. When I was reading it, the only thing in my mind was Sandhir's ride in Barish...The Samjhawana in BG and Randhir's realization of his love for her...That smile...God, I love that scene...I have fell out of SQ but that scene remains my most fav one...Randhir stole my breath... I remember I was so insanely excited for that episode! I made a post with most thing in caps and lots of OMGs and I was generally very happy. That One Shot is one of my favorites, because I love the rain as well.

And I HAVE read your OS that time, and still remembered the feel of it...That is how I knew...And plus, Manik is more of a Car person...He doesn't have a bike...😆 Yes, he is! Ah, didn't think of that 😕

The 3rd one:- Wow, always expect from you to give something unexpected...A third person POV on MaNan...😲 Hehe 😆

That just shows how beautiful and so obviously in love they are that any outsiders can see it, come to love and respect it... IKR!

No matter how much and how many people fall in like/love with them, they will always know the half of the amazing person MaNan are...Only they know each other in the whole, the good, the bad, the best...That is why they are perfect, that is why they live in their own world, unaware of everything but them...

Originally posted by: serenam

Totally agree that Manik is the more difficult character to decipher and that anyone admiring him from afar would be starstruck more than anything else.

However, if one were to assume that this third person doing the admiring is one with a certain level of observational skills, she / he would definitely be able to see the differences between Manik with Nandini Vs Manik sans Nandini despite being starstruck.

When Manik sans Nandini strides around the place as if he owns it (which, he technically does), there is a certain aura of power about him which makes him seem like a demi-god to mere mortals, a certain level of untouchability. On the other hand, when Nandini is in his vicinity, he becomes a normal 19 year old boy with his girl - very sweet, mischievous, very approachable.

Dunno if you'd agree with me, but I do think it can be done! What say? 🤔 ☺️ Would love to know your thoughts.

Love,

Serena

Originally posted by: Kapk

I loved the idea of putting a 3rd person POV! It was sooo refreshing! I'm looking forward for your next update 😊