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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: filter.coffee

aww the effects of manik malhotra!

you described nandini's feeling towards him perfectly.i could actually imagine all the things happening in the drabble!

reminded me of that scene when the 1st time we see nandu too is attracted to him.remember navya was with her and she thought manik was gay but nandu kept saying he isn't and then kept looking at him with this look... I loved that part! :D


anyway loved it as usual Thanks!


Believe me, those are the effects of every crush. Sad, but true.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Lovely drabble
Beautifully written


Nandu feelings so well portrayed

Loved it to the core

Love u
Keep smiling


Thank you! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Brilliant just too good.. ❤️

I loved how you put forward Nandini's feelings and her thoughts here..

Her noticing every small detail about Manik paying nil attention to what Navya was telling her, even him breathing makes her think he looks sexy, now that's what we call hardcore insanity.. 😳☺️

I loved this update couldn't get enough of it wish you'd written more, just superb.. 😳


Thanks! I'll try writing more from Nandu's POV!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: MKrayZee

I love it!!! I absolutely love reading about Nandini's POV. Somehow, I am never able to capture it as well. This was beautiful.


Thank you!

About the capturing something part, I think you can write anything and make people feel it, if you write how you felt/feel about things.
I still have to check out your writing BTW!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: RomComFan

This is fantastic... simple and very real... you are so good at these, seriously impressed.


Thank you! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

You dedicate this short but awesomely beautiful Drabble to me...😲 No one has ever done that before...I love it, more because you like me and my comments...lol :D

And more than anything because the title is "insane", which describes me perfectly and it also describes what I, too, feel like when it comes to certain Mr.Manik Malhotra... lol

I loved it...😳 I think it describes everyone, really. 😆

"She wants to not get distracted by Manik every time he breathes..."

And I love the love Nandini feels for him...So breathtaking...You words make, even if they are few, his effects on her and her battle with herself, so evident and obvious...😆 Thank you! :D

Riddhi, you made my day, really...I have having a very crappy day till now, but you and your words made everything better now...Thank you so much...🤗 And an even bigger thanks! Glad it made you feel better! 🤗


It really is very short, but I'm glad you liked it! :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh my God!thank you!thank you so much! 🤗

you updating and posting new drabbles are special enough but you dedicating it to me...i don't know what to say.i can't stop smiling!thanks this made my day!

and drabble!what can i say as always perfect.in just few lines you described manan beautifully.loved these lines

"They're not the best people, but they make up for it.
She's water to his fire, and he is the wind to hers."

i always keep waiting for you to update.hope you'll update soon.

and once again thank you ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is such a true description of them!!!
Beautiful drabble!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey gurl
i just read the #4 and #5 drabbles together and srsly i just love ur writings more and more every time
hats off to u for portraying their emotions in soo less words ...lyk srsly how do u manage that ...in just the right amt of words ...i m also a writer and i literally strive to keep a limit on myself ..i guess i shud learn this from u ...sooner 👏
do keep writing from time to time , your works are a pleasure for the readers i must say for they are absolutely beautiful pieces
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