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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

aww the effects of manik malhotra!

you described nandini's feeling towards him perfectly.i could actually imagine all the things happening in the drabble!

reminded me of that scene when the 1st time we see nandu too is attracted to him.remember navya was with her and she thought manik was gay but nandu kept saying he isn't and then kept looking at him with this look...

anyway loved it as usual

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bashful_moon

@bashful_moon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Once again... a beautiful drabble... It is a delight to read something from a girl's perspective.

Flow, as usual was amazing. Who can blame Nandani if she cannot concentrate on Navya's nine to dozen blabbering when someone has a very picturesque Manik Malhotra to muse about..

And once again, don't worry about the length... If keeping it short ensures delivering substance... so let be it..

Keep writing... Your works are a delight to read..

P.S : Thanks for the dedication. .. U said I made you insanely happy with my comment. Now the feeling is mutual...Gosh what was that?????...Some random scribbling??? Nay... can't be... Some good piece of writing????... Indubitably and more...What then????...Erm...lemme think and think a little more... Well for the lack of better words let me just say it was an exquisite work of a master wordsmith. ...

Edited by bashful_moon - 10 years ago

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Lovely drabble
Beautifully written

Nandu feelings so well portrayed

Loved it to the core

Love u
Keep smiling

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Brilliant just too good.. ❤️

I loved how you put forward Nandini's feelings and her thoughts here..

Her noticing every small detail about Manik paying nil attention to what Navya was telling her, even him breathing makes her think he looks sexy, now that's what we call hardcore insanity.. 😳☺️

I loved this update couldn't get enough of it wish you'd written more, just superb.. 😳

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MKrayZee

@MKrayZee

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

I love it!!! I absolutely love reading about Nandini's POV. Somehow, I am never able to capture it as well. This was beautiful.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

This is fantastic... simple and very real... you are so good at these, seriously impressed.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: AzureLicht

Thank you so much! ❤️

Haha, Anytime...🤗

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

You dedicate this short but awesomely beautiful Drabble to me...😲 No one has ever done that before...I love it, more because you like me and my comments...lol

And more than anything because the title is "insane", which describes me perfectly and it also describes what I, too, feel like when it comes to certain Mr.Manik Malhotra... lol

I loved it...😳

"She wants to not get distracted by Manik every time he breathes..."

And I love the love Nandini feels for him...So breathtaking...You words make, even if they are few, his effects on her and her battle with herself, so evident and obvious...😆

Riddhi, you made my day, really...I have having a very crappy day till now, but you and your words made everything better now...Thank you so much...🤗