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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Another amazing piece... I love the concept.. and you're right, it fits them so well...great job!

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bashful_moon

@bashful_moon

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Writing for the first time in this forum...

Beautiful drabble...

You said length is not your strength... But does that really matter?.. First of all, your works are lucid ... they have a perfect flow. Secondly, they are eloquent.. Doesn't quality always matter over quantity, especially when it is any form of art in question?

And most importantly, you have managed to capture the essence of manan so beautifully - nandini who waltzed to manik's life and ultimately into his heart without either of them ever knowing when and how; then manik for whom nandini became the reason for--- erm EVERYTHING.

Keep writing... Many can write.. Only a few can capture the essence and write this vividly...

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: bashful_moon
Writing for the first time in this forum...
Beautiful drabble...

You said length is not your strength... But does that really matter?.. First of all, your works are lucid ... they have a perfect flow. Secondly, they are eloquent.. Doesn't quality always matter over quantity, especially when it is any form of art in question?

And most importantly, you have managed to capture the essence of manan so beautifully - nandini who waltzed to manik's life and ultimately into his heart without either of them ever knowing when and how; then manik for whom nandini became the reason for--- erm EVERYTHING.

Keep writing... Many can write.. Only a few can capture the essence and write this vividly...

I think that for the first time reading a comment has actually made me this happy and I just might be sort of blushing because god, if that isn't a compliment!

Thank you so much! That is honestly I think the best thing anyone has ever said about my writing, and god, just thanks a lot! I'm really happy you think that!

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Beautiful os
It perfectly suits to manan

U write superb
I so loved it

Keep smiling

Thank you! :)

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: tinkerred10
Aww ..that so cute and it made me smile :) Keep on posting these small drabbles...they r sweet .

Thanks! I'm glad you liked reading it :D

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Arshirox97
Aww... This one was so beautiful!!

Thank you! :)

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: RomComFan
Another amazing piece... I love the concept.. and you're right, it fits them so well...great job!

Thank you so much! :D

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

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MKrayZee

@MKrayZee

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

This was beautiful. I've never read a third person POV on MaNan. very different, refreshing. Who would not want to be loved the way she loves him, and the way he loves her.

I'm so glad you are writing again.

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Serena

@serenam

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

That was really beautiful! And, the way you've brought everything around, I could see it the other way as well i.e. from the perspective of a girl looking at / observing Manik.

Kudos! Hope you continue to write for a long time to come.

Love,

Serena

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