Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb fantastic update poor manik had to tolerate soha for mukti but I really like it when he show her place and said stay away from him

I just hope they wont fall in soha plan and his cousin is not ex boyfriend of Nandu please there would be so much drama in it

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh god yaha v soha acchi khasi story read kar rahi thi n ab ye story v gayi bye bye dear jab soha chali jayegi tab bataungi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haha Soha deserved it :3 niceee
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin

oh god yaha v soha acchi khasi story read kar rahi thi n ab ye story v gayi bye bye dear jab soha chali jayegi tab bataungi

Lol soha ha end hn yeh..,mere next parts mein soha nai hn...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: simmii25

Lol soha ha end hn yeh..,mere next parts mein soha nai hn...


i love u thnx ki soha ka end ho gaya but sure na ki ye ladki nahi aayegi????
i love ur srty yaar its damn awesome cont sson
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awsum update
very nyc...their msg convos...too good
soo cute...liked it
now wht will this soha do?
eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow mtlb Nandu trust Manik or Manik usska trust ni todega issliye ussne sb truth bta diya...
but that bloody stupid soha i just wanna kill her...
awsm updates waiting for nxt
ty for pm n that soha cheater go to hell
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 9 (Part 2)

As soon manik reached home he just locked his room and was regretting the moment when he talks to soha online.He was lying on bed when suddenly Nandini call him.He don't want to talk in angry mood with her but still he picks up the call.In low voice he said "Heyy".Nandini can judge something wrong and she said "You tired from party baby."Manik said "Yeah,will talk with you tomorrow.Night." Nandini got worried and didn't say anything and she calls cabir and asked "Hey cabir,what happen at party."Cabir told her everything in once. And told how manik slapped Soha and left party.Nandini was shocked by manik behavior but she will not talk with manik now.So she let him sleep.And she was restless whole night with soha behavior and thinks to teach her lesson and she plans to visit Toronto on weekend.

Next morning manik open his eyes and call Nandini..Morning baby.Sorry for last night..I love you always.Nandini said "Morning baby.Love you too."Open your eyes first and get ready for college. I am gonna call u later and we will talk.Manik was going to ask her "what talk"?But she cuts the phone.Manik thougts "Talk as in serious talk."He got ready for college and waits for Nandini call.Meanwhile cabir saw him on breakfast table and notice manik is confused.So,no one tries to ask or talk about last night.Cabir asked "You speak to Nandini.she called me last night.She was worried".Manik guess it and said "And you told her everything".Manik knows her very well.She will be mad at soha and will try to do something or come straight to Toronto.

In afternoon Nandini called manik and manik knows that Nandini gonna be mad for all this.Nandini said "Baby, I just want to say that whatever happened with soha and you I don't know what was it.You can share whenever you want but slapping a girl in public is not good sign of being a man. I don't want my man to feel guilty later.Try to control your anger.I am girl too,what if somebody would slap me like you did.What you wil do then".Manik replied "No one can dare to touch you ,I would kill him."Nandini said "So,why you slap her.If she said something bad about me it's her manners but how you behave its yours."So for me your love control your anger.Manik was quite now and settled down and said :Thank you.Nandini replied "Have your breakfast now and talk to mukti also.Manik said bye to Nandini and make a call to mukti "Hey was up..She didn't reply well and then manik told her how soha speaks about liking him and talks bad about Nandini." Mukti replied "I am sorry manik on her behalf but just for my sake just text her sorry and then you can cut off all connections with her ."Manik don't want to do this but he understands that mukti is soha friend since high school. So he texted soha "Sorry I slap you last night.But we are not friends anymore now." Soha replied "I am sorry for last night also."

Nandini and manik relationship is growing strong day by day now.Nnadini she control her anger now and manik he will always listens to Nandini.Nandini even tries to forget her past now and she and navya is scoring good marks in studies also.Manik is happy to get Nandini in his life as she always take care of him as baby.Navya and cabir still talk as friends but navya never express her feelings to him.As some days are left in navya birthday so she already has texted abhi ,manik,dhruv and cabir for party plans.All of them decided to celebrate it in Toronto.But navya and Nandini planned to have one girls night out before going to Toronto.

So on weekend morning Nandini was checking his laptop when she suddenly come across that in one browser manik fb profile was open.On his birthday when he was replying to everyone he use Nandini laptop and maybe he forgets to log out.And after that Nandini dint touch her laptop a lot.So,when she saw she was going to log out when suddenly she thought okay let's check your profile and winks.She open the inbox and as soon she saw the chat with girl she got mad when she saw it was soha.It was that online girl which manik talked for one month.She read the whole chat and throw his laptop on bed and was going to call manik when suddenly navya called her "Nandini let go , I am ready".Nandini controls herself as he don't want to spoil navya day.Ins tead of calling she texted manik "How dare you to call me the same name you call that girl.You lied me all along all way.You talk to soha and you told me it was some random girl.I hate you.Stay away from me and my life and don't even try to call me.She texted all to manik in anger.And left with navya.

Manik saw her message and he was shocked that suddenly what happen to Nandini.He called her,she was just disconnecting the call.Manik again called her and keep on calling her.She texted him "I am busy and I don't want to talk with you.so,stop calling.Manik texted her "What happen to you baby,why are you behaving like this".Talk to me once.Nandini replied him "Check your fb message and talk to your soha."Manik understand that she finds out about soha being online girl.He kept on calling on Nandini.then he called navya but Nandini warned her not to pick any call from manik or cabir today.

Manik got mad and in his anger state he hits the table and hurt his leg.Hearing the noise cabir runs to his room and see his leg and shouts "Are you gone mad.what are you doing."Manik was crying like baby and said "Cabir make nandini talk to me now."Cabir texted Nandini "Speak to manik,he is getting out of control".Nandini replied "I don't give a f**k,I don't care."And tell your friend not to do anything stupid.And you stay with him.Manik control his anger and wait for Nandini mood to calm down.

Otherside bothof them had dinner.Seeing lost Nandini navya asked if she want to go home.Nandini said no lets go for drinks.Navya knows that she cant control Nandini when she is drunk.Its only abhi or manik who can do that.But she can' even let go Nandini alone.So,both of them went tto pub and navya only had one shot meanwhile while thinking about soha talking with manik and manik lie ofsoha being online girl Nandini was drink so much She was having vodka shots continuously.after she was fully drunk navya holds her arm and leave the pub.Nandini drags her and said "I want to go to falls right now."Navya told her its almost 1 a.m,they will go tomorrow.Nandini said "Oaakyy she will go by herself and starts walking."Navya cant let her alone in this situation so she went with her.Both of them were sitting near falls when navya phone starts ringing and it was manik again.Nandini said "No".Then Nandini said "You know navya right how much I love him.He lied to me.everybody will leave me one day.Why.i am too bad"And she had tears in her eyes.Navya said "Nandini he loves you a lot,just talk to him once,he must be worried.He has already called us like 100 times.May be he lied to protect you from hurting."Silently she texted manik "She is much drunk right now,either you or abhi can handle her.I don't want abhi to see her like this so do something."

Manik again called Nandini and drunk Nandini answers the phone and said "What do you want manik Malhotra now."? Manik said "are you drunk right now". Nandini replied "Yeah,its my life I will do whatever I want.no one can force me.So, now you are bored from soha and you want to talk with me.I love you so much from all my heart and you did the same with my heart.One day I will leave you forever and then you realise my love.You can never find me again.Never.My love is not lie for you like yours."

Manik was crying listening to Nandini words.He loves her lot.He don't want to see her in this condition.He control his tears and said "Baby where you right now".Nandini said "Your baby is at falls".Manik got panicked because she is so drunk and she can do anything in anger state and said "Okayy you love me right,so go to home right now."Nandini said "And why do you think I would listen to you".Manik got mad and shouts "Nandini you are my life,if anything happen to you,I will not be living next moment.Oaky go home right away or else I am also gonna go outside and will not return."Nandini said angrily "No,you stay at home,don't you dare to go anywhere.stay there."Manik told her with his crying voice "Baby please don't this to me.I am very far away right now.Handle yourself.Pleasee go home".Give phone to navya he said.Like a baby Nandini said "Okayy but tell me first you love me more or her."Manik got mad and at shouts "Nandini stop comparing yourself with her.I told you not a single girl can replace you ever in my life.Okk.Stop it and pass phone to navya."

Nandini pass phone to navya.Mnaik said "Navya,pleaseeits my request.Just for night take care of her.Just take her home right away and text me when you guys reach home and lock her in room so that she cant go anywhere.And you guys will not come Toronto next morning.I will come to pick u up but don't tell her anything."Navya said "Manik control yourself,I will take Nandini." Then navya grabs Nandini and drags her to home whereas manik was waiting for cabir so that he can drive him to Toronto.Navya reaches home and texts manik that they are at home now.Nandini is in room and she locked it form outside.As soon Nandini hits bed she again called manik.Manik answers the phone and said "Yess baby.say".Nandini replied "You don't love me at all.You never kiss me."Manik smiled at this and said "Oakyy I will kiss you tomorrow morning when you will open your eyes".Nandini smiled and said "Promise.".Manik said "Yeah".Nandini said manik I want to get married right away .Let go I will come to you.Manik was smiling and said "Oakyy we will get married soon but you stay in your bed and right now you sleep."Nandini starts crying and said "See you don't love me that's why you don't want to marry me.I know it."Manik said "No,I am just thinking about your dress.It will take time right.I want you to look best bride ever.So,tomorrow morning we will go to shopping and then marriage."Nandini smiled and said "Yeahhh".While talking Nandini dozes into sleep .Hearing her breath sound manik knows she is slepping now.As soon cabir reached home around 5 a.m,He saw manik on door and asked "What happened to you.Still awake." Manik said "We are going to falls right away and you are driving".Cabir said "You gone mad,they guys are coming tomorrow".Manik replied "No,they are not,are you coming or no". Without saying anything cabir went to driving seat and manik told him to drive fast.

Both of them reach falls 7 in morning and manik called navya to open the door.Manik went straight to Nandini room and saw she was just sleeping in her dress with shoes.He gently removed the shoes and slip to side of bed and hold her in his arms.She was sleeping so like baby.

After 1 hour when Nandini groans because of headache and open her eyes she saw manik holding her.She smile and thought She is dreaming because of her hangover.She said "Why I always see you in dreams.Go away let me sleep more and she closed her eyes again".Manik smiled and said "Good morning baby.you want lemon water".

Nandini suddenly hearing his voice opened her eyes and shouts "You are real.what are you doing here".And she helds her head and try to remember what happened last night.

Okayy guys as said not promised because i never keep any promise😉😉 next update is here for you.SO,enjoy reading and like and comments so that i can write more and more for you guys..

And this part was for real.

Good night to all my readers.Have a sweet dreams.


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Posted: 10 years ago
this is just awesome
man their love their dedication
for each other
n manik dude
hats off to u
loving it contu soon

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