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Posted: 9 years ago
it was really really nice dear😊
but why is amms always after manik??...hasn't she accepted him completely??
i just hope she doesn't take nandini along with her
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Posted: 9 years ago
awww manik kitni caring.amms k toh kher nhi unk prob kya he dekh nhi sakti ki nandu nhi reh payegi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Caring update...plz don't separate them..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome wonderfully written
Aahhh here comes amms
Well we know der will be some loophole to it
Well Nandu will not go alone I don't think so
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just love it.. Itsss soo awesome .. So amazing. .just love to the core. .. Soo .fantastic. ... Keep updating. .. U r such a beautiful writer... Update soon.. Waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. .. Thanks for this update . Thanks . ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for being late all the time...n I won't give any Bahana this time...actually I don't know how to present a sangeet ceremomy

I wrote the sangeet function 2 times n deleted it as i was not satisfied when I read it..so pls do give me some suggestion...like how to start n end it...so I can write it properly

N sorry for giving u a crap update that too after waiting for so long

Chapter 22

As soon as amms left...manik lied next to nandini and unintentionally slept thinking about amms...nandini gained her senses after a minute...she looked at her side n smiled looking at manik sleeping on his stomach...his one arm wrapped around her waist n face hid in her hairs...nandini pecked his lips thrice...manik smiled n cuddled more to her in sleep...soon nandini remembered the harsh words of amms for manik n the smiled fade away from her face...

Nandini POV

Why amms...why are u doing this?...u know na I can't live without manik fir bhi u want to take me away from him...aap Jo chahe decision le lo par main manik ke bina nahi rahungi apke saath...n if you've decided to take me to Mangalore then its ok par manik bhi humare saath ayenga...aisa koi ritual nahi hai jisme main manik ke saath nahi reh sakti

End of POV

Nandini kept ruffling manik's hair...she too was feeling sleepy...but she moved away from manik n went inside the washroom...manik got up with a jerk n went in the washroom to help her...nandini kept puking it out while manik was rubbing her back...manik turned the tap off when she was done n cleaned her face with the napkin...nandini was getting week on her knees so she held his shoulder for support n rested her head on his chest...manik immediately picked her up n walked towards the bed n laid her on it n sat holding her hand

Manik - are u OK

Nandini - hmm

Manik - OK sleep now...u need rest

Nandini - I'm not feeling sleepy

Manik - why?

Nandini - coz I'm not getting ur warmth...

Manik kissed forehead n laid cuddling her n adjusted the duvet on them properly...nandini restes her head on his chest n manik wrapped his arm around her shoulder

Nandini - manik

Manik - hmm

Nandini - where are u so lost

Manik - amms..

Nandini knew that manik was thinking about amms only n she didn't wanted him to get stressed so she thought to distract his mind

Nandini - manik let's not think about amms right now...

Manik - u really think so nandini...I just can't get her words out my head...I told u na that she's going to take me away from u...she still hates me

Nandini - no she doesn't hate u manik...why ru thinking like that...its just that amms is very strict about the cultures n u very well know that..

Manik - if she will take u to Mangalore na...then I will also come with u

Nandini - so who is stopping u from coming to Mangalore...but we need to know that amms will be OK with it or not...

Manik - but nandini...

Nandini - manik pls let's not talk about it right now...

Manik stopped right their n thought if he will talk about amms too much...nandini will get stressed n it won't be good for her so just to distract her mind he held his palm n kissed on it

Manik - fine we won't spoil our moment...acha ab main tumhari mehendi dekh sakta hu na

Nandini - of course...n u have to find ur name too

Manik succeeded in distracting nandini...he started finding his name on her palm...nandini thought to tease him...while manik was concentrating on her palm...nandini started kissing him on his jaw line n manik widen his eyes n looked at her but she didn't pay any attension n kept doing her work...manik was getting turned on by each passing second n nandini was just not stopping herself

Manik - nandini...naam dhund ne se pehle hi reward de rahi ho kya

Nandini stopped n hid her face on the crook of his neck...manik kissed her cheeks tightly...she looked at him with a smile...manik changed their position within a second n nandini was under him now...

Manik - kya baat hai...bohot pyaar aa raha hai mujh pe aaj

Nandini - WO to roz hi ata hai...tum ho hi itne special ki pyar na aye aisa ho nahi sakta

Manik - so shall we continue...

Nandini pushed manik...he lied beside her...she showed her palm to him n said

Nandini - first find ur name in my mehendi

Manik - OK...but don't u dare tease me warna...main firse start ho jaunga
Nandini - OK..I won't

Manik again concentrated on mehendi...n nandini was just staring at him lovingly...

Manik - nandini ye dekho "a" mil gaya
Nandini - bas "a" mila...aur baki ke?

Manik - ha to dekh raha hu na itna easy nahi hai...itni complicated design hai

Nandini - OK OK dekho tum

Manik made a cute pout n eyed her palm to find other alphabet of his name...manik was almost done finding his name but only "I" was missing

Manik - ye "i" kaha chupa hua hai...yes...yes...mil gaya...nandini "I" mil gaya...nandini dekho

Manik looked at nandini excitely but manik took such a long time to find his name that nandini unintentionally fell asleep while staring manik...manik smiled n cuddled more to her n kept on pecking her face n stroking her features with his thumb he soon drifted in sleep

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Next day...11am...manan were still sleeping...but due to continuous knock on the door manik woke up n shouted

Manik - stop knocking

Cabir - manik 11 baj rahe hai...uth

Manik - cabir sone de yaar

Cabir - at lest breakfast ke liye to aa ja...fir wapas so Jana waise bhi function aaj shaam ko hai Sab

Manik - OK tu ja main ata hu

Cabir - ha jaldi aa dining room me...hum sab tera aur nandini ka wait kar rahe hai

Manik - ya just give me 15 mins

Cabir - OK come soon

Cabir left...manik opened his eyes weekly n sat on the bed...

Manik - nandu utho...nandu breakfast karna hai

Nandini - umm...manik sone do na

Manik - first have ur breakfast then do whatever u want

Nandini - itni jaldi kyu utha rahe ho manik

Manik - its 11am right now...aur cabir aya tha uthane...isiliye I woke up warna main bhi so raha tha

Nandini got up with a jerk n rubbed her eyes - shit 11 baj gaye aur hume pata bhi nahi chala...

Manik side hugged nandini n placed his chin on her shoulder...still sitting on the bed

Nandini - sorry manik

Manik - hmm...sorry kyu...all of a sudden...bukhar to nahi hai na

Manik touched her forehead to check but she was not having fever

Nandini - offo manik...raat ke liye sorry...pata nahi kab neend lag gayi...I spoiled our night

Manik - offo nandini...itni choti so baat ke liye u are saying sorry...their will be more n more night for us...lekin tab jab when u will be absolutely fine

Nandini - I love u manik

Manik - I love u too...OK now let's get ready warna sab aaj bhook se mar jayenge

Manan laughed n moved towards washroom to get fresh

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Cabir - 15 min bola tha tune aur half n hour ke baad aa raha hai...kar kya raha tha tu itni der tak

Manik - koi 15 mins me tayar kaise honga cabir kabhi to sense lagaya kar

Cabir - galti teri hai...tune 15 mins bola tha

Manik - WO Maine aise hi bol diya tha...ab age aur mat puchna...chup chap breakfast kar

Cabir - theek hai na beta...abhi papi pet ka sawal hai...warna abhi chorta nahi tujhe

Mukti - manik kal amms bohot ghusse me the...kya hua kal

Manik - nahi kuch nahi hua bas thodi si daat pad gayi

Nandini - seriously manik thodi si daat...guys tum sabko kuch batana hai mujhe

Navya - kya hua sab theek to hai na...bohot tensed lag rahe ho tum dono

Nandini - amms mujhe Mangalore lejana chahte hai...for 6months

Except for manik everyone shouted "what" in unison

Cabir - ye kya bol rahi ho nandini...manik kya ye sach hai

Manik - ya guys...amms chahte hai ki humare baby ki delivery Mangalore se ho

Navya - ek tarah se amms sahi hai

Mukti - navya kya bol rahi ho tum...tumhari to delivery Mumbai se hi hui thi

Navya - kyuki tab humare pass koi choice nahi thi warna hum humari amma ke pass rehte Bihar me aur kavya shayad wahi janam leti

Aliya - lekin manik aur nandini ki situation alag hai...aur sirf delivery Mangalore me ho uske liye 6months waha rahe aisa zaruri to nahi hai na...nandini apne last month me Mangalore ja sakti hai

Dhruv - ha tum log aisa bhi kar sakte ho...amms ko ek baar bol kar dekho

Manik - amms nahi manege...n why r we talking about this...pls change the topic yaar...mera mood kharab ho jata hai

Mukti - ok...to fir aaj ke function ki baat karte hai

Nandini - hey tumlogo ki dance preparation kaisi rahi

Cabir - arre bada maza aya yaar tum dono ko bhi hona chahiye tha humare saath

Dhruv - arre ha...abhi ne mukti ko lift karte time gira diya tha

Everyone laughed n mukti shouted - guys just stop it...wo galti se ho gaya tha abhi se

Cabir - nahi yaar mukti...abhi ne sirf tera maan rakhne ke liye boldiya ki tu galti se giri...but asal me WO tera weight nahi sambhal paya

All of them again laughed but this time mukti picked up a fork n ran behind cabir

Mukti - cabir ruk..aaj tujhe Nahi maaf karungi...ruk tu

Cabir - arre tera hi bhala kar raha hu...bhag aur bhag...kam se kam tera weight to kam honga

Abhi - guys just leave it yaar

Cabir - arre koi bachao mujhe

Mukti - kya hua ab aur bhag na...meri help karni hai na tujhe

Cabir - ok sorry yaar...ab nahi bolunga moti tujhe...pakka promise

Cabir stopped running...mukti caught him n started beating...then abhi came from behind...pull mukti away from cabir n tried to calm her down...then after giving an angry glare to cabir mukti settled on her chair followed by cabir n abhi...all of them started having breakfast then manik got a call...he excused himself n walked at a corner to speak

Cabir - hey guys...aaj ke party ka plan yaad hai na

Mukti - arre of course aise kaise bhul sakte hai

Aliya - waise ye pehli bachelor party hongi jisme bride aur groom saath honge

Dhruv - that's bcoz...bachelor party is boring without girls

Abhi - aur dusri ladkiyo ko Dekho fir tum sabke jute Khao...isse acha apni girlfriends ke saath jao...unko jitna tadna hai tado

Cabir - correct...maze bhi ho jayenge aur galiya sunne se bhi bach jayenge

Nandini - wow...sare boys kafi sudhar gaye hai...chalo manik ka kuch to asar hua tum boys par

Navya - ha warna dusri ladkiyo ko ghoor ke dekhne me ye log kabhi peeche nahi hat te

Manik came back after attending the call n everyone else became quite diverted their topic...then cabir again asked manik

Cabir - hey manik...aaj raat party ke liye ready hai na tu

Manik - oh freak main to bhool hi gaya tha...nandini aaj raat hum sare boys party karne ja rahe hai...

Nandini - wow party...

Manik - ha main tumhe batana bhul gaya tha

Nandini - its OK...so have fun at night

Manik side hugged nandini n she was thinking about his reaction when she will be their with him at the party...

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Manik walked out of the washroom n saw nandini struggling to collect her jewelry n clothes

Manik - nandini ye sab aise utha kyu rahi ho...ready nahi hona hai

Nandini - arre I'm going in aliya's room...to get ready

Manik walked towards nandini...back hugged her...he made sad pouty face n said

Manik - why?...u know na that I love it when u get ready in front of me

Nandini tilted her head to give a light peck on his lips n said - manik sirf aaj ki baat hai...jane do na

Manik - OK fine but...tum ye dress kyu leja rahi ho

Nandini - main yeh dress pehen ne wali hu isiliye

Manik - what?...ye dress...par as far as I know humne ye design select nahi kiya tha tumhare liye

Nandini - umm...WO...Maine...last min changes karwa diye the

Manik turned her around...made her sit n sat behind her

Manik - par tumne to pehle se decide kiya tha na that u wanted to wear lehenga...then Why r u wearing a dress

Nandini - manik I can't wear a lehenga

Manik - why?

Nandini got up...stood in front of the mirror n removed her top making manik shocked

Manik - tum kar kya rahi ho nandini

Nandini pointed towards her tummy n said - look...look at my belly manik...how can u expect me to wear a lehenga choli in this figure...

Manik - itni bhi nahi dikh raha hai...u can wear lehenga

Nandini - meri tummy thodi bahar aa gayi hai...aur mujhe pata tha ki aisa hi kuch honga isiliye maine...lehenga ki jagah anarkali select ki

Manik - OK...don't get so hyper...if ur not comfortable...u can wear whatever u want

Nandini nodded in yes...she was about to wear her top but before she could...manik scooped her in his arms

Nandini - manik put me down...what r u doing

Manik - I'm finishing what u started

Manik placed nandini on the bed n came over here but carefully...so she won't get hurt

Nandini - manik abhi nahi...mujhe tayar hona hai

Manik - u very well know that I lose ontrol over myself...fir bhi tumne bina soche hi

Nandini - bina soche kya...

Manik - apne aap ko dekho pehle

Nandini looked at herself...then she realised that she was wearing a brasserie...she blushed a bit...pushed manik away a little but he didn't let her move away n pinned her on the bed...he came close to her lips n nandini closed her eyes...manik smiled n after pecking her forehead...he came close to her ear n whispered

Manik - open ur eyes

Nandini nodded her head in a no n bite her lips n that was it for manik...he slammed his lips with her...nandini immediately replied his kiss as she equally wanted to...manik slid his one hand behind her back while the other hand was entwined with hers...they broke the kiss after getting breathless...they pecked each other lips unlimited times...n their passionate moment got broke by a call on nandini's cell phone...manik got up n saw the caller ID...it was navya

Manik - ye navya ki timing ek dum perfect hote ja rahi hai

Nandini - give me the phone...I'll speak to her...they all must be waiting for me

Manik - no u won't talk to her

Nandini - arre..manik

Manik picked up her call

Navya - nandini kaha ho...ab tak ayi kyu nahi tum

Manik - nandini mere saath hai aur WO nahi ayengi

Navya - par manik...

Before navya could say further...manik disconnected the call n turned to see an angry nandini sitting on the bed...folding her arms before her chest

Manik - aise ghusse se kyu dekh rahi ho...what did I do now...and why did u wore ur top again

Nandini - seriously...that was rude manik

Manik - so whenever we both are close...everyone has to disturb us at that time only...especially this madhuballa

Nandini - maaniik

Manik - OK fine...I'm sorry

Nandini - its OK but say sorry to navya

Manik - but nandini...

Nandini - ah aah...no complains...n if everything is done...may I go now

Manik - ha if u want...but I don't want u to go

Nandini smiled...picked up her clothes n after giving a cheeks kiss ti manik she went away n manik started getting ready

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In the evening evrything was set for the sangeet ceremony...all the guest were entering time to time...the whole hall was filled by hush bush sounds of talking n meeting with each other

Our guys were fully ready n waiting for their girls to show up...dhruv was sitting on the couch placed on the stage...manruv n abhi were attending the guest along with their family

Lot of young celebrities friends of fab5 from bollywood industry were present today...manik was talking to varun n siddharth (dhawan n malhotra) but he was looking at the entrance to get the glimpse of his love nandini

Varun - yaar ye shaadi ka atmosphere kitna amazing aur fun hota hai...u know guys...mujhe to ye Sab dekh kar na abhi shaadi karne ka man kar raha hai

Sid - varun tujhe to har couple ko dekh kar shaadi karne ka maan karta hai...kyu manik I'm I right or not

Manik didnt heard a single thing n varun sid noticed it...sid tapped on his shoulder to get his attention n manik turned to them

Manik - ha...kya...what were u guys saying

Sid - where are u lost dude

Manik - nahi kahi bhi to nahi

Varun - oh ho sid...tu bhi na kaise question karta hai...ab jiski itni beautiful angel jaise wife ho...aur wo bhi iske aas pass na ho to dhyan to idhar udhar bhatak hi jayenga

Sid - ha ye baat to tune ekdum sahi ki

Sid varun laughed n gave high five to each other while manik blushed...n slapped their shoulders playfully

Manik - acha baki sab kaha reh gaye...alia to tum dono ke saath ane wali thi na

Sid - umm aliya shahid aur meera ke saath ayengi...u know na shaandar ke promotions me kafi busy hai wo dono
Manik - oh thank god meera aa rahi hai shahid ke saath

Varun - aise kyu bol raha hai

Manik - nahi wo kya hai na...family sath ho to enjoy kar sakte hai

Varun - WO to hai

Manik - acha u guys are also performing na tonight

Varun - of course yaar...ye bhi koi bolne wali baat hai aur sirf main hi nahi sonakshi, shradha, arjun, ranveer are also going to perform

Manik - wow that will be so much fun...dhruv aliya will be really happy

While manik was talking...chachi came from from behind n called him

Manik - kya hua Chachi

Chachi - chal mere saath nandini bula rahi hai

Manik - Sab theek to hai na

Chachi - ha sab theek hai...WO bas hai kuch important isilye WO bula rahi hai

Manik - kya Chachi app bhi na...call kar diya hota main aa jata

Chachi - main yahi pe thi...mukti ne call karke bola tujhe bhejne ke liye...ab aur sawal mat puch aur ja jaldi

Manik went in aliya's room without knocking the door...all the girls stood up n started shouting

Mukti - manik manners kaha hai tere...knock karke ana chahiye tha na

Manik - wah jab tum log mere room me bina knock kare aa jate ho uska kya...

Aliya - ha lekin humari baat alag hai...ladkiyo ke room me aise nahi ate

Manik - ha to ladko ki koi izzat nahi hoti kya...humari bhi kuch respect kiya karo

Mukti - uff tujhe to bolna hi bekar hai

Manik - acha ye sab chor...nandini kaha hai

Mukti - she's in bathroom...aaj usko vomiting bohot zyada ho rahi hai

Manik - shit pehle kyu nahi bataya

Manik opened the bathroom door...he saw nandini puking n navya was rubbing her back...

Navya - lo aa gaye tumhare patidev...manik aao isse sambhalo...hum se na ho payenga...ziddi kahi ki...kisi ko bathroom ke andar bhi nahi ane de rahi thi WO to hum zabardasti ghuss aye

Manik - thanks navya

Navya moved out of bathroom..manik stood behind nandini...he shifted her hair back which was disturbing her...he rubed her back hard n she kept throwing more n more

Manik - that is why I was telling u to get ready in front of me...sunti kaha ho tum meri

Nandini - manik yaha meri halat kharab hai aur tumhe complain karne ki suj rahi hai

Nandini said n again puked harder...manik panicked more n rubbed her back

Manik - OK I'm sorry...I'm sorry...acha kuch pain ho raha hai kya...are u ok...should I call the dr...ha

Nandini wiped her face after vomiting n leaned back on manik's chest n he wrapped his one hand around her belly n with the other wiped her face with a napkin

Manik - are u OK

Nandini - no I'm not okay...

Nandini turned around n hugged manik tightly...wrapping her hands around his neck...manik held her waist from one hand n kept patting her head with the other

Manik - chalo we will go to the doctor

Nandini - I'm tired manik...why do we have to wait so long for our baby...why can't our baby just come early

Manik - this cannot happen right now...but at least let's go to the Dr na

Nandini - I'm fine now...I don't want to go to the hospital

Manik - Ok I'll call the Dr over here

Nandini - I'm fine manik...I don't need any Dr right now

Manik - acha let's go out...u feel better...aur yaha bathroom me tumhara dress kharab ho raha hai

Nandini - hmm

Manik picked up nandini n came out of washroom...laid her on the bed while all the girls were just adoring the couple

Aliya - how are u feeling now nandini

Nandini - I'm good...don't worry...abhi sab function me masti karenge to I will feel more good

Mukti - that's the spirit

Manik - mukti WO 100mtr ki race ke liye nahi tayar hori Jo tu usse...that's the spirit bol rahi hai

Mukti - ho gaya tera...ab chale

Aliya mukti navy's got up with manan n moved out when Chachi n dhruv's mom came towards them

Chachi - nandu teri tabiyat kaisi hai abhi..agar aur ulti ho rahi hai to batana...main tujhe kada bana ke dungi

Nandini - nahi Chachi kadha mat bana na...main ab bilkul theek hu

Dhruv's mom - acha chalo sabhi...sare guest intezar kar rahe hai


Sangeet Function hall
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Nandini
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Aliya
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Mukti
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Navya
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Kavya
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Boys look
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OK so here is the update
I don't know if u guys will enjoy it or not but pls do give me some feedbacks n comment a lot so that I can write as early I could
I want some ideas for sangeet function

Do like n comment pls coz I can inbox the chapter anytime


Edited by sadiya51 - 9 years ago
Tiara115 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's not a crap ... I to just loved it . I hope amms man jaye ya phir manik bi mangalore chala jaye... Waiting to see Manik's reaction when he will see nandu in the party ...
Do update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry yaar even I don't know anything about Sangee
between the update is really nice
manik taking care of nandu is too cute
amms na what she want yaar even she know
that manan can't stay away from each other
everyone is very concern about nandus health
cont soon
sohalee thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
awwieee
nandani is not feeling well
and manik is panicking
manik is just too cute

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the chappy.. loved it how nandu didn't let anyone but manik to enter the bthroom while puking... just don't separate them by sending her with that stupid amms.. 😉😛

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