# MY WORLD'S KING # MaNan FF (UPDATED PART 23) Pg131 29/8

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Manya

@manya_189

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

This was so Intense..
The fights were pretty good and the ending was hot :D !!

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n3gn

@n3gn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Awesome update yaar and if possible toh try to update the next part today itself , try to make daily update and also pm me

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devika

@suv-kriyaansh

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

iam in luv with ur stry... its amazing

the ending was super hot... ☺️

update soon nd pls dnt be late nxt time 😊

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Apurva

@apps33

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Wat an amazin update...

Totally loved it...

Deir chemistry and romance gosh... It was too good...!

Plz cont soon... Plz pl Plz update ASAP...

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Finally you updated :)

thnk u so much for a wonderful story..

and the kiss hyeee..!! So dreamy :p

plzzz update soon will be waiting for your update :)

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Arunima

@jesse93

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Lovely update ,
but what was that the ending ,
it has seriously struck in my mind. Wow that was really hawttt.
Update the next part soon .
And Parth will be get well soon as he has all these well wishes for him ,so don't worry .

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Thanks for the Omanis updated
Loved everything about this update and finally the last part was awesome

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Barbiebarbie11

@Barbiebarbie11

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

first of all I want to hug u tight,*huggg* 😊

u r an amazing writer [;Y:]
terrific 😊 👍🏼

it was like I was not reading an update,it was like I was watching each n every scene 👏

live scenes,I can say 👍🏼

u r fab,

um speechless ,don't have words to praise u,coz my each word will mean nothing in font of ur talent

abt update,it was awsm,superb,speechless *STANDING OVATION*👍🏼

full of intensity 😳

I jus love d desperate manik,who desperately wants her to stay with him 😳

and d last space college scene,wr he pulled her in an empty room n that sensational kiss was cherry on d cake 😳 😉 👍🏼