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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part4
NanDini's p.o.v
me and anayta di wr at airport waiting for chachi,wen suddenly we gt to knw dat all d flights hd been cancelled
we wr very upset with d news,so we left d airport
me n anayta di wr in car,suddenly i felt a warm,soft touch around my belly,i wz searchng n looking here n there ,but i didnt saw anyone in car other than me ,anayta di n driver,but someone hd kept his arm around my belly,i can clearly feel it
i was scared,my face was sweating,my body was shivering,someone was besides me on seat,
he clutchd on my hand,it was like he crashed all d bones of my hand n i screamed out in pain

Anayta di was worried,she start caressing my hand
i start shouting like "I HATE U,I HATE U,TUM JO KOI B HO,I JUS HATE U"
p.O.V ended

3rd person P.O.V
nandini was shouting "i hate u,i hate" n d next moment her body gt jerked,he again entered into her body,her hands got twisted n she start crawlng on d back seat
she was screaming in pain
"anayta di bohut dard ho raha hai,plss save me,bachao mujhe,aaa its paining"
Anayta start caressing her hair,nandini grabd her neck,"HUMARE BEECH AANE KI KOSHISH B MAT KARNA,HUM DONO SE DHOOR RAHO,AUR NANDINI KO HUMSE DHOOR KARNE K BAARE MEIN SOCHNA B MAT " d voice was double voice,male n female

p.O.V ended

Anayta's p.o.v
she grabd my neck,actually she was not my nandu dat tym,it was that ghoost inside her,he twisted her hands,sometyms twisting her body,my baby was crying in pain n i was too helpless,
meanwhile we reached home,she jumped from d car n was running here n there
i was running behind her,but she was too fast that she disappeared from my sight
i ran towards her room n there i saw d most shocking veiw of my life
she was on piano,her whole body was twisted badly n she was playing piano by her toes
she looked at me n start laughng n sometym crying in pain,Blood was oozing from her eyes instead of tears,i was crying ,i was helpless,my heart was shrinking while seeing her in pain
she start singing ,but male voice was coming from her,
he was singing something like
MERA SAMAY TOH WAHI P THA THERA HUA
BATAO TUMHE KYA MERE SATH KYA KYA HUA
P.O.V ended

3rd person p.o.v
anayta was pleading to him,but he didnt listen
nandini finally gt up frm piano n odered her sister to leave her room
Anayta was aware that its not nandini talking its someone else
she refused to leave her room,but he threatnd her that if she didnt left her room,he will harm her
Anayta was helpless n left d room,she was sitting near outside d door
nandini's body again gt jerked,he freed her body again,nandini start hiding behind her bed n start blabberng"woh mujhe mar dalega,he will kill me"
manik Finally appeared infront of her,he bend down on his knees,nandini lifted her head n hugd him tight,he hugd her back,it was a very tight hug even air cant pass between both of them,both wr hugging eachother,he start caressing her back n hair
Nandini:wo..wo..woh mujhe marega,he will kill me,he will kill me
Manik:stop hating him,he will not kill u then

Nandini:who was still scared,he will kill me,he will kill me

manik:woh tumhe kuch nhi karega,he loves u,but he z also tkng his revenge from u

nandini hugd him more tight,he also made his grip more tight,he placed his lips on her neck ,placed wet kisses all over her neck down to back shoulder

Nandini: pls mujhe chod k mat jao,dont leave me alone,he will again come

Manik pikd up her in his arms n placed her on bed,he wiped her tears"shhh stop crying now,tum ye sab karne p majboor karte ho"

nandini closed her eyes n dozed off in same position (hugging him)

manik was contineously caressing her back n hair

after some tym,she opened her eyes n fnd herself in his arms
her neck,shoulder,face,arms wr bruised,she was crying in pain

Nandini:look wat he did ?dekho kya kiyya usne,ouuch its hurting

manik:toh hum theek kar dete hai,he kissed her cheeks,then her neck,she closed her eyes,he was kissing her neck like endless sky,then kissed her shoulder,then her collor bone n did same on otherside

manik:now check urself in mirror,u dont have any wound now

nandini checkd her neck,shoulder,arms in mirror n was shocked to see that thr was not a single scar

she jus ran n hugd him,"pp..par.w..wo.woh mujhe marega,plss dont leave me alone
she closed her eyes while hugging him
she opnd her eyes n didnt find anyone in room,she start searching for him,she was shouting
"kaha ho? Tum kaha chale gaye? Pls mujhe akela mat chodo,hume dar lag raha hai"
she again start hiding behind couch n rested her head between her legs
he placed his hand on her head,"um here"
nandini jus wraped her arms around his neck n hugd him tight
"KAHA chale gaye?dont leave me pls"
he wraped his arms around her waist,"MEIN TOH HUMESHA TUMHARE SATH HI HOTA HOON"

manik:ur di z waiting for u outside,now go n eat something "he whispered in her ears",she nodded n left

DINNEr Tym
Anayta: um so sorry nandu,um too helpless,i m not able to help u,wen he enteres in ur body

Nandini:di pls dont cry
Edited by Ainahbarbie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
This part was amazing yr
Loved it
So manik is tht guy or not m confused
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: sizzysehrish

This part was amazing yr

Loved it
So manik is tht guy or not m confused
Update soon

yes manik is d same guy...ghoost
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
nice update, i love your story please update daily i cant wait to read next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
wowww this part is soo gud finally nandu ka Rona stop hua
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
have patience dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Wonderful update !!!!!plzzz pm me when u update the next part ...and asap...I just loved the concept

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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
awesome update...but feeling bad for poor nandu...
so now manik has started appearing before her..
plz continue...can't wait for the next part...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
omg omg omg ainah u r a blessed writer i must say u made my day agar main aj aur koi story nahi v paru to v mujhe bura nahi lgega omg the update was scary but super super cute really nandini same time manik se darr v rahi hai aur usk bina rah v nahi paraha hai thogh she don't knw the ghost was manik phir v i loved it awww its to cute but what is the revenge???why is he hurting her like dat???i knw i knw u will reveal thngs slowly i loved dis dear n i love u too plz plz plz cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: aminahin

omg omg omg ainah u r a blessed writer i must say u made my day agar main aj aur koi story nahi v paru to v mujhe bura nahi lgega omg the update was scary but super super cute really nandini same time manik se darr v rahi hai aur usk bina rah v nahi paraha hai thogh she don't knw the ghost was manik phir v i loved it awww its to cute but what is the revenge???why is he hurting her like dat???i knw i knw u will reveal thngs slowly i loved dis dear n i love u too plz plz plz cont asap

thanx
its bless to read ur comment

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