Manan~OS ~LOVE~part9pg33 (29th august) - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
oh you did update thank god plz update the next one soon plzzz i'm waiting 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 8

manik talking to an unconscious nandini,he kissed her everywhere, he planted a soft kisses on her eyes n brain n whispered in her ear,"u won't remember now anything,wtever hapnd last night"

manik also ly beside her n was caressing her hair

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nandini was sleeping n she don't know wen she reached to another place

it was a huge palace,thr was a woman dresses up like a queen,she was continuously calling out her name," nandini nandini nandini "a lil girl dressed like a small princess came n answered back " Ji maa" ,

nandini's p.o.v

wen I saw that lil girl,I was shocked,I was same in childhood,I mean jus xerox copy of this girl? how is this possible? ye toh mein hun,but who is dis woman? and wat I um doing in this palace? ye toh mera childhood hai? but my childhood was not like this,I never came to this palace,

I entered into some room,it was like some princess's room,it has round bed in d center of d room with transparent curtains hanging downwards,it was big n large room,decorated with flowers n light,thr was a girl sitting near dressing table,she z looking of my age,but her back was turned towards me,thr wr no.of girls around her,somewr fixing her hair,some of them wr fixing her dress, some wr massaging her hands n feet
she turned her head n I gt d biggest shock of my life,she was d same girl jissai mene water pond mein dekha tha,she was my xerox copy,I touched my face n then her face,she was jus smiling at me,wr I was crying in shock

k..k..kon ho tum ?"nandini stammered"

aap khud se khud ki hi pehchan pooch rahe hai ? "princess replied back"

pl..pls tell me who r u ?"nandini pleaded"

hum MANIK KI NANDINI HAI

nandini start screaming manik mera hai,mein manik ki nandini hoon,tum nhi,woh sirf mera manik hai

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woh sirf mera manik hai,sirf mera,mein manik ki nandini hun tum nhi,she screamed in her sleep,manik kissed her on her lips to stop her from screaming,nandini opened her eyes n kissed him back,she ran her fingers in his hair ,pushing him more n more close,
finally manik broke kiss n wiped her corner lip

nandini: ma..manik she again came here,actually not here,mein hi kahin aur chali gayi thi

manik was aware of everything,he was jus staring at her with love

nandini: I mean I saw a dream,dream nhi pata nhi kya tha woh,um confused

she huggd him tight n start sobbing in his chest,

nandini: she will snatch u from me,sh..s..she said woh manik ki nandini hai,but tum sirf mere hona? she asked like a small baby with non stop tears

he kissed her hair n carresd her back"mein sirf tumhara manik hun,happy now??"

nandini jus hmmd ,while still hugging him

manik: u want to stay like this till evening ?shower nhi Lena ha?

nandini: hmm in lazy tone

manik: mujhe chodne ka koi irada nhi hai? " teasing her"

nandini blushed hard n brk hug

nandini: yeah I will tk shower,but don't go anywhere plsss,and yeah I have summer vacations,toh u will spend whole day with me

manik: mein humesha tumhare sath hi hota hun,dun worry um here

Breakfast time,Dinning table scene

anayta: nandu tum kal party se wapis kab aayi?

nandini: I don't remember anything

anayta: was u drunk??

nandini: I don't know

anayta: acha listen mera exam hai aaj,so tk care of ur
self

nandini was on cloud nine that she is alone with manik,and n she can spend whole day with him widout any disturbance

anayta left n nandini went straight to her room

manik was playing piano,his eyes wr closed nandini tiptoed n slide her arms around his neck n rested her face on her shoulder,manik gave her a smile with closed eyes,nandini was kissing him on his cheek,he again smiled,she pecked him on his lips teasing him,he again smiled,she gave him a soft wet kisses on his neck,he turned his head while still playing piano n kissed back on her cheek with closed eyes

nandini sat on piano in front of him

manik opened his eyes


nandini folded her arms across her chest," manik u r ignoring me,I was showering my love on u aur tum eyes close karke baithai Thai,she made an angry cute pout

did u say LoVe??? manik teased her"

nandini turned her face as she WS blushing

manik: ok ok um sorry,my concentration was fully on u

nandini: ur fingers have magic,kitna acha piano play karte ho,,u r perfect



precap:unknown danger for nandini
manik's enemy (supernatural one)will approach to nandini


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Edited by Ainahbarbie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 8 updated

read n enjoy

ignore mistakes


love u all

Syed ainah
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautifully penned...manan scenes...so sweet
eagerly waiting to read more...so the negative character is entering...ohho...!!!
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing... beautifully penned...
Cute N sweet Manan moments...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
manan part was soo cute
i like the way princess said nandu tht pechann thing
plz give some little happy time with manan
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Posted: 10 years ago
vry nce story...n cn u plz provide us vth an index vth ua chapterz...and Plz PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
hahaha m loving dis aatma thng
m founding it funny though but very cute n love has no boundaries awesome part ainah update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Story.
Nice Update.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update Barbie 🤗
its just fabulous ..at last some mystery is disclosing ...
do continue soon..

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