SPACE mein pyaar and dosti pt 17 page 16 29/9 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Such a cute story!!!
Continue soon!!!!
Plzz PM/Scrap me the story if u can!!![/QUOTE . Yeah sure I will...thank you for liking the story...I will upload the next part now 😊
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Originally posted by: doll12345

Ur wlcm dear !!!
I m just waiting for next part of your story!!!
Update fast!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okkkhhh guys so here is the next part ...its gonna be a short one...hope u like it 😊😊
Chapter 4:-
At maniks home:-
"Arre woh light teekbse lagana ...kamchor...aur mujhe sirf purple flowers chahiye...aur alcohol tohda kum Lana nandini aur navya peethe nahi hai..."manik was shouting to all his servent...
At nandinis home:-
"Tumhe pata hai humere paas pehene ke liye kuch nahi that hum abhi abhi shopping karke aaye hai ...him yeah pehenege "navya told this showing a blue dress with golden works
Mukthi "hawww ...itni beautiful hai ...mene toh kuch simple try kiya hai ...waise bhi varun nahi ah raha he ..toh I'm gonna wear this "she told with a sad wala expression holding a red crop top and a blue jeans...
"Guys ...mujhe toh bas fabulous dikhna hai toh mein ye pehn rahi hun ...wat happened agar varun nahi toh mukthi...bakhe ladkein bhi hai nah...toh I'm gonna wear this she held a pink dress with black print in it...
Nandini was just listening to this as she was remembering the moments she spent with manik
Nandini POV : why am I even thinking about that duffer ...mujhe is love ki chakkar mein nahi padna ...duffer kahinka
End of POV
Haan guys mein ready home aathi hoon told nandoni holding her dress she came out with a marron shorts and a black jewelled top she had left her hair and put a puff ...she wore a black boot pair...then all of them got ready ...left for the party

Malbothra mansion:-
"Arre mein kya pehunu Sab bekar ka cheez hai ...navya ko impress bhi karna hai ...yeah ladkiyon ko impress karna me chakkar mein ek din skirt pehen ke jaoonga meri haalat itna khaarab hai "told cabir
All the others gave a laugh
"Yaaar mein toh much simple hi daloonga " told harahad
Manik came in and wore a black blazer and a white inners he was looking hot ...
In rose home :-
Ooo god mein bohat fat hogaye hun yeh dress mujhe fit hi nahi ho raha hai if my sweetie harshad see me like this he will breakup with me(rose is in a imaginary relationship with harshad )
All of them reach the party venue ...

Thatz it for now guyz rest I will post at night k???bye
-love manasa
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Yaar its fab update!!!
I just loved it!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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As I promised here is the next update ...let me make it a long one ...but remember to give me long comments
Chapter 4b
All the girls reached malhothra mansion :-
"Guys mein abhi aathi hoon car park karke ok tum log andhar jao" told nandini
She went to park her car she came through the door as she entered red flower petals fell on her it was not purposely "oooh shit ye kya hua ???"😕 manik looked at her he was on cloud 9 watching her she was lookin like an Angel ...he kept on looking at her "badi badi love stories mein esa chote chote baatein hothi rehtein he manik babu "cabir interrupted his staring and started teasing manik manik gave an angry look
Manik POV
I'm gonna have u today nandini ...u will be mine tonight ...I don't love u but I'm obsessed with u and tum sirf mere pane ke zidd ho and today u will be in my bed I'm sure of that ...and remember MANIK MALHOTHRA doesn't love anyone not even bloody u
End of POV
They all were partying with full on masti ...dhruv proposed alya ...they became dhrulya that day and planned of spending the night together ...all were very happy for them ...mukthi was constantly calling Varun he didn't receive and she was dull although the party abhi came near her and asked wat was the matter she nodded and went away from there ...cabir was dancing with navya and flirting with her while harshad and rose intertwined their fingers and rose was clicking selfies with him to post and show off...they all went to the practice room to practice the y all started singing manik sang first
Mere maula maula mere maula manvathvala kyu huva re man maula maula mere maula mere maula
Kis taraf he aasman kis taraf zameen khabar nahi ...blah blah and nandini sang
Aaayega woh is intezaar mein ud chala dil waha sapne jaha mein jaaooon (she was remembering the moments with manik ...poor did she know she had feelings for manik
Lagtha hai won mere kareeb hai aaisa kyun hai magar doondein nazar bekhabu
Hosh gul sapnon ke mein bandu pul aakh kabb kulu khabar nahin
And the song ended all are going home while manik stops nandini giving an excuse of musical notes ...she was very happy as she wanted this to happen ...manik was happy because he's gonna have her tonight he had arranged everything in his room(I mean "everything*)
She followed him and went manik closed the door she got scared
"Manik tumne darwaza kyun band ki ??"she asked him with a frightened face
"Babydoll tume mein aaj paakhar rahunga ...u knw pure college ke ladke is back of u pur sirf manik malhothra can have u ...come to me letz do it "
"Manik I'm warning u mere paas mein bhi maat ana warna mein chillaungi ...dekho mein waise ladki nahin hun plzz stay away from me I beg u "she got frightened still more she tried not to cry
"Hahahahha bechari nandu no ones home baby jitna chillana hai chillao"he then held her bare waist and pinned her to the wall ...
She pushed him he pushed her to the bed and he pounced on her...
She moaned his name in a frightened manner "manik plz chodo mujhe darr lag raha hey I wanna go home plzz "
He then held her moist waist for the first time manik
was feeling different holding a woman's waist that feeling which never had come ...
He came near her right cheek and planted a plan kiss he then came to the left cheek and gave a kiss ...and then he came near her neck and gave a love bite ...nandini was in tears at that time ...manik thought of continuing wat he wanted to do but seeing her innocent scared face he got up from the bed she herself got up tooo
"MANIK ...TUMHE PAATA HAI UR THE WORLDS MOST DISGUISTING 3RD CLASS GUY I EVER MET ...TUM JITNE GIR SAKTHE THE MAINE DEKH LIYA HAI AAJ...DONT U EVER COME CLOSE TO ME EVER AGAIN ...I HATE U MANIK MALHOTHRA BATAN NAHI MEINE AAPNE DIL MEIN TUMHARE LIYE FEELINGS JAG RAHE THEY ...BLOODY HELL "she told tji and ran away from there ...
Manik was shattered listening to them ...he couldn't handle himself he sat on the bed ...he was so angry at that time ...he was messed up he went to the pool side and started having drinks ...he had tears he was frustrated
Nandini reached her home and cried the whole night she couldn't face herself infront of the mirrior she started talking of the love bites with her nails but it only hurted her more...she was shattered

In aliyas home :-
Dhruv u really love me o wat ???
Koi shakh sweetie
Then chalo nah letz do it I'm so excited
Dhruv opens his top and pants and push aliya to the bed he removes her clothes and they do it very hardly but passionately (dhruv jitna innocent dikhtha hai itna hai nahi woh innocent). Aliya covers herself with a blanket and even dhruv aliya sees him and smiles ...they have a lip lock I mean a French kiss
"Dhruv baby do u think manik loves nandini"
"I dnt think so jaan he is just opsessed with her and I'm sure he must have already had with her "
"What nandini and manik ...omg I dnt think so nandini must have allowed ...mujhe bohat dar lag raha hai dhruv I shld go and check on her baby bye she planted. a small kiss on his forehead ...she texts in the nh3 group
" jaldi nandini ki ghar reach fast ...ASAP ..all rush there
Nandinis home:-
Nandini was holding a sharp knife near her arms about to cut her nerves...
All the girls reach there. At the same time
"NANDINI STOP!!!!are u mad Pagal hogayi ho tum kya ??"
"Haaan I'm mad meine us manik par trust kiya he tried to harass me I hate him she told this and fell down on her knees all the girls go and tried consoling her
'Dekho nandini tunhe usse koi darne ko nahi ...ua brave girl nah aise situations athi jathi rrhthi hai come on don't cry now "told mukthi holding hr cheeks...
Yea baby aur manik hes a son of a frgt it he's bad and ua good and only bad people deserve to die not u told rose in a sad voice she had actually felt bad abt her
Delhi nandu tumhe maata rani ki kasaam agar aise harkat karegi toh pakka marenge tumhe ...told navy's
Nandini stopped crying they all have a group hug
*yaaron song plays *

Thats it guy ...please do tell me if u don't like it...ufff it was a long update byeee next part under construction

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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Yaar U write amazing!!!
I just loved this part!!!
Keep writing!!!
Continue Soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
love it please continue soon , aur ho sake to aaj hi update kar do because i cant wait.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Just loved it..but y NH3 group name...it should should be NH5 right
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#19
Hey did u miss Chap 3 or the numbering went wrong...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Hey numbered wrong...and awesome update..

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