SPACE mein pyaar and dosti pt 17 page 16 29/9 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fabulous👏
read all parts! Great !
Update asap! Today please ! Can't wait !
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Wowww... amazing... it's fab.. can u plz write an index so that it's easier to know on which page is the chapter it's a request .. update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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helloo!!!thankz for liking my story i will upload alll the parts as soon as possible
-love manasa 😊😊
chapter 5:-
the night was very long for nandini she was feeling so down ...she felt like suiciding but she couldnt leave her friends as she loved them a lt...😛
it was almos 2 days since nandini had come to college ...manik was searching everywer for her ...he was so worried for her he didnt no wat to do...mukti had warned him not to even think abou herhe was so helpless he had described the whole situation to his friends...
it was almost noon they had to practice as the concert night was just one day ahead...
nandinis home:-
aaiyappa parso concert ha aur mane toh practice bhi nahi khi she thought to herself ...she saw the mirrior she couldnt face herself but she tried to ...she applied an amount of makeup on her love bite ...or i can say hate bite for her ...she looked pale and dull...she wore a full sleeve top and a jeans she wora a stole to cover her hate bite ...and she left for college
SPACE:-
all the 2 bandds were in audi ...it was a dark room with orange dim lights ...dhruv and alya were sitting together and talking about last night ...cabir was trying a new rythm from his drums...mukthi and varun were talkimg in fun ...abhi was too jelous to see that scene...navya was checking her phone for insta updates...rose and harshad were cracking some funky jokes...while manik ws sitting and making his guitar strings alright...nandini entered with a loud yelling noice IM BACK GUYZZ all of them were amazed seeing nandini so relaxed and haopppy ...she kept her sling bag on the chair and told manik "chalo manik let practice we have a lot to com up with" all of them decided to do it the nandini way they had an awesome jamming session and then all of the m left for the cafeteria ...nandini was walking towards the cafteria in the corridor while someone pulled her inside a room and becuse of this force pull her stole had fallen down...the person who pulled her was none other than manik...he looks into her eyes shelook s back ...'hhooo yea dekho kaun aaya hai the great manik malhothra ...why did u pull me if u wld have called i wld have come ...ooo i knw why bcz u want to harass me nah like bfre no dnt worry u wanna do it letz do it chalo aaj raat mein ghar tumhare aajaungi ok keeep everything ready baby "she tell this and was about to leave she turns back to open the door while he notices her love bite it was bruised as she tried to remove it frm her nails...he took of her hair from the neck and touched her bruise she closed her eyes...he soothened it and a tear of his fell on her neck she suddenly opened her eyes and turned back and saw his tears and laughed and winked at hm*aaj raat mat boolna * she went away from there
in the canteeen :-
"im scared for nandini ...woh kuch alag hi behave kar rahi hai ..."told alya
dhruv held her hand and consoled her
'guys hume in dono ko thodha space dena chahiye ...so kya kehthe ho kal hum saab kahi bahar chale how about water park huun??toh plan set haa kal water park" told mukthi
"girls dont forget to brink ua biknis ok?tum logo ko sexy dikhna hai !!!" told harshad winking at rose

k guys i will upload the next part now only k ...😊😊😊😊 dont forget the long comments


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanya0612

Wowww... amazing... it's fab.. can u plz write an index so that it's easier to know on which page is the chapter it's a request .. update soon


thankz :i have alredy done that dear its in the character sketch page at the end 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Bikinis excited..
Nandini talking this way to manik that was not excepted.. I just loved it
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Chapter 6:-
The sunsetted very early today as if the day wanted the night to rise early ...manik was in his home wearing a white vest and black track pants...thinking about what nandini had told suddenly the door bell rang...he went to open the door to his surprise it was nandini murthy wearing a sexy dress and leaving her hair and all she was indeed lookin very hot and sexy manik opened his jaws seeing her...
Aise mat dekho Mr.malhothra ...mosquitoes jayenge aandar...and thn she pulled his collar and took him to the bedroom she pushed him to the bed and she fell upon him...
"Him log kal yehe stop kiye the nah continue..."
"Nandini...he moaned her name
"I'm sorry mujhe tumhe hurt nahi karna chahiye tha am really sorry I'm ready to do anything to make it up for my mistake ... ...mujhe maaf kar do...he was all in tears at that time... ..
Nandini was surprisd she went away from there without telling anything
Next day:-

All of them decide to go to the KYY WATER PARK it was a very expensive and huge water park ...
The guys were wearing their ths and had sat near the pool some we're in the pool SME near the pool ...then the girls entered one by one...first of all rose...harahad ka fuse usse dek ke ud gaya tha...she ws wearing a one piece bikini which was yellow and black in color
Then came mukthi she wore a green two piece bikini ...
Then came navya she two wore a two piece which was multicolored she had a shrug for that and then aliya a one piece pink color...sab ladke ladkiyon ko dekh ke unle dimaag mein songs bajne lage ...but one guy was desperately searching nandini he couldn't even ask the girls as were she was...suddenly a girl wearing very tiny shorts and a purple bikini top with netted crop top upon it came there all the guys in the lark started staring at her...she was uncomfortable...but she was like who Cares...all of them jump into the pool except nandini as she is scred ...someone from the back came and pushed her to the water "bachaao bachaoo mein doobh jaaooingi " manik held her "this is just 5 feet pool how can u even drown in it" nandini gave a weird expression they all took lots of selfies they went through the slides and had lot of fun ...then they all went to the changing rooms ...there was a corridor which joined the boys changing room and the girls changing room ...nandini came out wearing a pink floral dress she was looking sooo damn pretty as she came to the corridor she was trying to dry her hair ...due to this her back could be seen as it was a backless dress ...a gang of guys came to touch hr back while manik held their hands And punched him very hard his nose started bleeding ...then there was a massive fight ...nandini was trying to stop manik she took him out from there and yelled at him "tumhara problem kya ha ...I could've handled them myself tum mere life mein kyu aah rage ho???why can't u just stay out huh???"she told this and she goes from there
Manik POV
"Mein usse kaises bataao that I started liking her ...her smile ...her eyes her everything
End if POV
Then all of them start walking towards the stage the manager requests fab5 and nh3 to play a song they tell k...
They sing Kaise bataon tujhe...
All of them applauded .,...

"Jaldi ready ho jao flight kisi be waqt nikla hoga aur ghante mein reach hojayega soo fast fast ...told mukthi as it WS late for their flight to Dubai ...the seats was all set ...unfortunately ya fortunately all the couples got to sit together ... manik was mesmerised to see nandini as she wore something Indian a long skirt and a top and a shawl with colorful bangles ...

They all sat in the flight ...
Precap :- 2 bands in Dubai...concert night...manan to express their feelings...nandini to be kidnapped for more drama stay tuned to my story will update asap ...love u guys
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing.. loved it.. update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it yaar
too good
Manik felt sorry oh that's good
Eagerly waiting
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Next part jaldi yeh perfect hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello guys !!!!im back with another part hope you like it ...dont forget to comment...it keeps me motivated to write the next parts ...😊😊😊
chapter 7:-
all of tthem boarded flight ...cabir and navya sat together ...aliya sat next to dhruv they were romancing all through out their journey ...harshad and rose sat together they were taking a lot of selfies {this rose i tell u 😡} ...abhi and mukthi and varun sat in 3 seats ...abhi seeing mukthi and varu was burning in jelousy .nandini came in she was im an angry mood as she had to sit next to the one whom she hate the most ...she came and sat next to him he was wearing his headphones and listening to music he did as if he didnt care her sitting next to him ...the whole journey the same ignorance happened...
they all reached dubai ...they took 2 cabs and reached their hotelwhere they had to stay the hotel was very dirty at first it had pests all over there wer 4 rooms booked...aliya and nandini slept in a room ...cabir and manik in one room...dhruv and harshad and abhi shared a room...mukthi navya and rose shared a room...varun was spending this weeek with his aunt and uncle who stayed at the same place he even asked mukthi to come but she refused as she wanted to stay with her friends ( and maybe abhi tooo⭐️)
first day they did all sight seeing and all they came home late at night after partying hard ...nandin and aliya came exhausted to their rooms ...they switched on their acs and wore their night dress and sat on the bed having icecream..."tum teek ho nah nandini ...u r fine nah ua acting weirdly with all of u s we know ua hurt ...but still??
"aliya am fine ...just yeh realise hua ki ladke sirf ladkiyon ko cheat karna hi jaante hai !!"replied nandini with a sad voice
"sab ladke ese nahi hothe nandini...see dhruv now he lovves me nah ...kuch log bohat acchee hothe hai..."told aliya giving a faint smile
"haaa sab aise nahi hothe ...dhruv is really sweet tum dono bohath beautiful couple ho"
"aur manik??...i mean when did this all start...wen did u even fell for him??"asked aliya with a questioning look in her face having her last bite of icecream
"mujhe khud bata nahi wen i fell in love with him...*she had a tear in her eye*aur usne kya kiya he took my heart and squashed *she did a gesture of it* it aur fekh diya usne"...she finished the line
"u know what i feel aliya us hot girls we have been cursed by those guys who run behind us...humara pura love life screw hojayega " and they both laugh

maniks room:-
"manik ...mujhe aisa kyun feel ho raha hai khi u a feeling bad for harassing nandini"
"im feeling guilty a loot mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha cabir...i love her cabir i shldnt have done that"he had tears in his eyes
cabir was shocked listening to this


the next day concert night


everyone got ready and came out manik wore a black coat and a white shirt he was looking damn hot ...cabir wore a white shirt (white and black was the code dress)...abhi wore a white vest...harshad wore a white coat covering tilll his chest...dhruv wore something similar...mukthi had woren a white dress...aliya had done the same...navya and nandini wore a white gown ...and rose wore a blac and white stripped dress...they all went to the stage and sang songs all the audience loved ttheir performance and they all got to stay one night in the burj kalifa suites 😃😃...all were very happy...they hugged each other manik and nandini were about to hug but suddenly realised it and stepped back...

all of them went to party in the bar they had free drinks in the hotel fo r their performance ...all of them drank a lot... a girl came near them aand spoke in a british accent
"hey u indians ...u wanna compete with me for some shots...letz see who wins"the girl told
"i will compete with u u b*****..."screamed mukthi
"noo i will"a girl voice came from back ...it was none other than nandu ...she had never drunk so much in her life
"tum pagal ho gayi kya nandu tum kuch aisa nahi karoge"
"haan navya sahi bol rahi u dont have to do ths"told manik...
"i didn ask for ua advice mr.malhothra and u cant decide anything about my life"
manik felt sad after hearing this...

they both sit in the respectiv e seats the crowd had gathered they start drinking they complete some 30 shots nandini does another 2 extra so she wins she was fully drunk everyone alloed manik to handle her becuse onoly he couol handle her 😊😊
precap:-
drunk nandini ...romantic movements between manan...nandini kidnap etc etc


P.s:- i wont post the next part until u give me comments which mtivates me ...

im sorry if this part was borig huh agla part accha lekungi pakka ...okay thanks bye
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