SPACE mein pyaar and dosti pt 17 page 16 29/9 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys sorry I couldn't post anything...actually this weeks episode was so freaking good that i ws lost in manan world ...sorry for that ...i will post now k
-love manasa ...
Chapter 9:-
Someone had held nandus mouth and had taken her to a dark room with dim lights...
"Ssshhh ...agar awaz kiya nah ...I will murder u here only..."told the guy
Nandini had heard this voice smwer ...she knew it was someones who knew her and she knew him ...she bit his hands and turned back to see him...it was aryamaan ...her childhiid sweetheart ...she and he were together since 2nd std...they were best of friends ...but he choosed in talking since instead of music this seperated them ...she was smilong with all her possible teeth ...he smiled back...
By that time manik had come searching for nandini and found her there...aryamaan was holding nandus hands very hardly...hewas so angry...he punched him hard on the face..."how dare you to touch nandini ...woh sirf mere hai...samjhe u can't touch her..."...nandini as well as aryamaan was shocked to hear this ..."STOP IT MANIK!!!yeh mere cousin hai...watz wrong with u...nandini replied...manik was shocked listening to this "I'm so sorry...I..I ...didn't kn...ow...I'm so..soo..sorry...manik told this and went from there...nandini and aryamaan hug ...
Nandu goes to maniks room ..."woh Jo bhi tumne bolo kya who sach tha???..."nandini asked hesitantly..."nahi woh bus Maine...isliye bolo kyunki...I thght ...why shld I even give an explanation to u ...jao yaha se...Pagal ladki...manik told this and pushed nandu out and locked the door...nandu left from there...
All of them returned to India...all were so happy ...they all decided to party...all of them got invitation card from nyonika...
*PARTY AT MY PLACE...
SHARP :-7:00 ...BRING UA DATES WITH YOU...
VENUE..MALHOTHRA farmhouse *
Cabir got the invitation and rushed to navya..."navya navya ...please meri date banjaoo...please ..."some girls who heard this were hell jealous ...navya politely accepted to male them more jealous ...cabir started dancing with joy...in excitement...he kissed her cheeks...she was blushing a lot... Dhruv had already asked alya abt the date and she refused as they were fighting ...so she went and requested harshad to be her date...and dhruv with no choice asked rose...they both were pissed of with each other ...mukthi was going with dhruv and abhi was coming with some girl...

Guyz datz it for now I will upload the next part after some time...
Precap:-
Varun breaking up with mukthi...
Manik proposed nandu...
Bye guys
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Amazing ... update soon ... I'm waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its awesome next part plxz its so short
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Posted: 10 years ago
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bas ittu sa update
pls cont soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 10:-
the party was a fabulous one...the arrangements were done perfectly ...

all of them were enjoying to the core...cabir was fully drunk and dancing on the dance floor like a total idiot and navya was enjoying seeing him like that she went close to him and asked "tum teek ho nah cabir?" cabir nodded saying yes ...and cabir held her waist saying lerts dance and navya joined him for the idiotic dance ...dhruv had come with rose and alya with harshad...dhruv to make alya jelous he pulled rose more close to him...alya was so pissed off that she left harshad and went to the bar counter and started drinking...seeing this dhruv joined her dhruv was drinking a lot and alya was trying to stop him and then she took him to the room so that he could rest but he wanted to "enjoy"...here manik and abhi were disguissing about "all the hot chicks around"...at the saame time mukthi came with varun she was looking very sexy ...blue dress and white embroidery...abhi saw mukthi and was laalalala..and then he saw varun next to her kissing heer hair he was damn pissed off so he took a beer botttle and started drinking...maniks eyes were continuosly looking for nandini after some 15 mins she gave an outstanding entry wearing just an awesome entry...she was wearing a beautiful black hi-low dress and heels

manik was about to go out of the party at the same time he thought he could pick her up he suddenly collided with nandin "uffo diktha nahi hai kya!!forget it im sorry "manik told nandu and looked up to see her he was about to faint seeing her "beautiful"came out of his mouth on its own šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†..."nandini"ua late ...
"im so sorry manik woh ready hone mein late hua..."or tumhara date kahan hai nandini ?"asked manik
"woh manik...mere paas koi date nahi hai "she made a sad pout ...manik was very happy hearing this he came near her ears and asked "nandini murthy kya tum mere date banoge?" nandini nodded saying yes
they went to the dance floor and started dancing...the song played

Kaise Bataoon Tujhe lyrics

Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha
Rahe na faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan

Ho...
Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha
Rahe naa faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan

Tere qareeb main ho sakoon
De de tu apni razaa
Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish
Ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe{nandini was blushing listening to the lyrics as manik kept on seeing her smile...that smile which could kill anyone }

Ho ho...

Tujh se mohabbat hui
Hai meri hai bas ye khata
Tujh se main door rahoon
Yeh mujh ko gawaara kahaan
Main tere saath mein hi rahoon
Chhodo ye saara jahaan

Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish
Ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe woh ho ho...

Ho ho...

Ho ho wo ho... Ho ho wo...
Teri adaaon mein doob loon
Doob loon main tujhi mein
Ho jaaun tere itne qareeb
Ki main dikhoon ab tujhi mein{they were so close to each other now that hey could feel their warm breaths...}

Paas bithaoon ye zulf sawaaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe
Ho ho...

the song ended manik knelt down on his knees ...cabir,navya,mykthi,abhi,shruv,varun,aliya,rose,harshad came and encircled them...manik saw nandini and they had an eyelock
"nandini i know ke maine tumhare saath bohatth galath kiya...but im very guilty about that...after the incedient ...mujhe kabh tumse pyaar hogaya batha hi nahi chala...I LOVE YOU NANDINI,I LOVE YOU VERY VERY MUCH...aur mein tumhare bina mar jaonga"all were astonished nandini was beyond amazed she knelt down and cupped his face and gave a kiss on his forehead and cheeks...suddenly cabir screamed"ab bas yaar bakhi khi cheeze upar kamre mein kare toh acha hoga hum sab kiliye ...woh kya hai nah ...mein baccha hun aur mein adult cheeze nahi dekhtha"all heard this and laughed a lot nandini hit cabirs stomach playfully and turned to manik and told back i love you to manik humesha ...manik was too happy to hear this ...navya in happiness held cabirs hand and hugged him "navya i love you "told cabir "yeh dekho aur ek love story shuru hua "...mukthi told all laughed navya hugged him and replied i love you to cabir...all were happy that day and for mukthi she was holding varuns hand and coming near poolside they dipped their legs and she kept her head in his shoulders"baby...i love you a lot"mukthi told"mukthi...woh..mein...tumse pyar nahi kartha..im moving from india and i love someone else...so bye"he left from there mukthih heard this and was shattered...she was about to loose balance due but abhimanyu came and catched her at the right moment..."mukthi sambhal apne aap ko im with you always baby ...just dont fall aprt for some jerk...mukthi hugged him so tightly that all her shattered pieces came together...she was smiling and hugging him...that was the best moment in life for both of them...the party was over manik dropped nandini home...nandini informed her mom dad chacha chachi and her parents her bro about manik they were all happy ...
AFTER 6 MONTHS :-
precap:its been 6 months manik and nandini they were the star couple of space ...abhi and mukthi bffs ...and all others you know , musicana night sohas entry , sad scenes 😭
😭
i didnt post for a lot of days so i did make a long update ...hope you guys enjoy it ,love you all



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Panifan

Its awesome next part plxz its so short


thank you so much next part updated read it ...and its a long one dont forget to comment 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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updated read it and do comment
-loads of love manasa
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaumudisss

bas ittu sa update

pls cont soon😊


hahahaaa ...updated a new part and yeh bada hai thankz a lot and do comment šŸ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW AWESOME UPDATE CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
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JUST LOVED IT!!!!!
IT WAS JUST AWESOME,
CONTINUE ASAP

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