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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plxxz god let it be cabir. ..
Plzzz god naddiya. ..

I mean hell scared. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Jzt awesome story...
Interesting one...
Plz cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I hope dats cabir... continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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im in love with your writing! loved the update and the way Manik was taking care of her was really beautiful! Continue soon :)
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"you are not Manik " she look at him with her big eyes and said " who are you?" she poke him " i was on bike how i came here in car " she said and vomit right on his shirt

"oh God why i brought her with me ?" he look at himself and stop the car

"i am feeling sick call Manik he knows how to help me" she said and puke again

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Posted: 10 years ago
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tense wala ... pukish wala ...promo naddiya 😉
waiting... WAITING...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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He he new guy
Poor he puke ...!puke...!😉
Update soon
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Manik gave hand to car it stopped ,he knocked at the window " please help i need water " Manik said

" i dont have water or soft drink " the guy role down the window and said ,he passed him a bottle

" anything will do " Manik grab the bottle and Manik ran to Nandini " drink this " he made her drink

"Manik what is this ?" Nandini made face he look at her hand and clean it with it

"hello you are wasting my drink " the guy poke on his shoulder ,he grab the bottle and from his and without giving him time drives away

" you take money and give me this "Manik search his wallet " oh shit i left it at home "

"Manik he went " she said "he left us and you didn't too help " she made face and said

"what the hell ? you took only 2 sips and you are gone " Manik pat her face ,she blink her eyes

"Manik you are 2 " she caress his face and said

" oh God " he hold her

"Ahhh Manik it hurts na see " she showed him her arm

" how to take you to farm house" he picked her up started walking

"Manik , Manik, Manik "she caress his face " a car" she said and clap her hand

"i will stop it " he made her stand and give hand to stop it "

"Manik ,Nandini " Pandit hit the break ,he look at Manik

"Manik he is that guy " Nandini hold his arm and said

"shhh" Manik placed his finger on her lips and said he held her hand

"Aaahhh Manik it hurt na " she cried with pain Pandit slightly lower the window

"Pandit something has bitten her i need your help " Manik closed his fist and control his anger and said

"so what can i do ?" Pandit said

"you drop us on near highway " Manik said

"you think i will take you with me " Pandit said

Nandini sat on road "Manik it hurt so much Aayyappan " she cried with pain he look at her and then at Pandit

"Pandit see she is in pain "he sat next to her and tried to see her hand in car light Pandit switch off it"Pandit let me see na " Manik said in frustration she held his shirt " Manik " she cried

" Manik i will drop Nandini at her home "Pandit said , Manik look at him

"what ?" Manik said

" i will only take Nandini with me , if you like make her sit in my car , you have only 2 mins " Pandit said and start the car

"No Manik will come with me " she clench his shirt ,Manik look at her arm it has turn red

"Nandini you go i will come on bike " Manik tried to free his shirt from her hand

"then i will come on bike too with you " she placed her head on his heart and wrap her arm around his neck

"30 second left " Pandit said

Manik look at her hand , he picked her up "Nandini i am coming " he peck her and made her sit on back seat ,she pull him he fall on her

" come " she caress his face and pout ,she look at Pandit he had something in his hand he bang it on Manik head , he fall right on Nandini

"Manik" she hug him " Manik " she shakes him and placed her hand on his wound

"what you did to Manik ?" she caress his face as he was lying on her

"leave him " Pandit pull him out

"no why i leave him ?"she pull him to her "Manik" she pat him he slowly open his eyes "Nandini leave him or i will throw him down hill and you will never ever see him again in life " Pandit pull him with full force

"never " she let him go slowly their lips brush each other ,he drag him out of car and throw him on road

"now you sit here " he locked the door and closed it Nandini look at Manik lying on road

"Manik ,you killed him " she started crying and open window and hang out "Manik

"shut up get in " Pandit shouted Nandini made sad face and started watching out of the car "Manik come na " she sob

"Nandini i will take you to Amm's" Pandit said she was hanging her head out and like a small kid . as Pandit hit break she bang with the front seat , she look back at him

"you are not Manik " she look at him with her big eyes and said " who are you?" she poke him " i was on bike how i came here in car " she said and vomit right on his shirt

"oh God why i brought her with me ?" he look at himself and stop the car

"i am feeling sick get me lemon like Manik " she said and puke again

"what Lemon?" Pandit look at her and made disgusting face



Manik gain his conscious, he tired to figure out where he was "Nandini " he search her and rub his head he sat on road he look around in dark " that B*****" he stand he saw a car coming near him , he gave hand

"Manik " Cabir and Dhruv shouted together

"if Manik is here they where is Nandini?" Cabir said as he stopped the car

"That Pandit took Nandini" Manik sank on back seat and said

"where he took her ?" Cabir said

"i dont know but his car was going that side " he said Cabir start the car he saw something on the road

"Dhruv go get that " Cabir said ,as Dhruv came back and gave to Manik

"it is her's "he look at the clip that he gifted her " he had took her this way " she throw it so i can follow her " he held it tight in his fist




"Nandini sit in car now you are fine ?" Pandit said

" no no " she puke

"Oh God " Pandit look at himself and at Nandini


"Manik come i dont have more things to show you the way " she said




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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
great update
Grrr Manik out of helplessness asks help from creepo
But creepo hits manik and throws him on the road
Hope manik comes there as car has stopped
glad Cabir and Dhruv came there
And Nandu very smart leaving the things behind her for manik to rescue her
Hope they reach there soon
Thabks for the update
Well written

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