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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Nice update and interesting promo, waiting to know whose on the car, update soon pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
nadiya watever u write u write awwsome 😊
soo plzzz u continue both ff's...we r waiting egarly😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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" Nandini sit straight and stop being a coward " Manik scold her

"Manik this is same car which is following us for quite sometime " she held him more tight and said she search his pant's pocket
"Nandini " he lost his control on bike
"where is your cell i all call Cabir ?" she said
"i put it in your purse and gave them to bring it" he said
"you are genius Manik " she look back at the car as it has come more close to them , Manik too look back he could not see who was driving ,he increased the speed , she held him as tight as she could , it was dark and deserted road Manik was regretting why he came alone at this hour
"Nandini talk to me " he said she placed her head next to his back and her hand on his heart
" i am enjoying the ride " she said "Manik i guess the car has stop following us " Manik decrease the speed
"how you know here stars and flies look so amazing ? " she asked him
"Shit " Manik said as the bike stop suddenly
"What happened ?" she asked
" i don't know " Manik said and both get down he held her hand
"it is so dark in here " she held his shirt Manik sat down and check it's plugs
" i don't know much about bikes , i am idiot " he tried to start the bike
"Manik what we will do now ?" she said they saw the car headlights
"come here " he quickly hide the bike in bushes and pull Nandini with him
The car had slower it speed ,it passed them
"it is the same car which was following us "Manik said
" who was driving ?" Nandini asked
" i was not able to see " Manik said
"now what we will do ?"Nandini said " how far is farm ?" she asked
"Shhh" he placed pull her in his arm as he saw the car came back

"when they didn't pass you ? how can they vanish ?" someone talked on the phone and passed them
"It was Pandit right " Manik asked her the car park on road side
" you are fool , i am sure there must be some other road which Manik has taken " he shouted on phone " i will call Nyonika and asked her " he said
"Nyonika is with him " Manik said he tries to get up but Nandini stopped him and pull him back , her hand brush with bushes and thorn pierce her sink ,she held his both arm's tight "no"
Pandit drives back
"Nandini we will walk " Manik said and made her stand ' i will hide this bike here " he quickly did " i am so sorry as because of my carelessness we are stuck here "


At Farm house
"why they haven't reached ? " Cabir dialed his number , it started ringing in car " what the hell ? Manik left his cell in bag " he checked bag and finds Nandini's too
"May be they had plan it ? " Mukti said
" it is the foolish plan " Cabir said in anger , he was hurt and too so one has send goons for him "Dhurv your bike had petrol ?" Cabir asked him
" Oh God " Dhruv removed his cap "i took out one plug and gave Manik driver to clean it , i placed old for time being"
" i am dam sure the bike has betrayed him " Cabir grab the key " you girls go to sleep " Cabir said and quickly drive away with Dhruv
" we don't know which way he had selected to come " Cabir said


"Nandini i have spoiled everything " he hold her hand in his and they both walked on side of road " as soon as we will see car light we will step down ok" he said
"OK " she said in weak voice
"are you scared Nandini? he wrap his arm around her
"Manik i guess something had bitten me bushes " she said
"what? where ? " he stand still and hold and tried to see her in dark
"my arm when i pulled you ?" she said and showed him ,he wasn't able to see anything in dark he picked her up in his arm and started walking fast " i will sure find some place ,you talk to me" he kissed her head as she wrap her arm around his neck and rested her head on his shoulder
" i am thirsty " she lick her lips her throat was getting dry ,he started running on the edge on road he finds a light post , he made her lie down and look at her hand , he finds thorns he carefully pluck it out of her arm "Nandini" he pat her cheek "Pani " she said and lick her lips ,he kissed her softly , she opened eyes and look at him
"where to find water here ?" he saw a headlights " even if it is him i will take help " Manik picked her up in his arm
"no Manik don't he will take me to Germany " she said
"what " he look at her the car stop next to him



this story will have short updates not like my other FF


Edited by naddiya26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
you're my fav!
this piece of urs has successfully found its place on top of my 'fav. list' ;D ;D
love ur writings! .. after nandini's shadow .. this one has stolen my heart nd mind too !!


update soon di :* :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
beautiful update
Awww both riding but bike breaks down
Both are scared
So it's Nyonika and creepo pandit
Otherside Cabir and others worried
Grrr both struggling in dark and poor Nandu gerting thirsty
Hope she doesn't faint
Hope they reach soon
Thanks for update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
its ok short update r also good as it is ss n u have to update two stories for us so we completely undrstnd it btw awesome update ur story is getting interesting dan the real show love u dear awesome update cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
OMG pandit u r dead now
manik gona kill u

awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
OMG...!!! I just loved it...
Like your other ff this one is also best...
From where do you get these wonderful ideas...hahaha
Update soon dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Plz hope he is cabir
awesome update
bushes scene was sooo lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
So manik got to know so many truth, nyonika is with pandit and pandit offered nandini to come to germany with him, also bring that chain into scene which the pandit gave to nandini and tried to put that on her, very nice update, waiting eagerly for next part
Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago

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